Fantasy Aditya@#The Dark Hunter#@

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Update 10
Bagh- kya hua manusya kya soch rhe ho jaldi kro mujhe bhukh lagi h
Mai- mai soch rha hu tum bol to sahi rhe ho prantu mai mans kaha se lau mujhe mans kanne ke liye kisi ka hatya to karna hi padega na
Bagh- kisi ka hatya kyu krna tum apna hi mans dedi
Hiran- nhi manusya tum aisa nhi karna tumhare jaise nek dil ko is dharti ki avasyakata h is liye mai hi iska bhojan ban sakta hu
Ab aage
Mai- nhi mere rahte aapko kuchh nhi hoga chahe iske liye mere pran hi kyu na chali jaye ( phir mai us bagh se bola) aap aaiye aur mujhe mar ke kha lijye mere khane se apka bhukh mit jayega
Bagh- nhi tum khud apna mans kat ke do jabtak mera bhuk na mit jaye
Mai- thik h

Phir mai apna khanjar nikala ye khanjar mai hamesha apne pass rakhta hu mai us khanjar se apna jangh ka mans kat ke de diya mujhe bahut pida ho rha tha aise manjar dekh hiran bhi rone lgi mai apna mans jab bagh lo diya to o use kha ke aur manga to mai dusre jangh ka mans bhi kat ke use de diya mujhe ab pida bardast nhi ho rha tha bagh ne us mans ko bhi kha ke mere taraf dekhne lga mujhe pide me dekh o bola
Bagh- mai pahle hi bola tha ki tumse nhi hoga ab lagta h mujhe apna bhukh use kha kar mitana hoga
Mai- nhi nhi mai apna mans kat kar tumhe deta hu use kuch mat karna

Phir mai dard se tadapte apne sarir ka sara mans kat kar bagh ko khila diya ab mera halat kharab ho gya tha ab mai marne hi wala tha mai dhire dhire behos ho gya ki achanak charo taraf roshani fail jati h aur us roshani se dhire dhire mera jakham bharne lagta h kuchh der me mai ab bilkul thik ho gya tha aur mujhe bhi hos aa gya tha jab mujhe hos aaya to dekha samne koi khada tha unke sarir se divya prakash nikal rha tha unka divyata dekh mai unhi me kho gya mera hath apne aap unke samne jud gya aur mai apne ghutno ke bal baith gya aur unko dekhne lga mai dekha ki unke sarir par mugya chhal h hath me trishul mathe par chandrama aur gle me nag ye dekh kar mai samajh gya ki ye kon h phir mai bola
Mai- hey mahadev (ha ye mahadev hi h) hey ishwar hey mere Aradhya apne mera jivan Shayna kar diya prabhu aaj mai apka darsan pake kritarth huya prabhu
Mahadev - utho putra mai aaj bahut kus hu ptra ki mera ans aaj o mahan karya kiya h jo aaj tak na koi kiya aur na aage koi karega
Mai- (mai na samajhte huye ) kon sa karya prabhu mai to aisa koi karya nhi kiya
Mahadev - (muskurate huye) ek hiran ke liye apna balidan dena ye to mahan karya hi huya na putra

Mai mahadev ka bat sun apne charo taraf dekhta hu waha pe na o bagh tha aur na hiran mai hairani se idhar udhar dekhne lagta hu jise dekh mahadev muskurate huye bole

Mahadev- tum idhar udhar kya dekh rhe ho putra kahi tum us bagh aur hiran ko to nhi dhundh rhe ho
Mai- (ascharya se ) apko kaise pta prabhu ki mai us bagh aur us hiran ko dundh rha hu ( phir apne sar par marte huye) chhama kare prabhu mai nadani me ye bhul gya ki mai kiske samne khada hu jo jinse puri sristi chalta h inse bhala kya chhupa lekin prabhu o bagh aur hiran kidhar gye
Mahadev- o ek mera maya thi putra mai tumhara pariksha lene ke liya ye maya racha tha mai aaj bahut khus hu putra ki tum mere pariksha me safal huye aaj ke jamane me log apne pariwar ke bare me bhi nhi sochte fir bhi tum ek hiran ke jan bachane ke liye itna dard sahte huye bhi apne pure sarir ka mans use de diye tum sache maine me rakshak ho tum aaj ye sidh kar diya putra
Mai - kaisa pariksha prabhu aur ye to mera kartva htha prabhu
Mahadev- mai dekhna chahta tha ki jo mera ans h aur jise babhisya me is sansar ka rakshak banna h o is yogya h ya nhi aur aaj tum ye sidh kar diya putra ki mai tumhe rakshak chun ke koi galti nhi ki h
Mai- mai apka ans aur bhabhisya ka rakshak mai kuchh samjha nhi prabhu
Mahadev- abhi tumhe is bat ko samjhne ka sahi samay nhi h putra lekin itna tum jan lo ki tum mera ans ho aur is sansar ka bhabhisya tumhare upar nirbhar h putra is liye ab tumhe bahut mehnat karna hoga putra tumhe apne aap ko is kabil banana hoga putra
Mai- jaisi aapki iksha prabhu
Mahadev- mai tumse bahut kus hu putra is liye mai tumhe ek vardan dena chahta hu isliye mango putra kya iksha h tumhari
Mai- prebhu mujhe kuchh nhi chahiye prabh na jane kitne rishi muni kitne varso se tak apka dhyan karte fir bhi apka darsan nhi hota aur mujh jaise tuksh prani ko itni asani seaapka darsan ho gya wahi mera bardan h prabhu mujhe ab kuch nhi chahiye
Mahadev- yahi tumhara swabhav to tumhe rakshak banata h putra prantu ye bhi stya h ki mera darsan kabhi byarth nhi hota putra is liye tumhe bardan to mangana hi hoga
Mai- mai ab kya bolu prabhu aapko jo dena h aaphi de dijiye
Mahadev- to thik h putra mai tumhe ye bardan deta hu ki ye panch tavya ki sakti jaise agni jal wayu dharti aur akash inki saktiya chahe o divya ho ya asuri tumhe isse koi hani nahi hogi aur tumhara sarir vajra ke saman ho jayega aur tum kitne bhi karya kroge kabhi thakote nhi tatha astu

Phir unke hath se ek sapt rangi raani nikal ke mere sine me samane laga mujhe bahut hi jyada pida ho rha tha phir thodi der bad pida kam ho gya Phir mahadev bardan dekar antradhyan ho gye aur mai phir waha asaram aa gya

 

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Update 11
Phir unke hath se ek sapt rangi kiran nikal ke mere sine me samane laga mujhe bahut hi jyada pida ho rha tha phir thodi der bad pida kam ho gya Phir mahadev bardan dekar antradhyan ho gye aur mai phir waha asaram aa gya
Ab aage
Mere sarir me kuchh parivartan aa gya tha mera sarir pahle se jayad majbut aur aakarshak ho gya tha masal bhi pahle se jyada ho gya tha thoda hight bhi bad gya tha ab wahi roj ke ruting ke anusar mai apna karya kiya pahle dhyan lagaya phir pahad ka chakra lagaya aa dodne me thakawat nhi hui ab gurudev mujhe 10 minat me 100 chakar lagane ko bole ab mujhe thakavat nhi ho rha tha to mai aram se 100 chakar pura kar liye isse gurudev mujhse kaphi prabhavit huye iske bad guru ji tir chalane ka abhyas karaye isi tarah se samay bit ta gya mujhe ghar ka bahut hi jyada yad aata tha jayada palvi ki yad aati thi isi tarah se panch sal bit gya
4 sal bad
Ab mai pure 10 sal ka ho gya tha aaj ghar se aaye huye mjhe 5 sal ho gya
Ab mai dhyan bhi kafi der tak laga leta tha mera sato chakara bhi kul gye the ab mai us pahad 10 second me 50 chakar laga leta tha mai kunfu joodo karata matial arts duniya ke jitne bhi ladai tha sab mai jan gya tha talwar chalana tir chalana tir to ab mai ek bar me 5 chala leta tha ninja weapon bhi ab mai chala leta tha mai sare guruwo se sara siksha le liya jitna o jante the ayurved me sansar ke jitne bhi jadi butiya tha sare ka gyan mujhe ho gya tha mai gurudev ke pass gya aur unhe pranam kiya
Mai- pranam gurudev
Gurudev- ashasvi bava putra mai tumhe aaj is liye bulaya h ki tum sare guruwo se siksha prapt kar liye jitna wo log jante the to ab kal tumhe pariksha dena hoga mai bhi dekhna chahta hu tum kitna sikhe ho
Mai- jo agya gurudev mai pariksha dene ke liye tatparya hu
Gurudev- to thik h putra tumhara pariksha kal pratah kal me suru hoga tumhara pariksha 3 charan me hoga jise tumhe par karna hoga
1 charan talwar baji ka jisme tumhe Nilesh se mukabla karna hoga
2 charan me joodo karata martials arts ka hoga jisme tumhe Manav se mukabla karna hoga
3 charan me budhi gyan aur tir danush ka hoga jo mai khud lunga
Mai- thik h gurudev mai pariksha dene ke liye taiyar hu
Isi tarah aaj ka din bit gya mai sone chala gya idhar gurudev rat me ek jagah gye aur ek tiliahma taiyar kiya aur phir asram me aa gye
Dusra din aaj mera pariksha hone wala tha mai bahut kus tha kyuki mai bhi dekhna chahta tha ki mai aaj tak jo itna mehnat kar ke shiksha liya hu uske bare me kitna janta hu mai fresh hoke aaya aur gurudev ke pass aa gya phir gurudev ke sath ek maidan ( field) me gya waha pahle se hi sare guru hamara intjar kar rhe the waha jane ke bad mai sare guruwo ko praman kiya fir gurudev bole
Gurudev- to putra tum taiyar ho prathan charan ke pariksha ke liye
Mai- ji gurudev
Gurudev- to suru karte h

Phir mai aage gya gurudev ne jadu se mere hath me talwar diye phir Nilesh bhi apna talwar leke mere samne khade ho gye to maine unhe pranam kiya phir nilesh bola
Nilesh- to suru kre aditya
Mai- ji gurudev

Mai aur nilesh amne samne khade the nilesh ne pahla war mujhe karne ko bole mai apna talwar pakda aur unke taraf bhagne laga mujhe apne taraf aate dekh o bhi taiyar ho gye ab dono ki talwar apas me takaray dono ke talwar kabhi der tak chalte rahe kabhi mai unke upar bhari padta to kabhi hamare bich keval talwar ke takarane ki dhwani utpan ho rhi thi ki achanak o slip kar ke mere pich ho gye aur mere pith pe war kiya agar mahadev ka wardan nhi hota to jarur mere pith pe kat lag jata lekin is tarah war karne se mera gusa badne lga ab mai unpe puri takat se war kar rha tha jisse unke sarir pe bhi bahut kat lag gaya tha ab mai is khel ko khatam karana chahta tha mai teji se unpe war karte huye aage bada ja rha tha aur wo mera war rokte huye piche ja rhe the ab mai unko war karne ka mauka hi nhi de rha tha ab mai ek last war karna chahta tha is liye mujhme jitni takat thi sab lga ke war kiya mera force itna tha ki unka talwar tut gya aur o piche jake gire aur mai unke gle pe talwar rakh diya sab log ascharya se hamlogo ka ladai dekh rhe the phir mai unko apna hath deke uthaya or bola

Mai- chhama kre gurudev apko kahi lgi to bhi
Itna sunte hi o mujhe apne gle se lga liye aur bole
Nilesh - mai aaj dhanya ho gya tumhre jaisa sisya pake
Mai- ye to mera saubhagya h gurudev jo aap mujhe is kabil banaye
Nilesh- ye tumhara kathin mehnat aur parishram ka phal h jo aaj tumne apna guru ko bhi hara diya mai ab Dave ke sath kah sakta hu ki tumhare jaise talwar baj bhabhisya me koi nhi hoga
Phir hamlog gurudev ke pas gye aur mai gurudev ko pranam kiya fir gurudev bole
Gurudev- ati uttam putra ati uttam tumne apna pahla pariksha pass kar liya putra mai ye nhi socha tha ki tum use hara doge lekin tum ye sidh kar diye putra ki sisya guru se bhi aage ja sakta h jante ho aaj tak ise talwar baji me koi nhi hara paya h aur tume use hara ke ye sidh kar diya ki tumse bada talwar baj bhavisya me koi nhi hoga

 

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Update 12
Phir hamlog gurudev ke pas gye aur mai gurudev ko pranam kiya fir gurudev bole
Gurudev- ati uttam putra ati uttam tumne apna pahla pariksha pass kar liya putra mai ye nhi socha tha ki tum use hara doge lekin tum ye sidh kar diye putra ki sisya guru se bhi aage ja sakta h jante ho aaj tak ise talwar baji me koi nhi hara paya h aur tume use hara ke ye sidh kar diya ki tumse bada talwar baj bhavisya me koi nhi hoga
Ab aage
Isi tarh ek pariksha me pas ho gya ab dusra pariksha tha Matiala arts aur funfu ka jo mere pratidawandi me Manav gurudev the fir gurudev ke aadesh se ham log maidan me aa gye ek taraf mai khada tha to dusre taraf Manav mai jhuk ke Manav ko pranam kiya to Manav ne bhi mujhe suru karne ko bola ab mai aage bada aur uchal kar flying kik mara Manav ko jo o badi asani se block kr diya aur fir Manav me ek panch mara mere pet me jisse mai piche jake gira fir mai apne aap ko sambhalte huye khada huya aur maine socha ab mujhe sawadani se fight karna hoga nhi to is tarah bahut jald hi mai har jaunga phir mai unke taraf bada is bar mai savdhan tha is bar pahla panch o mare to mai use block kar diya aur ghumkar ek kik unko mar diya jisse o thoda piche ho gye ab o bhi samajh gye the ki mujhe harana itna asan nhi h aur fir sambhal kar o aage bade fir dono me ladai satart ho gya bahut der tak dono me fight huya ab mai pareshan ho gya tha ab mai socha ki aise hi chalte rha to mai jit nhi paunga mai abhi sach hi rha tha ki ek kik mujhe lagi aur mai piche gir gya fir khud ko sambhal kar mai khada huya ab mai soch liya tha ki mujhe kya karna h o mere taraf aage bad rhe the mai bhi unke taraf apne speed me bhagne lga ab mai kabhi daye to kabhi baye ho ke unke taraf bad rha tha jisse o kanfuse ho gye ki mai unpe war kidhar se karunga abhi o kanfuse hi the ki mai unke piche chala gya aur piche se ek jabardast kik mara unke pith par o udte huye piche jakar gire ab mai unhe sambhalane ka mauka nhi dena chahta tha isliye apne spesd se unke pass gya aur unpe pancho ka barsat kar diya unko sambhale ka bhi mauka nhi mila last me o har man liye is tarah mai ye bhi pariksha pass kar gya ab tha tisra pariksha ke bari mai janta tha ki ye pariksha saral nhi hone wala h ab dekhte h aage kya hone wala h fir mai waha se guruji ke pass gya fir gurudev bole

Gurudev- ati utam putra tum ye bhi pariksha pass kar gye ab bari h rise pariksha ki aur ye pariksha tumhe saral nhi hone wala thik h
Mai - ji gurudev
Gurudev- jao thoda bisram kar lo iske bad mai batata hu aage kya karna h
Mai- jo agya gurudev

Phir mai waha se bisram karne aa gya fir gurudev Manav ke pass gye aur unhe apne heling power se thik kiya aur unko bhi bisram karne ko bole mai is fight me kaphi thak gya tha is liye bed par jate hi so gya mai 2 ghante bad jaga aur fresh hoke gurudev ke pass gya to gurudev bole

Gurudev- aa gye putra kar liya bisram
Mai- ji gurudev
Gurudev - to putra tisra pariksha ke liye taiyar ho
Mai- ji gurudev
Gurudev - to phir thik h is pariksh ke niyam ke bare me bta deta hu ye pariksha me tumhe ek tilisma ko todna h ye priksha 3 bhago me hoga pahle bagh me tumhe gyan ka pariksha hoga dusre me budhi ka tisre me dhanush vidya ka tino ek dusre se jude huye h tum ek bhag ko par karege tabhi dusre me ja skoge aur ha yad rakhna ye pariksha bahut khatarnak h isme tumhare jan bhi ja skti h is liye soch samajh kar jabab do tum ye pariksha ke liye taiyar ho
Mai- ji gurudev mai taiyer hu jayada se jyada kya hoga mera jan jayega yahi na mai kayar nhi hu jo jan jane se dar jau is liye mai taiyar hu gurudev
Gurudev- sabas mere putra mai tumse yahi sunna chahta tha prabhu ne tumhe rakshak chun ke koi bhi galti nhi kiye h aur ye pariksha sirf ek sisya ka hi nhi h putra ye pariksha ek guru ke gyan ka h viswas ka h
Mai- mai apka viswas nhi tutne dunga gurudev ye ek sisya ka bachan h
Gurudev- ati utam putra mai tumhe apna sisya bna kar bahut prasan hu aur ha putra is tilisma ke ant me ek vijay dhanus h wahi tumhe prapt karna h agar Vijay dhanus tum prapt kar liye to ye tilisma apne aap tut jayega
Mai- jo agya gurudev

Phir gurudev ne mujhe lekar waha se gayab ho gye aur pahuche ek gufa ke samne aur mujhe us gufa ke samne chhod kar o wapas chale gye mai thodi der gufa ko aise hi ghurta rha aur fir aage bada mai jaise hi us gufa me pahla kadam rakha ki mujhe koi anadar khich liya abhi mai ek purane kile ke samane kara tha mujhe bahut ascharya huya ki mai yaha kaise aa gya mai to abhi us gufa... Mai piche dekh to mera ascharya ko koi thikana hi nhi tha piche waha koi gufa hi nhi tha ab mai socha yani mai tilisma me pravesh kar gya hu ab mai piche to ja nhi sakta tha is liye aage badh gya us kile ki taraf thodi dur aage jane ki bad mujhe us kila ka darwaja najar aaya mai uske taraf badh gya ab mai us darwaje ke pass tha ab mujhe andar jana tha mai age bad ke darwaje ko push kiya darwaja asani se khul gya ab mai andar jane ke liye jaise hi apna kadam rakha ki mai udte huye piche ja gira mujhe aisa laga koi mujhe bahut jor se mara ho lekin samne koi nhi tha to mai fir se darwaje ke pass gya aur andar jane laga is bar fir koi mere chhati par mara jisse mai please pichhe ja gira ab mujhe gusa aane lga mai chilakar bola
Mai- kon h jo chhupke war kar rha h dam h to samne aao nhi to mujhe andar jane do
Tabhi ek karkash hasi ki awaj aai ha ha ha ha aur fir samne ek vishalkay aadmi prakat huya uske hath me ek talwar thi o dikhne me Ina khatarnak laga rha tha ki me fat ke hat me aa gyi fir mai himat kar ke puchha
Mai- kon ho tum aur mujhe andar kyu nhi jane de rhe ho
Admi- mai hu brambha rakshas mai yaha ka rakshak hu mere rahte yaha se koi andar nhi jayega samjhe balak
Mai- dekho mujhe andar jaruri kam h mujhe andar jane do nhi to tumhare liye thik nhi hoga samjhe
Brambha rakshas - ha ha ha ha pidi bhar ka ladka mujhe damki deta h mujhe tumpe daya aa rha h is liye bol rha hu wapas chale jao kyu apna jan dena chahte ho
Mai- dekho mujhe gusa aa rha h jo tumhare liye achha nhi hoga is liye bol rha hu mujhe andar jane do nhi to..
Brambha rakshas - nhi to kya tum mujhe maroge chalo ye saukh bhi pura kar lo aao maro mujhe

Uski bat sun kar mujhe bahut gusa aa ya is liye mai apna talwar nikal ke uske taraf bhagne lga aur uske pass pahuch kar ek jaordar war kiya mujhe bahut ascharya huya mai itna war kar rha tha lekin use kuchh nhi ho rha tha phir usne ek lat mara mere chhati par aur mai udta huya piche jakar gira jisse mujhe chot bhi aaya mai ab yaha mera bardan bhi kam nhi kar rha tha phir mai khada huya aur uske pass gya to o bola
Brambha rakshas - kyu marna chahte ho mai abhi bhi bol rha hu wapas chale jao tum jinda rahoge.
Mai- ek kam kro mujhe mar do ya fir andar jane do
Brambha rakshas - (ascharya se ) thik h tumhe andar jana h to mera tin sawal ka jabab dena hoga kya tum taiyar ho
Mai- ji kya sawal h
Barambha rakshas - are pahle sawal ka niyam to sun lo
Mai- ji boliye
Brambha rakshas- mai tumse tin prasna puchhunga tino ka sahi utar dena h e prasna me tin swal honge tino ka jabab dena h 1 prasna ka 1 minat samay milega yan 3 minat me 9 sawal ka jabab dena h agar ek bhi sawal galat huya tum apna jan kho baithoge to kya tum taiyar ho
Mai- ji mai taiyar hu sawal puchhoge

Mera itna bolte hi uske ankh se ek roshni nikali aur jaha mai khada tha waha ke jamin se takara gya dekhte hi dekhte mere charo taraf ek khai ho gya jiye sahajta huya lava tha jo usme chala jaye uska Hadi bhi na mile mujhe ye manjar dekh ke dar se halat kharab ho gya phir usne bola

Brambha rakshas- tum agar ek jabab galat diye to tum abhi jispe khade ho o tut jayega aur tum is lava me gir jaoge ha to pahla sawal suno aur iska jabab dhyan se dena ek minat ke andar
1. So jane par apna palak kon nhi mundra h, janam lene ke bad chesta kon nhi karta h , mrityu ke karib pahuchne par manusya ke sacha sathi kon hota h
Mai- sone ke bad jo palke nhi jhapkata o machhali h , janam lene ke bad anda chesta nhi karta , mrityu ke smaya manusya ka sacha sathi dan hota h
Brambha rakshak- sahi jabab ab dusra sawal
2. Samast praniyo ka atithi kon h, snatan dharma kya h, amrit kya h
Mai- samast praniyo atithi agni hoti h, nast na hone wala nitya dharma hi Sanatan Dharma h, gay ka dudh hi amrit h
Brambha rakshas- ati utam ab mera akhari sawal
3. Akela kon bicharta h, ek bar utpan hokar punah kon utpan hota h, videsh me manusya ka sath kya deta h
Mai- akela surya bicharta h , ek bar utpan hokar punah chandrama utpan hota h , videsh me manushya ka sath uska budhi deta h
Brambha rakshas- bahut khub bahut hi achha jabab diya tum apne gyan ki pariksha me utirna huye ab tum andar ja skte ho

Itna bolkar o waha se gayab ho gya aur mai use darwaje ke pass chala gya aur mai jaise hi us darwaje ko par kiya achanak mai ek room me aa gya mai charo tarf dekh to waha koi bhi darwaja nhi tha aur jis darwaja se mai andar aaya tha o bhi gayab ho gya tha abhi mai pura room me ghum ghum kar dekh rha tha ki achanak sarakane lagi mai ye dekh kar dar gya aur o idhar udhar darwaja dhundhne laga lekin waha pe sirf ek raushni aa rhi thi aur kuch aaine pade the ab mujhe kuchh samajh me nhi nhi aa rha tha ki mai kya kru mai pareshan ho kar idhar udhar ghum rha tha ki mera dhyan ek tarf diwal pe gya ek chota sa hera najar aaya to mai jaldi se uske pas gya aur dhyan se dekhne lga tabhi mere dimag me kabhi raushani to kabhi aaina to kabhi hera aane lga to mere dimag me ek plan aa gya aur mai jaldi jaldi se usko ek ke samne ek rakhne lga ab diwal bhi mere kafi najdik aa gya tha phir mai last wane aine ko raushani ke taraf kiya jisse o raushani ek aaine se dusre aaine me hote huye us hire par padi ki achanak

 

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Update 13
waha pe sirf ek raushni aa rhi thi aur kuch aaine pade the ab mujhe kuchh samajh me nhi nhi aa rha tha ki mai kya kru mai pareshan ho kar idhar udhar ghum rha tha ki mera dhyan ek tarf diwal pe gya ek chota sa hera najar aaya to mai jaldi se uske pas gya aur dhyan se dekhne lga tabhi mere dimag me kabhi raushani to kabhi aaina to kabhi hera aane lga to mere dimag me ek plan aa gya aur mai jaldi jaldi se usko ek ke samne ek rakhne lga ab diwal bhi mere kafi najdik aa gya tha phir mai last wane aine ko raushani ke taraf kiya jisse o raushani ek aaine se dusre aaine me hote huye us hire par padi ki achanak
Ab aage
Achanak Hira chamakane lga aur uske chamak se puri room me raushani failane lga dekhte hi dekhte pure room me raushan bhar bhaya ab mujhe kuchh bhi dikhai nhi de rha tha fir dhire dhire raushani kam huya to mai dekha ki mai ek dusre jagah pe khada hu mai charo taraf dekha to mai ek bahut hi bada room me tha aur us room ke last me ek jagah pe dhanush rakha huya tha usse dekh mai bahut khus huya mai khusi me uske taraf badh gya mai jase hi apna kadam aage rakha to udhar se andha dhundh tiro ka barish hone lga mai ye dekh kar phir parsan ho gya mai jhidhar bhi pair rakhta udhar se tir mere taraf aata kai kisi taraf khud ko bachaya aur idhar udhar dekhne lga mujhe kuchh samajh me nhi aa rha tha ki mai yaha se kaise aage badhu fir mai dhyan se ek ek chij ko dekhne lga to dekha ki niche kuch is tarah ka khana bana h


Mai us khane ko dhyan se dekhne laga to fir mere dimag me ek sujhao aaya fir mai idhar udhar dekhne laga to mujhe pas me kuchh pathar dikhe to mai usme se ek pathar liya aur ek khane pe dal diya jaise hi mai pathar waha par rakha to kuch tir nikal ke aai aur us pathar pe laga aur pathar bispot ho gya mai ye dekh ke bhagwan ka lakh lakh sukriya karne lga ki mai mai us khane pe nhi gya nhi to mera kya hota phir mai ek aur pathar laya aur dusre khane par rakha lekin waha kuchh nhi huya phir mai jakar kuchh jayada pathar laya aur aage badh gya mai isi tarah chek karte karte us khane ko par kar gya aur par karye hi wo khane gayab ho gye aur mai aage badha ab mere aage vo Vijay dhanus rakha huya tha mai khusi khusi aage badh ke us dhanus ko uthane laga jaise hi mai use uthane ke liye apna hath uspe rakha ki mujhe ek jhatka lga aur mai piche ja gira mai phir se uthke uske pass gya aur dobara use uthane laga to mujhe fir jhatka laga aur mai piche ja gira mujhe girte hi ek thahake ki hasi ka avaj aa ha ha ha ha ha ha aur waha ek rakshas aa gya aur haste huye bola

Rakshas- ha ha ha ha mere rahte huye tum is dhanus ko nhi le ja skte bache
Mai- kon ho tum aur mera rasta kyu roka hat jao mere raste se nhi to achha nhi hoga
Rakshas- mai is dhanush ka rakshak hu murkh aur tum mujhe yaha se hatne ko bol rha h lagta h tumhe apna jivan se pyar nhi h jo yaha marne aa gye
Mai- dekho mai pyar se bol rha hu mere raste se hat jao nhi to khi aisa no ho ki tumhe bad me pachhtane ka mauka bhi na mile
Rakshas- tumne bahut bol liya murkh balak ab apne aja bhugtne ke liye taiyar ho jao

Itna bol ke rakshas ek talwar ka ahwahan kiya aur mere taraf aage badh gye mai dekh apna talwar nikal liya aur usse ladne lga hamare bich bahut der tak ladai huyi lekin ladte ladte o thak gya aur mai jaise ka taisa tha phir mai udte huye ek flying kik mara use jisse o udte huye piche ja gira ab jab o dekha ki mujhe jit nhi payega to mere upar aag se hamla karne laga lekin mujhe to bhagwan shiv ka vardan tha is liye mujhe uske aag se koi farak nhi pada o bahut der tak hamla karta rha aur mai bas khada khada muskurata rha jab o dekha ki mujhe kuchh nhi ho rha h to o bola
Rakshas- dekho mai is dhanus ka rakshak hu is liye mai tumhe anumati nhi de sakta ise le jane ke liye lekin ek rasta h jisse tum is dhanus ko paa sakte ho
Mai- kaisa rasta tum mujhe batao mai karne ko taiyar hu

Mera bat sun o muskurane lga aur man me sochne lga tum apne app ko bahut chalak samajh rhe the bachu ab pas gya na mere jal me
Rakshas- tum yaha dhanus lene aaye ho to tumhe ye sidh karna hoga ki tum is dhanus ke kabil ho ya nhi
Mai- mai taiyar hu ye sidh karne ke liye mujhe kya karna hoga
Rakshas- tumhe dhanus vidya ka pariksha dena hoga
Mai- mai taiyar hu

Fir usne apna hath ghumaya to mai dekha ki samne ek dhanus aur tin ban aa gye aur kuchh dur par ek bada sa mani tha jo gol gol ghum rha tha fir o bola

Rakshas- wo Jo samne tumne mani dikh rha h na bache usi ko tumhe bhedne h aur use bhedne ke liye tin mauka milega aur agr tumne tin bar me ise bhed diya to tumhe o dhanus mil jayega aur agar nhi bhed paya to pathar bankar sada ke liye yahi kaid ho jaoge to tum taiyar ho
Mai- ha mai taiyar hu

Itna bol mai aage bad gya aur us jagah jake mai pahle us dhanus ko pranam kiya aur phir use utha liya fir mai dhanus uthane ke bad mai us mani par nishana lagane laga mai bahut hi dhyan se nishana lga rha tha jab mujhe lga ki nishana thik jagah pe lagega to mai tir chhod diya lekin ye kya tir to waha pe laga hi nhi aur mera ghutne tak pathar ka ho gya mujhe aise dekh rakshas thahake mar mar kar hasne lga mera ek mauka nikal gya tha ab mere pass do aur mauke the mai phir se tir dhanus pe lagaya aur nishane par chhad diya lekin ye kya ye bhi mauka hath se gya ab mera kamar tak pathar ka ho gya tha o rakshas hase ja rha tha ab mera dimag bhi kam karna band kar diya tha ab mujhe yaha apna mrityu dikhne lga ab mujhe apna ghar ka yad aane lga mere mata pita meri bahan sab ke chehra mere samne aane laga mai man me bola mujhe maf kar dijiyega maa papa aur meri pyari bahan aplogo ke sath mera bas itna sath tha abhi mai apna ankhe band kar ke apne pariwar ke bare me soch hi rha tha ki mujhe mere man me gurudev ka avaj sunai di ( tum itne me hi kaise har man sakte ho putra tumhe to aage chalkar isse bhi bada khatro se ladna h aur tum ye kaise bhul gye ki jispe mere Aradhya mere guru bholenath ka hath ho use kuchh nhi hota aur tumhe to khud bhole nath se vardan prapt h tum apne man ko sant kro putra aur mera bat suno asal me kabhi kabhi jo dikhta h o sach nhi hota iske bad guru ji ka awaj aana band ho gya ) abhi mai apna khyalo me khoya hi tha ki mujhe gurudev ki bat yad aayi ki asal me kabhi kabhi jo dikhta h o hota nhi h iska matlab kya h mujhe samjh me hi nhi aa rha tha ki o rakshas hasne lga aur bola
Rakshas- ha ha ha ha ha ab bs ek mauka aur tumhare bas bacha h iske bad tum yaha sada sada ke liye kaid ho jaoge

o bolte bolte mere samne se gujra aur me ek side khada ho kar mujhe dekhte huye hase ja rha tha mujhe bahut gusa aa rha tha aur mai use guse se dekhe ja rha tha ki tabhi meri dhyan uske mathe par gya uske mathe par bhi same to same waisa hi mani tha mai ye dekh kar soch me pad gya ki ye kaise ho sakta h ye mani to samne h jise mujhe bhedna h aur waisa hi mani iske mathe par bhi h phir mujhe guruji ki bat yad aai jo dikhta h jaruri nhi ki o sach ho mujhe ye bat yad aate hi mai muskune lga ab mujhe pta tha ki mujhe kya karna h fir mai apna aankhe band kar ke guru ji ko dhanyabad kiya aur tir ko dhanus pe lagaya aur nishana lagane ja rha tha idhar o rakshas bs muskura ke mujhe dekhe ja rha tha mai nishane lagate lagate uske taraf palat gya o kuchh samjhta usse pahle hi mera tir apna nishana bhed diya mera tir jake sidha uske mathe par jo mani tha waha laga aur o rakshas chilane laga aur chilate huye jal kar rakh ho gya phir mera sarir jo pathar bna tha o bhi normal ho gya aur fir mai aage badh gya us dhanus ke taraf mai waha jakar pahle us dhanus ko pranam kiya aur us utha liya mera dhanus uthate hi waha charo taraf hilne lga aur mere upar ek raushani padi aur mai gayab hokar sidha guru dev ke pass pahuch gya phir mai gurudev ko pranam karte huye bola
Mai- pranam gurudev gurudev ye lijiye aap apna vijayi dhanus
Gurudev- vijayi bhava putra ab se ye dhanus tumhara h putra ise tum apni chhamta aur yogyata se pray kiya h iss liye ise tumhi rakho aur jante ho iska name vijayi danush kyu rakha gya h
Mai- mujhe nhi pata gurudev aap hi bata de
Gurudev- iska na vijayi dhanus is liye pada kyuki ye jiske hath me bhi rahega o kabhi prajay nhi hoga aisa is sansar me 2 aur dhanus h putra ek gandiv aur dusra vashno dhanus h ye tin dhanus dhari ka mukabla koi nhi kar sakta is liye ise tum rakho bhabhisya me ye tumhe bahut kam aayega aur jab tumhe iska sabse jyada jaruri ho tab tum ise dhyan karna ye tumhare pass aa jayega aur iska kam hote hi ye gayab ho jayega ( itna bol ke o dhanus ko gayab kar diye)
Mai- jaisi apki ikchha gurudev
Gurudev - aaj tumne apna tino pariksha me utirna huye aur aaj tumara siksha kai pahla adhyay samapt huya ab tum jakar aaram kro kal se tumhara tumhara dusra adhayay suru hoga
Mai - jo agya gurudev
Fir mai waha se apne kaksh chala gya ho jakar aaram karne laga fir dusre din subah mera nind khula to mai nitya karm karne nadi chala gya aur nitya karm karne ke bad gurudev ke pass gya aur gurudev ko pranam kiya

Gurudev- putra kal tumhara siksha ke pahla adhayay samapt ho gya aur aaj se tumahara siksha ke dusra adhyay suru hoga tumhe dusre adhay me wahi karna h jo pahle adhayay me kiya bas frak itna h ki tum pahla adhay samanay gurutwa kardhan me kiya h aur dushra adhyay tumhe gurutwakarshan chember me karna hoga
Mai- gurutwakarshan chember mai kuchh samjha nhi gurudev
Gurudev- gurutwakarshan chember ek aisa chember h jisme tumhe prithvi se panch saw guna jyada gurutwakarshan me abhyas karna hoga to kya tum taiyar ho
Mai - ji gurudev mai taiyar hu

Fir gurudev apna hath aage kiya aur unke hath se ek raushani nikali aur aagne ek room taiyar ho gya fir guruji mujhe apne sath lekar us chember me gye jab mai andar gya to ascharya se dekhte rah gya kyuki bahar jo ek room jitna bada tha andar se o itna bada tha ki ek sahar aaram se uske andar aa jaye waha pass me do room tha baki me pura maidan tha jo lagbhag 5 kilomitre me faila tha fir gurudev bole
Gurudev- putra is chembar ka samay bahar ke samay se viprit h yaha ka ek bahar ka 1.5 din ke barabar h isme tumhe panch sal tak abhayas karna h aur jab tak tumhara abhayas pura nhi ho jata h tab tak tumhe yahi rahna h ye jo do room h jisme se ek me tumhe kane ka saman milega aur ek tumhare sone ke liye h aur usme attach bathroom bhi h aur o jo samne batam dikh rha h na usse tumhe yaha ka gurutwakarshan control karne ke liye h tum pahle 10 guna gurutwakarshan se suru karna thik h putra ab mai ja rha hu tumhe mujhse jab bhi jaruri hoga mujhe yad karna mai aa jaunga

Itna bol ke gurudev waha se gayab ho gye aur mai charo taraf ghum ke dekhne lga mai ghumte ghumte us mashine ke pass gya aur usme 10 guna gurutwakarshan set kiya mujhe 10 guna gurutwa karshan set karte hi achanak..

 

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Update 14
gurutwakarshan control karne ke liye h tum pahle 10 guna gurutwakarshan se suru karna thik h putra ab mai ja rha hu tumhe mujhse jab bhi jaruri hoga mujhe yad karna mai aa jaunga

Itna bol ke gurudev waha se gayab ho gye aur mai charo taraf ghum ke dekhne lga mai ghumte ghumte us mashine ke pass gya aur usme 10 guna gurutwakarshan set kiya mujhe 10 guna gurutwa karshan set karte hi achanak..
Ab aage
Mera pura sarir bhari lagne lga mera sarir itna bhari ho gya ki mai wahi par baith gya ab mujhse utha bhi nhi ja rha tha aisa lag rha tha mere sarir pe jitne bhi kapde the ab ka vajan babh gya h phir mai kisi tarah himat juta ke khada huya aur chalne ka pryas kiya lekin ye kya mera pair bhi mujhse uth nhi rha tha kisi tarah pryas karne ke bad chalna suru kiya fir dhire dhire daudna start kiya isi tarah samay bitne laga pahle 10 guna jyada gurutwakarshan me abhyas kiya phir 20 guna me isi tarah is chambar me 500 guna jyada gurutwa karshan me pahle running ka abhyas kiya kunfu martial arts talwar baji ka fir tir dhanus ka abhyas kiya isi tarah is chambar me 5 sal nikal gya yani ki bahari suniya ka 7.5 sal nikal gya ab mai 17.5 sal ka ho gya tha aaj mera is chembar me last din tha to fir mai socha kyu na aaj chek kar liya jaye ki mai pure chambar me 10 second me kitna round lagata hu ye soch kar mai bhagna start kiya mai 10 second me yaha bhi 50 round lagaya aur fir guru ji ko yad kiya turant guru ji aa gye fir mai gurudev ko pranam kiya aur unke sath bahar aa gya jab mai apna kadam bahar rakha to mai apne aap ko bahut hi halka ( waitloss) mahsus kar rha tha mujhe aisa lag rha tha ki mere sarir me kuchh nhi h fir mai gurudev ke sath asram me gya to guru ji bole

Gurudev- putra tum andar chambar me jo abhyas kiye ho mai yaha dekhna chahta hu is liye tum is jangal ka 500 round pura kar ke aao mai ye dekhna chahta hu ki tum kitne samay me pura karte ho
Mai- jo agya gurudev

Phir mai pure jangal me daurana start kiya wo pura jangal lagbhag 50 kilomitmer me faila huya tha mujhe karib 10 minat lage us jangal ko 500 raund lagane me phir mai gurudev ke pass aaya

Gurudev- bahut khub tumse bina koi sakti ke is pure jangal ko 10 minat me 500 chakar lga liya is se ye sidh hota h ki tum ab bilkul taiyar ho gye ho apne kartavya par aage badhne ke liye is kal pratah kal mere jaha ham dhyan lagate the waha aa jana
Mai- jo agya gurudev gurdev kya mai aapse ek bat puchh sakta hu
Gurudev- ha avasya puchh sakte ho putra
Mai- gurudev kya mujhme koi sakti h aur hai bhi to kis udhesya ke liye h
Gurudev- ha putra ye satya h ki tum me apar saktiya h jo tumse 18 jandin par khulega aur raha udeshya ki bat to bas tum ye dekhna ki tumhare hath se koi burai na ho logo ka seva karna tum in shaktiyo ka galat upyog nhi karna tumhara udeshya khud tumhare pass aayega
Mai- ji gurudev

Fir mai waha se bisram karne apne kakchh me aa gya rat bhar bisram karne ke bad subah me utha aur fresh hone ke bad jaha gurudev bulaye the waha aa gya waha aake dekha to gurudev pahle se hi dhyane baithe the mujhe aate hi o dhyan se bahar aaye aur bole

Girudev- putra mai tumhe yaha is liye bulaya h ki aaj tumhara siksha ka antim din h kal subah tum apne ghar ja skte ho is liye mai tumne kuchh dena chahta hu
Mai- gurudev aap mujhe kya dena chahte ho
Gurudev- dharya rakho putra sab pata ho jayega mai tumhe pahle creation magic dena chahta hu
Mai- ye creation maigic kya h gurudev
Gurudev- creation ek aisi magic h jisse tum jo chaho bana sakte ho jaise maine o gurutwakarshan chamber banaya tha ye tumhe bhavisya me bahut kam aayega
Mai- jaisi aapki aagya gurudev
Gurudev- yaha mere samne aaker dhyan me baith jao putra
Phir mai gurudev ke samne jaker dhyan me baith jaya phir gurudev ne mere sar pe hath rakhe aur unke hath se raushani mere sar me aane lagi thodi der bad jab pura raushan mere andar sama gya fir gurudev bole

Gurudev- putra mai tumhe kuchh aur dena chahta hu
Mai- gurudev ab mujhe kuchh nhi chahiye jitna apne diya utna kabhi h
Gurudev- putra jab guru kuchh de to uska avhelna nhi karna chahiye ye mai tumhe apne taraf se dena chahta hu
Mai- hame chhama kare gurudev jo bhi aap denge mujhe swikar h
Gurudev- putra mai tumhe sansar ke sare divyastro se susajjit karna chahta hu is liye tum phir se dhyan me baith jao

Phir mai dhyan me baith gya fir gurudev ne om ka ucharan kiya jisse ek surakchha kavach ne ham dono ko gher liya jis se andar kya ho rha h na kisi ko dikhai dega aur na sunai dega phir gurudev ne agni ban ahvahan kiya fir indrastra , brambhastra , vaishnoastra, shambhaav astra pasuptastra jaise kai divyastro ka ahvahan kiya aur fir dhyan me mujhse bole (abhi jo bhi bate hogi dhyan me hogi)
Gurudev- putra ye divyastro bahut khatarnak h is liye prayog bahut soch samajh kar karna jab tumhara sara rasta band ho jay aur tumhe lage ki ab koi rasta shes nhi bachha h tab iska prayog karoge aur apne shaktiyo ka kabhi galt prayog nhi karoge aur apne fayde ke liye nhi karoge sada jan kalayan karoge mujhe ye bachan do aur yahi mera tumse gurudakshina bhi h
Mai- mai prasuram sisya aditya charo dishao aur 65 hajar devi devtao aur apne Aradhya shiv ko sakshi man kar apne guru ko ye bachan deta hu ki mere pas abhiya bhavisya me jitne bhi shakti ho unka kabhi galat karyo me upyog nhi karunga aur sada dusro ka seva aur sahayta karunga
Gurudev- bahut achha putra mai jagdmba putra prashuram apne Aradhya ko shaksi manakar tumhe apne guru rin se mukt karta hu

Fir gurudev ne ham par se o kavach hataya aur dhyan se uth gye phir guru ji ne mujhe aasharam jane ko bola mai waha se aasaram aa gya isi tarah aaj ka din samapt ho gya dusre din subah mai fresh huya aur gurudev ke pass agya gir gurudev ko pram kiya aur gurudev se agya lekar apne ghar jane ke liye taiyar ko aaya fir gurudev bole
Gurudev- putra yaha se tumhe akele hi jana ho ga aur ha putra ye rasta bahut hi muskil hone wala h tumhare liye thoda savdhan hoke jana aur mujhse kabhi bhi avasyakta ho to mujhe apne man me yad karna mai aa jaunga

Phir mai gurudev ko pranam kar ke apne ghar ke taraf nikal gya mai chahta to mai daur kar ghar ja sakta tha lekin pta nhi mujhe kya huya ki mai padal chal kar ja rha tha mai chalte chalte ek bhayanak jangal me pahuch gya mai aage badh hi rha tha ki achanak...

 

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Update 15
Gurudev- putra yaha se tumhe akele hi jana ho ga aur ha putra ye rasta bahut hi muskil hone wala h tumhare liye thoda savdhan hoke jana aur mujhse kabhi bhi avasyakta ho to mujhe apne man me yad karna mai aa jaunga

Phir mai gurudev ko pranam kar ke apne ghar ke taraf nikal gya mai chahta to mai daur kar ghar ja sakta tha lekin pta nhi mujhe kya huya ki mai padal chal kar ja rha tha mai chalte chalte ek bhayanak jangal me pahuch gya mai aage badh hi rha tha ki achanak...
Ab aage
Wo jangal din me bhi dekhne me bhayanak lag rha tha ab din dhal gya tha aur mai rukne ke liye ek surakshit jagah ke talas me lagatar aage batdta ja rha tha ki achanak tej havaye chalne lagi aur bijaliya bhi kadkane lagi ye dusya jangal ko aur bhayanak bana rhi thi mai kisi tarah aage badne ka prayas kar rha tha ka ki mujhe ek karkas awaj sunai di

Awaj - bhojan manus bhojan ha ha ha ha ..,.....
Mai itna bhayanak aur karkas awaj sun ek pal ke liye mera halat kharab ho gya phir mai usko ignore kar ke aage badhta ja rha tha ki phir se wo awaj sunai di abki bar mere ekdam najdik se awaj aai to mai himat kar ke bola

Mai- kon h samane aao aise chhip ke kyu bol rhe ho
Awaj- aaunga aaunga tumhare najdik bhi aaunga agar tumhare najdik nhi aaya to tumhe khaunga kaise ha ha ha ha ...
Mai- are chhup ke kyu bol rhe ho himat h to samne aake bol
Awaj- ha ha ha lagta h tumhe marne ki jaldi h chalo tumhari khwais pura kar deta hu

Aur itna bol kar wo samne prakat huya jise dekhkar mera halat kharab ho gya jo abhi mere samne tha wo karib 10 fit lamba chehra bhayanak agar use kamjor dil wala dekh leta to wahi Harry attack se mar jata mai fir himat kar ke bola

Mai- kon ho tum aur aise mere raste me kyu aaye hat jao mere raste se nhi to mare jaoge
Awaj- ha ha ha mujhe tumhare bato se gusa nhi aa rha balak kyuki tum waise bhi abhi marne wale ho aur kya bola tum mujhe jino ka badsah kalketu ko maroge are murkh balak apne byang bate band kar nhi to tadpa tadpa ke marunga
Mai- (apne man me) wo to ye ek jon h ab to mujhe bilkul sambhal kar rahna hoga kyoki mai suna hu ki jin bahut takatwar hote h aur ye to jino ka badsah h
Mai- wo to tum jin ho koi bat nhi aaj ek jin bhi mere hato se marega marne se pahle tum ye batao ki tumhe to jin lok me hona chahiye tum yaha kya kar rhe ho
Ab mai use kalketu likhunga
Kalketu- murkh balak apna juban sambhal kar bat kar nhi to tumhe marne me mujhe ek pal ki bhi deri nhi hoga
Mai- wo to bad me dekhnge mai Marta hu ya tum pahle mere sawal ka jabab do tum yaha dharti lok par kya kar rhe ho
Kalketu- chalo tumhe marne se pahle tumhara antim iksha samajh kar bata de rha hu mujhe manusya ko darana ise tadpana aur phir mar ke kha jane me bada maja aata h is jangal ke aagal bagal ke sare gaon ke aadmi ko mai marke kha gya hu ab tumhe mar kar kha jaunga

Uska bat sun ke mujhe bahut jyada gusa aa rha tha

Mai- are nich papi nirbali praniyo ko mar ke tum apne aap ko badsah sjh rhe ho ab tumhe jine ka koi hak nhi an tumhe mujhse bhagwan bhi nhi bacha sakta

Mera bat sun ke wo guse me ek dam pagal ho gya aur ujhe marne ke liye mere taraf bhaga mai usko apne taraf aate dekh satark ho gya wo jaise hi mere pass aaya mai apna speed istmal karte huye uska piche ho gya aur piche se ek kik use mara jis se wo age ke taraf kuch dur jake gira ab itna se wo bhi samajh gya ki mai koi mamuli ladka nhi hu aur mera war se use aur gusa as gya is liye usne apne hat se aag se mere upar hamla kiya lekin ye kya uska aag ka mere upar ko prabhav nhi huya ye dekh pahle to wo ascharya huya fir bola

Kalketu- wo to tum mayabi bhi ho chalo koi bat nhi tumhe marne me aur maja aayega

Itna bi kar usne apna hath hava me lahraya aur uske hath se bahut sari talware nikal ke mere taraf aane laga ye dekh karai bhi apna talwar nikal kar uske talwar ko rokne laga mujhe apne talwar ko rokte dekh kar wo waha se gayab hokar mere pichhe aa gya aur mujhe ek kik mara jis se mai bhi udte huye kuchh dur gira mujhe uska kik ka koi asar nhi huya tha is liye mai hath se khada ho gya aur uske taraf jane laga usne ujhe sahi salamat dekh kar ujhpe bijli se hamla karne lga lekin uska sab hamla bekar ja rha to ye dekh kar wo guse me pagal ho gya aur fir wo gayab ho gya mai socha ki o bhag gya lekin ye galt tha wo bhaga nhi tha wo ab mujhpe gayab hoke war karne lga kabhi apna kik Marta to kabhi panch mai bhi pareshan ho gya ek to wo dikh nhi rha tha upar se mera tabala bana ke rakh diya tha fir bhi mai usko ek bal bhi baka nhi kar pa rha tha ab mujhe gusa aane lga mai guse se pagal ho gya aur andaj pe hi apna pair hath chalane lga lekin use kuchh ho hi nhi rha tha tb mujhe gurudev ka awaj sunai diya

Gurudev- apne guse ko kabu kro putra ise apna kamjori nhi takat banao admi guse me khud ka hi nukhsan karte h lekin tum ise apna takat bana kar dusman pe hamla kro putra tum dhyan lagaye putra aur uska aur apne indriyo se use dundhne ka pryas kro putra

Gurudev ka bat sun kar mera gusa khatam ho gya aur mai khada khada hi dhyan lagane laga aur apne indriyo ke sahayata se use dundhne lga bahut Prayas karne ke bad akhir wo mujhe mil hi gya ab mai taiyar tha uske war ka jabab dene ke liye aur ab jaise hi mere najdi aake mujhe marne ka pryas ki to mai iska gala pakad liya aur ane talwar nikal kar use marne hi wala tha ki wo mujhse bola

Kalketu- mujhe mat mariye mai apna har swikar karta hu mai aaj se aapka gulam huya mere akka
Mai- mai tumhe kabhi mat nhi karunga tumne jo beksur logo par atyachar kiya uska tumhe sand jarur milega
Kalketu- chhama chhama mere akka mai wo sab apna marji se nhi kar rha tha mere akka
Mai- jhuth jhuth bol rhe ho tum tumne unko mara h fir tum jhut kaise bol rhe ho ki tum ye jan buj kar nhi kiya
Kalketu- ye satya h mere akka ki un sab par atyachar mai hi kiya hu parantu ye purntah satya nhi h
Mai- kyu ye satya kyu nhi h
Kalketu- akka mai jin lok ka badsah hu aur ek jin bhi hu aur agar koi jin ka akka nhi hota to wo bekabu ho jata h use khud samajh me nhi aata ki wo kya kar rha hai
Mai- jab tum ye jante the to tumne apna akka kyu nhi chuna
Kalketu- mai apna akka chune hi dharti lok aaya tha lekin mujhe yaha koi me akka ke layak nhi mila kyuki ek jin ka akka wahi ho sakta h jo usse taktwar ho jo usko ladai me prast kare jo aaj apne kiya mere akka ab is jin ko apna gulam swikar kare mere akka
Mai- nhi ye nhi ho sakta mai kisi ko apna gulam nhi banana chahta is liye mai tumhe apna gulam swikar nhi kar sakta
Kalketu- aisa nhi bole mere aaka aaj agar aapne mujhe apna gulam swikar nhi kiya to fir begunah ka jan mere hato se hoga kya aap yahi chahte h akka
Mai- nhi nhi mai ye nhi chahta (fir kuch der soch kar) chalo mai tumhe apna gulam swikar karta hu lekin mera ek shart h
Kalketu- agya kare mere akka
Mai- tum mere sath ek gulam banakar nhi balki mera dost bakar rahoge aur mujhe akka nhi mera name aditya lekar bulaoge agar manjur h to mai tumhe apna gulam swikar karta hu
Kalketu- mai sabke samne apka name to nhi le sakta lekin bhai bulaunga lekin akele me apko akka hi bolunga
Mai- mujhe manjur h mai tumhe apna gulam swikar karta hu

Mera itna bolte hi uske sarir se aur mere sarir se ek raushani nakli aur ek dusre ke sarir me sama gaya jisse wo aur mai dono aur bhi saktisali ho gye fir mai bola

Mai- tum ye apna sarir ek manusya ki tarah kar lo jis se sab ko lage ki tum mera dost ho aur apna ye name bhi badal lo
Kalketu- mai apna roop to badal lunga lekin mera name apko rakhna hoga akka
Mai - chalo thik h pahle apna roop badlo

Mere kahte hi usne apna roop badal liya usko is roop ko dekh kar koi bhi nhi kah sakta tha ki o ek jin h wo ekdam 18 sal ka naujawan lag rha tha

Mai- chalo ab tum achha dikh rhe ho tumhara ye roop dekh kar koi bhi tumhe nhi pahchan payega ki tum ek jin ho aur tumhara ye roop dekh kar mai tumhara namr Jignesh rakhta hu tumhe pasand aaya
( Ab yah jin yani kalketu ko Jignesh likhung)
Jignes- bahuta achha name h mujhe bahut pasand aaya
Mai - thik h chalo ab ghar chalte h
Jignesh- maf kare akka to mai ek swal puchu
Mai- tumhe mujhse kuchh puchhne ke liye mere agya lene ki jaruri nhi h aage se ye bat yad rakhna
Jignesh- yad rakhunga akka mai ye puchna chahta tha ki jab mai ek pal me apko apke ghar pahuch sakta hu to aise padal jane ki kya jarurat
Mai- are ha maine to ye socha hi nhi chalo le chalo tumhi

Fir jigne ne mujhe gayab kar ke mere ghar ke samne prakat huya abhi Sam ka time tha to bahar koi nhi the sab andar the mai jaise hi get par gya ki..

 

[GranDMasteR]

Update 16
Mai- tumhe mujhse kuchh puchhne ke liye mere agya lene ki jaruri nhi h aage se ye bat yad rakhna
Jignesh- yad rakhunga akka mai ye puchna chahta tha ki jab mai ek pal me apko apke ghar pahuch sakta hu to aise padal jane ki kya jarurat
Mai- are ha maine to ye socha hi nhi chalo le chalo tumhi

Fir jigne ne mujhe gayab kar ke mere ghar ke samne prakat huya abhi Sam ka time tha to bahar koi nhi the sab andar the mai jaise hi get par gya ki..
Ab aage
Mai jaise hi apne ghar ke get par gya dekha ki waha ek gard h mai jakar gate khol ke andar jane laga mai jignes- ko gayab rahne ko bol diya mujhe andar jata dekh gard bola
Gard- are aise muh uthakar kaha guse ja rhe ho chalo nikalo yaha se
Mai- are ram ram kaka kaise ho aap mujhe pahchana nhi
( Ye wahi gard h jo mere bachpan me tha)
Gard - are tum mere kya ristdar lagte ho jo mai pahchanunga tum niklo yaha se nhi to sahab ne dekh liya to bahut day padega
Mai- are mohan kaka aap sachme nhi pahchana mujhe
( Ye gard ka name mohan h ab iske name se hi likhunga)
Mohan- are tum mera name kaise jante ho (kuchh der soch kar) wo to tum soch rhe ho ki tum mera name loge to mai tumhe andar jane dunga chalo bhago yaha se
Mai- are kaka tum is ghar ke bete ko jante ho
Mohan- ha chhote sahab ke jab chhote the tab se is ghar me hu to unko kaise nhi januga kahi tum chhote sahab ke dost batakar to andar nhi jana chahte mai tumhe bata du ki chhote sahab bachpan me hi dusre sahar padne gye h abhi tak aaye nhi h is liye unko apna dost to bolna hi mat samjhe
Mai- are kaka mera bat to suno
Mohan- nhi ab kuchh nhi sunna chahta chalo niklo yaha se nhi to dande mar kar nikalunga
Mai- aap apne chhote sahab ko dande mar ke usi ke ghar se nikaloge mohan kaka
Mohan- mai apne chhote sahab kyu nikalunga.... Ek minat kahi aap chhote malik to nhi ho
Mai- ( haste huye) ha kaka mai aapka chhote sahab hi hu ab to mai andar ja sakta hu na
Mohan- hamko maf karna chhote sahab ham aapko pachhan nhi paye galti se na jane kya kya bol diya he maf kar do sahab
Mai- ( ghutha gusa se) mai apko maf nhi karunga samjhe ab apko iska saja milega saja ke liye tayar ho jao
Mohan- thik h sahab ab galti kiya hu to saja ke liye bhi taiyar hu bas is nokari se nhi nikalna
Mai- apka saja ye h ki aap mujhe chhote sahab nhi aditya ya beta bolenge

( Mera itna bolte hi pahle wo chauk gye fir unke ankho se aansu chalne laga aur mera pas aakar bole)
Mohan- ab mujhe pura yakin ho gya h ki aap hi mere chhote sahab ho o mujhe bachapan me bhi aise hi bolte the
Mai- kya kaka fir se sahab
Mohan- galti se nikal gya aditya beta

Fir waha se mai andar ghar me jane laga mai jaise hi gate par gaya waise hi gate khul gya aur koi mujhse akar lipat ke rone laga mai dhyan se dekha to ye mummy thi mai bhi unke gale lag kar rone laga fir mummy rote huye boli

Mammy- tu tu aa gya beta mera beta aagya mai kitni tadpi hu tumhare liye mera beta mera kaleje ka tukda aa gya
Mai- ha mummy mai aa gya hu mai bhi aap sabke liye bahut tadpa hu
Mummy- to tum abhi tak aaye kyu nhi jante ho ham sab yaha tumhare yad me til til kar mar rhe the ab tum aa gye ho to mai tumhe ab kahi nhi jane dungi
Mai- mummy mujhe pahle andar to aane dijiye
Mummy- ha ha mai bhi Kitna pagal hu tumhe bahar hi khada kiya hu chalo andar

Phir mai maa ke sath andar aaya andar hall me koi bhi nhi tha to mai maa se puchha

Maa- tum kitna bada ho gya jab tum yaha se gya tha to ekdam chhota tha ab gabru javan ho gya body sory bhi bana li aur beta beta kitna handsam ho gya h ab to mohale ki ladki ka khair nhi
(Ab mai apne bare me bata de rha hu)
Mera hight 5 feet 10 inch h mera 8 pack body h mai dikhne me ekdam gora hu mujhe ek bar koi ladki dekh le to flate ho jaye
Ab ghar ke bare me bhi bata du
Mera ghar to kahne ke liye ek mohale me h lekin mohale se thoda hat ke hai mera ghar do flor ka h jisme graund flor pe 3 room h aur 2nd flor pe 4 room h mere ghar ke piche ek bada sa garden h

Ab kahani par aate h
Mai- mummy ghar me koi dikh nhi rhe h kaha h sab
Maa- palvi apne friend ke birthday party me gyi h aur tumhare papa ka aaj ek business mitting tha to let se aayenge
Mai- ok koi nhi wo log aayenge to mai mil munga waise mummy aapko kaise pata chala ki mai darwaje par hu
Maa- beta mai ek maa hu mujhe mere bete ki aane ki khabar subah me hi pata chal gya
Mai- kaise maa apko kisne bataya ki mai aa rha hu
Maa- is dil ne bataya jo subah se hi bahut jayada dhadak rha tha wo bar bar bol rha tha ki aaj mera beta aayega aur jab tum darwaj pe aaye waise hi mujhe mere dil ne bata diya ki mera beta aaya h fir mai bhagte huye darwaje par gyi aur aage tumhe pata hi h
Mai- mummy aap mujhse kitna pyar karti mai yahi pyar ke liye 13 sal se tadap rha hu
(Ye bolte hi mere aankho me aasu aane lage ye dekh maa ne mujhe apne gale se lga li)
Maa- nhi mere bacha mat ro aab tum aa gya h na apne mummy ke pass ab tumhe khub pyar dungi aur kabhi apne se alag nhi karungi
Mai- maa mujhe bhukh lagi h mujhe kitne din ho gye aapke hatho se khaye huye
Maa- mai bhi na kitna bhulakad bhi mera beta itna lamba safar kar ke aaya h aur bhuka bhi h aur mai use baita ke bate kar rha hu chalo tum fresh ho jao tabtak mai khana banati hu

Fir mai upar apne room ke taraf chala gya aur maa khana banane chali gyi mai jab apne room me gya to dekha ki sare saman waise ka waisa hi jise dekh mujhe mera bachpan yad aa gya fir mai fresh hone gya aur fresh hoye room me aaya aur jignesh ko yad kiya jisse jigne turant hajir ho gya to mai bola

Mai- jignes kya tum mere liye kapde la sakte ho
Jignes- ye to mere baye hath ka khel h malik ye lijiye

Phir mai taiyar hoke niche aaya tab tak maa khana bana li thi fir mere aate hi khane ko dyning table par lagane lagi mai jake dyning table par baith gya aur maa se bola
Mai- maa mujhe aaj apke hatho se khana h khilaiye na

Ye sun kar maa turant hi mere pass aayi aur mujhe khilane lagi mere aankho me fir se aansu aa gya to maa boli

Maa- kya huya beta khane me mirchi jyada h kya
Mai- nhi maa ye to khusi ke aansu h mujhe 13 varso bad aaj mai apke hatho se aisa khana khaya hu
Maa- tu chinta mat kro beta mai aaj se roj tumhe khilaunga

Mai abhi khana kha hi rha tha ki achanak gate ka bel Baja maa uth kar darwaja kholne gyi jab darwaja kholi to samne papa the papa maa ko ajj itna khus dekh kar bole

Papa- kya bat h puspa aaj bahut kus lag rhi ho
Maa- ha ajj mai bahut khus hu aur aap andar aao apko bhi mere khusi ka raj pata chal jayega

Fir dono andar aaye to mai papa ko dekh bhagkar unke gle lag gya papa u mujhe achanak gle lagte dekh pahle to kuchh samjhe nhi lekin jab unhe samajh me aaye hi unke aankho se ansu chale laga yahi hal mera bhi tha mere aankho se bhi aansu bahane laga bahut der tak aise hi gale lagne ke bad dono alag huye phir papa bole

Papa- kaisa h mera sher
Mai- mai thik hu papa aap logo ka bahut yad aata tha waha
Papa- yad to hamlog bhi karte the tumhe lekin kya karu majburi thi hamari jo ham waha tumse milne aa nhi sakte the waise tumhari siksha puri ho gyi
Mai- ha papa waha ki siksha to puri ho gyi ab yaha ke baki h
Papa- thik h beta tum thak gye hoge jao aaram kro
Mai- ji papa lekin gudiya ko koi nhi batayega ki mai aaya hu use mujhe sarprise dena h
Papa/maa- thik h nhi batayenge

Fir mai apne room me jake ke sone ke kosish karne lga mujhe kuchh der bad nind aa gya fir subah mujhe 3 baje nind tuta to mai bathroom me jake fresh huya aur room me hi dhyan me baith gya 2 ghanta dhyan lagane ke bad mai utha aur niche chala gya aur ghar ke piche jo garden tha usme runing karne laga kuchh der raning karne ke bad mai ghar me aaya to mujhe maa mil gyi

Mai- mummy palvi abhi tak aayi nhi h kya
Maa- beta o to rat me hi aa gyi thi apne room me so rhi h ruko mai use jaga deta hu
Mai- nhi mummy aap nhi jao jagane aaj apni gudiya ko mai jagaunga bachpan ki tarah
Maa- ( haste huye ) thik h jao jaga do apni gudiya ko

Fir mai waha se gudiya ke room me gya wo palang pe soyi huyi bahut cute lag rhi thi mai usko dekte hi usi me kho gya bahut der tak dekhne ke bad usko jagane gaya aur usko jagane laga to wo boli

Palvi- ( nind me) Mujhe abhi aur sona h mujhe sone do na maa
aur mujhe bhi apne taraf khich ke sula di mai sote huye usko dekhne laga pata nhi uske chehre me kya kasish thi ki mujhe uske chehre se najar ni nhi hat raha tha thodi der dekhne ke bad mujhe ek sararat suji aur mai uske gal pe dat gada di (ye hamlog ke bachpan ka aadat tha jab bhi koi der tak sota to dusra aise hi dat kat kar jagata) mare dat katte hi wo chila kar uthi aur mujhe ghurne lagi aur guse me mujhse boli
Palvi- kon ho tum aur mere room me kaise aaye aur tumhe mujhe chhune ki himat kaise huyi ruko tumhe abhi batati hu

Ye bolkar usne achanak......

 

[GranDMasteR]

Update 17
Palvi- ( nind me) Mujhe abhi aur sona h mujhe sone do na maa
aur mujhe bhi apne taraf khich ke sula di mai sote huye usko dekhne laga pata nhi uske chehre me kya kasish thi ki mujhe uske chehre se najar ni nhi hat raha tha thodi der dekhne ke bad mujhe ek sararat suji aur mai uske gal pe dat gada di (ye hamlog ke bachpan ka aadat tha jab bhi koi der tak sota to dusra aise hi dat kat kar jagata) mare dat katte hi wo chila kar uthi aur mujhe ghurne lagi aur guse me mujhse boli
Palvi- kon ho tum aur mere room me kaise aaye aur tumhe mujhe chhune ki himat kaise huyi ruko tumhe abhi batati hu

Ye bolkar usne achanak......
Ab aage
Wo mujhe marne ke liye daudi to mai bhi bhagna start kar diya mai uske room me idhar udhar bhagne lga jab mai dekha ki wo thak gyi h to mai uske pass jake bola

Mai- itne me hi thak gyi meri gudiya

Jab usme mere muh se gudiya sabd suno to mujhe ek tak dekhne lagi aur bhir daud kar mere pass aai aur mere gle se lipatkar rone lagi

Palvi- bhayu aap aa gye apne mujhe chhod kar chale gye the mai apke liye kitna roi hu ye mai hi janti hu apke bina mera kahi bhi man nhi lagti thi aap mujhe kyu chhod ke gye the mai kitni akeli ho gyi thi aap bahut gande ho aap hamesha mujhe rulate ho
Mai- (rote huye) chup hoja gudiya dekh mai aa gya hu na ab tumhe chhodkar kahi nhi jaunga please ab chup ho ja mai bhi tumse milne ke liye bahut tadpa hu mera bhi waha tumhare bina man nhi lagta tha gudiya ab mai apne gudiya ko chhodkar kahi nhi jaunga please chup hoja
Palvi- bhaiya aap khud ro rhe ho aur mujhe chup hone ko bol rhe ho pahle aap chup ho jao
Mai- thik h gudiya mai nhi rota ab tum bhi chup ho jao
Palvi-(chup ho kar) aap kab aaye the bhaiya
Mai- mai to kal Sam me hi aa gya tha
Palvi- to aap mujhse rat me kyu nhi mile aur mujhe koi bataya kyu nhi ki aap aaye ho
Mai- mujhe tumhe sarprise dena tha iss liye mai mummy aur papa ko bhi mana kiya tha tumne kuchh batane se achha chhodo ye sab jao pahle fresh hoke aao mai apna room me tumhara wait kar rha hu

Fir mai waha se apne room me aa gya fir kuchh der bad palvi mere room me aai aur aake mere bed par baith gyi fir mai bola

Mai- gudiya tum kitni badi ho gyi mai jab gya tha tb tum itu si thi
Palvi- aap bhi to bade ho gye aur body bhi bna liye ho bhaiya aap waha pe kewal body hi banate the ya padte bhi the
Mai- are ye sab chhodo tum batayo padhai kaisi chal rhi h tum padte bhi ho ya kewal party hi karti rhti ho
Palvi- 12 ka exam diya hu do tin din me result bhi aane wala hfir collage me admition lunga app batao aage kya karna chahte ho
Mai- mai bhi soch rha hu ke collage me admition lu chalo ab dono sath me hi admition le lenge
( Mai us se bat kar rha tha aur palvi sirf mujhe hi dekhe ja rhi thi)
Palvi-(apne man me) ye mujhe kya ho rha h bhai jab se aaye h mai unhi me kyu khota ja rha hu kyo mujhe unhe bar bar dekhne ko man kar rha hai kya h inme jo mujhe apne taraf khichta ja rha h
Mai- kya schame lagi chalo niche nasta karne mummy wait kar rhi hogi
Palvi- ha chalo

Fir ham dono niche aaye to dekha papa dyning table pe baith the mujhe dekh kar bole

Papa- aao aao beta mai tumhara hi wait kar rha tha chalo nasta kar lo
Mai- thik h papa
Fir hamlog nasta karne lage to papa bole
Papa- aage ka kya socha h beta kya karna h aage
Mai- bas papa collage me admition lunga gudiya ke sath me
Papa- ye tumne achha socha h
Mummy- kya kar rhe ho ji mere bete ko aram se khane do aao beta mai tumhe apne hatho se khilaunga
Papa- mujhe bhi khila do kabhi apne hatho se
Mummy- apko bhagwan hath nhi diye hai kya jo mai khilau mai sirf apne bete ko khilaunga
Palvi- aur mujhe mumma mujhe nhi khilaogi
Mummy- nhi aaj sirf apne bete ko khiaungi
Palvi- dekh rhe ho na papa bete ke aate hi ab hamra is ghar me koi vailu nhi rha
Papa- ha beta tum sahi bol rhi ho ab hamara kya hoga
Mummy- bahut ho gya majak ab chup chap nasta kro samjhe
Papa- ji maharani samjh gya
Mummy- beta aaj tum gudiya ko lekar marke chale jana aur apne liye kapada kharid lene
Mai- iski kya jarurat h mummy mere pas ye kapda h na aur isme me kya kharabi h
Papa- puspa thik kah rhi h beta tumhe is kapde me dekh kar sab hasenge is liye tum kuchh kapde kharid lena
Mai- thik h papa
Papa- ( ek creadit kard mujhe dete huye) ye lo beta creadit card ye unlimed h tum jitna chaho utna shoping karna
Palvi- (khusi se) ya hu.. ab mai bhai ke sath soping jaungi aur bhai se apne liye bhi soping karwaunga .

Fir hamdono nasta kar ke shoping ke liye ek mall me gya

 

[GranDMasteR]

Update 18
Mai- iski kya jarurat h mummy mere pas ye kapda h na aur isme me kya kharabi h
Papa- puspa thik kah rhi h beta tumhe is kapde me dekh kar sab hasenge is liye tum kuchh kapde kharid lena
Mai- thik h papa
Papa- ( ek creadit kard mujhe dete huye) ye lo beta creadit card ye unlimed h tum jitna chaho utna shoping karna
Palvi- (khusi se) ya hu.. ab mai bhai ke sath soping jaungi aur bhai se apne liye bhi soping karwaunga .

Fir hamdono nasta kar ke shoping ke liye ek mall me gya
Ab aage
Ham dono apne ghar se nikle fir driver ko gadi nikalne ko bole aur gadi me baith kar market ke taraf nikal gya driver bola

Driver- kaha jana h chhoti malkin
Palvi- bhaiya gadi ko xxx mall ke taraf lelo
Driver- ji chhoti malkin

Fir driver gadi ko lekar ek mall ke pass roka hamlog gadi se niche utre aur mall ke taraf badh gye mai is jagah ko bahut dhyan se dekh rha tha mai yaha aaj 13 sal bad aaya tha sab bikul change ho gya tha mai idhar udhar dhyan se dekh rha tha ki palvi boli

Palvi- itna dhyan se kya dekh rhe ho bhai
Mai- in 13 sal me ye jagah kitna badal gya h na gudiya jab ham chhote the to mummy papa ke sath yaha shoping karne aate the pahle aur ab me kitna change aa gya h
Palvi- 13 sal bahut din hota h bhai in 13 sal me yaha kya badla h abhi apne dekha hi kha h
Ham log isi tarah bat karte huye mall me gye waha jitne bhi ladke ladkiya thi sab mujhe dekh kar has rhi thi ye mujhe achha nhi lag rha tha ham log jaise hi andar gye to hame waha pe kuchh ladkiya mil gyi jo aake palvi se bat karne lagi sayad ye log palvi ke friends the wo log bat kar hi rhe the ki ek ladki ka najar mujh pe padi to wo palvi se puchi
Ladki- are palvi ye dehati gwar kon h kahi ise tum apna boyfriend to nhi bana li tumhara tast itna kharab h mujhe pata nhi tha waise ye h kaha dikhne me to achha h lekin ye kapde h gawar ka
Dusri ladki- are dikhne me achha h to kya huya h to gwar hi na pta nhi aise log yaha kaise aa jate h ye gard bhi ise andar kaise aane diya inki aukat bhi nhi yaha aane ki

Mujhe unki bat sun kar gusa bahut aa rha tha aur sharm bhi lag rha tha kyuki mai kapda hi aisa pahna tha mai asaram me jo kapda pahanta tha wahi yaha bhi pahna tha idhar palvi bhi guse me thi guse se uski aankhe lal ho gya tha mai abhi unhe kuchh bolne hi wala tha ki achanak ek tapad ki awaj aai mai dekha to ye tapad palvi ne dusri ladki ko mari thi phir guse se boli

Palvi- tumhari himat kaise huyi meri jan ko insult karne iska aukat dekhna chahti h abhi tu jis mall me khadi h ye chahe to ek pal me kharid le aur tum (pahli ladaki se ) kavya (pahli ladki ka name kavya h ab yahi likhunga) tumhe to mai apna best friends samajhti thi lekin tum friend ke layak ho hi nhi jise tum insult kar rhi ho wo meri jan h mera bhai h wo samjhi aaj ke bad kabhi mere samne aana bhi nhi samjhi
Kavya- maf kar do palvi galti ho gyi mujhe nhi pata tha ki ye tumhara bhai h aur (fir mujhse boli) aap bhi mujhe maf kar de please aur isse bole ye mujhe maf kar de bas yahi to ek meri best friend h mai to majak me boli thi mai kya janti thi ki ye itna bura man jayegi ( aur rone lagi)
Mai- gudiya maf kar do inhe isme meri hi galti h mujhe ye kapda pahan kar aana hi nhi chahiye tha chalo maf kar do
Palvi- aap bich me nhi boliye samjhe iski himat kaise huyi apko insult karne ki aap chup chap andar chali mujhe is se kuchh bat nhi karni h

Fir wo mera hath pakad kar andar le aai aaj mai bhi thoda chuak gya tha uska gusa dekh kar aur mujhe uspe pyar bhi bahut aa rha tha mera kitna chahti h pagli mere liye apne best friend se lad gyi fir isi tarah hamlog mall me aa gye fir wo mujhe boys section me jane ko kah kar washroom chali gyi jab mai boys section gya to waha bhi mujhe sab ghur rhe the jaise mai koi dusre planat se aaya hu fir mai sab ko ignore kar ke kapde dekhne chala gya abhi mai kapda dekh hi rha tha ki waha ek shels boy aa gya aur mujhse bola
Shels boy- are tum yaha kya kar rhe ho tumhe yaha kon aane diya kahi tum chori to nhi kar rhe ho
Mai- are ye aap kya kah rhe h mai aapko chor dikh rha hu kya mai yaha kapde kharidne aa ya hu
Shels boy- (haste huye) tum yaha kapda kharidne aaya h apni aukat dekha h tum jarur yaha chori karne aaye ho chalo dikhao kuchh choraya to nhi h
Mai- thoda tamij se bat karo bahut der se tumhara bak bak sun rha hu
Shels boy- (mera collar pakadte huye ) sale ek to chori karta h aur upar se tight awaj me bat karta h abhi tumhari aukat dikhata hu

Mujhe uske bat par bahut gusa aaya aur mai use marne hi wala tha ki tabhi waha palvi aa gyi usme jab dekha ki ek shels boy mera collar pakda h to uska gusa se aankhe lal ho gya aur wo bina rashan pani ke usko dhulai karne lagi mai uske himat dekh ke tajub huya fir mai dono ko chhodaya aur fir mai palvi se bola

Mai- kya jarurat thi tumhe use marne ki mai yaha tha ya nhi mai use samajh leta agar ladte samay tujhe chot lag jata to
Palvi- iski himat kaise huyi aapko collar pakadne ki aap chhod do hame mai ise abhi batati hu

Is tarah waha ladai hote dekh dhire dhire bhid jama ho gyi phir us mall ka manegar bhi waha aa gya waha pe apne shels boy ko aise halat dekh kar guse se bola

Managar - kya ho rha h yaha aur tumhe ye chot kaise lagi
Shels boy- sir ye yaha chori kar rha tha mai ise padke ke aapke pass la rha tha to ye ladki mujhe piche se aake marne lagi ye ladki bhi iske sath mili huyi h ye log yaha chori karne aaya h
Managar- do kaudi ke log tum me itni himat ki yaha chori karne aya aur yah pe mar pit bhi kiya tumlogo ko kapde ki jarurat thi to is ladki ko ek rat ke liye kisi ke pass sula deta

Uske itna bolte hi mera guse se dimag kharab ho gya aur mai us managar ko marne laga fir usko bachane kuchh shels boy aaye unhe bhi pitne laga mai to jyada jor se nhi mar rha tha lekin mera halke hato se bhi wo log ko jyada lag rha tha

Mai- tumhari himat kaise huya meri bahan ke bare me bolne ka mai tumlogo ko aaj jinda nhi chhodunga

Fir wo log ke taraf badne laga ki achanak palvi ne aake mujhe gale se laga li aur boli

Palvi- chhod do bhai wo log ko kahi wo mar na jaye

Fir mera gusa sant huya tabtak waha pulish aa gya tha sayad hamara ladai dekh kar koi phone kiya hoga waha pulish ko dekh kar palvi ne papa ko call kar ke sab bata diya fir papa bole mai thoda der me pahuch rha hu managar bhagte huye unke pass gya aur bola

Managar- mujhe bacha lijiye sir nhi to ye mujhe mar dalega
Inspector- kya huya h yaha bistar se batao
Managar- sir ye dono yaha chori kar rhe the jab ham inhe pakad ke pulish me dene ki damki di to mere hamlogo ko marne laga aap inhe pakad ke le jao sir
Inspector- kyu re yaha tumhara bap ka raj chal rha h kya jo tum chori bhi kar rhe ho aur marpit bhi chalo thane tumhe ache se maramat karunga
Mai- dekhiye sir mai yaha chori karne nhi aaya tha mai yaha shoping karne aaya tha ye log jhutha iljam laga rhe h aur ye meri bahan ko gali de rha tha is liye isko mara
Inspector- ab tum apna safai thane ja kar dena (Hawaldar se) giraftar kar lo dono ko

Tabhi waha ek awaj aai ruk jao inspector nhi to kahi tumhe pachhtane na pade inspector us taraf dekha to waha mere papa khade the unhe dekh kar inspector bola

Inpector- sir aap yaha kyo aaye aur ye dono ko chori aur marpit ke jurm me le ja rha hu to isme pachhtane kyo
Papa- kyoki ye log chori kar hi nhi sakte h
Inpector- aisa kyo sir
Papa- jiske pass is mall ko kharidne ka takat h wo chori kaise kar sakta h
Inpector- mai kuchh samjha nhi
Papa- ye dono mera beta aur beti h aur mujhe to tum jante hi hoge aur yaha kya huya hai mere bete se puchh lo

yaha pe jo bhi huya tha sab mai bata diya Waha papa ko lagbhag sab jante the kyuki hamara business india me no.1 position pe tha aur world me top 5 me tha waha managar se lekar inspector tak sab ye bat sun kar chauk gaye

Inspector- hame maf kar dijiye sir hame galat information mili thi (fir mujhse) sorry sir

Or phir inpector waha se chala gya
Managar- hamko maf kar dijiye sir hame nhi pata tha ki ye log apke bache h
Palvi- nhi tumhe mafi nhi milagi ab tum dono yaha nokari nhi kar sakte ho (fir papa se boli) papa mujhe ye mall chahiye jisme mere bhai ki insult huya h

 

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Update 19
Inspector- hame maf kar dijiye sir hame galat information mili thi (fir mujhse) sorry sir

Or phir inpector waha se chala gya
Managar- hamko maf kar dijiye sir hame nhi pata tha ki ye log apke bache h
Palvi- nhi tumhe mafi nhi milagi ab tum dono yaha nokari nhi kar sakte ho (fir papa se boli) papa mujhe ye mall chahiye jisme mere bhai ki insult huya h
Ab aage
Papa- thik h beta mai is mall ko kharid leta hu

Fir papa apne p.a ko call kiye aur kuchh bat kiye fir palvi se bole

Papa- beta bas 15 minat me ye mall adi ke name ho jayega ab to tum kush ho na
Palvi- ji papa mai bahut khus hu
Papa- thik h ab tumlog jao aur shoping kar lo ghar se aaye tumlogo ko bahut time ho gya h puspa tumlogo ka intjar kar rhi hogi
Mai- ji papa bas 15 minat me shoping kar ke ghar nikalta hu

Phir ham dono shoping karne lage palvi ne apne pasand se sare kaple liye the mai jake trail room me try kiya aur bahar aa gya jab mai bahar aaya to palvi mujhe dekhte rah gyi us samay mai ek jinse aur black tshirt pahna huya tha use mai apne taraf is tarah dekhte dekh kar bola

Mai- aise kya dekh rhi ho gudiya achha nhi lag rha hu na mai
Palvi- nhi bhaiya aap bahut achha dikh rhe h in kapdo me bahut hi jyada achha dikh rhe h aaj ladkiyo ka khair nhi
Mai- dhat pagal kuchh bhi bolti h mai itna bhi jyad sundar nhi hu jo ladkiya mujh pe mare samjhi
Palvi- nhi bhai sachi bol rhi hu aap in kadpo me bahut sundar dikh rhe ho
Mai- chhodo ye sab bate chalo tumhare liye aur maa papa ke liye bhi shoping kar lete h
Palvi- thik h bhai chaliye

Phir wahi pe papa ke liye kuchh kapde kharide aur fir ladige section me chale gye waha palvi apne liye kapde dekhne lagi aur mai aise hi ghumne laga tabhi mujhe ek dress dikha pink color ka panjabi suit tha mujhe dekhne me bahut achha lag rha tha is liye mai use lekar caunter pe gya aur usko paik karne ko bola fir mai palvi ke pass aa gya jaha wo apne aur maa ke liye kapde kharid rhi thi jab usne kapda le li to hamlog caunter pe aaye aur bill pey kiya bill pay kar ke hamlog nikal hi rhe the ki palvi ke friend mill gyi aur wo fir se palvi se mafi mangne lagi abhi uska dhyan mere upar nhi gya tha

Kavya- please palvi maf kar de mujhse anjane me galti ho gyi mai tumhare bhai se bhi mafi mang lungi please palvi

Tabhi uski najar mujhpe gya aur wo mere me kho gyi wo ektak mujhe dekhne lagi use mujhe is tarah dekhte dekh palvi ko gusa aane lga wo man me sochne lagi
Palvi- ( man me) dekh to kamini ko kaise mere bhai ko ghur rhi h kuchh der pahle to bada hi dehati gwar bol rhi thi aur abhi usi me khoi huyi h kamini khi ki lekin isme is bechari ka bhi koi kasur nhi h mera bhai hai hi itna sundar ki mai bhi usme khone se khud ko rok nhi pa rhi hu
Kavya- (man me ) haye kitna sundar lag rha h maine pahle jane kya kya bol diya haye mai to isi me khote ja rhi hu ye ek bar ha kah de to mai jindagi bhar iske gulam banane ke liye taiyar hu

Mai bahut der se dekh rha tha ki dono mujhe hi ghure ja rhi h mujhe bada atpata lag rha tha is liye mai palvi se bola

Mai- palvi palvi kha kho gyi chalo ghar chalte h bahut der ho gyi h
(Mera itna bolte hi dono hos me aa gyi)
Kavya- please palvi maf kar de (fir mujhse) please aap bhi maf kar dijiye
Mai- are koi nhi kabhi kabhi insan se galti hoti rahti h gudiya please maf kar de inhe dekho dosti me itna chalta rhta h samjhi
Palvi- dekh kavya mai is bar tumhe maf kar rhi hu aainda fir kabhi mere bhai ke bare me kuchh boli to phir hamse bura koi nhi hoga
Kavya- yar mai ab galti se bhi inhe kuchh nhi bolungi chal ab apne bhai se parichay karwao.
Palvi- bhai ye h meri best friend kavya aur kavya ye h mere bhai aditya
Kavya- nice to meet u aditya
Mai- waise mujhe apne log pyar se adi bulate h tum bhi adi bula sakti ho
Palvi- bhai bahut bhukh lagi h chalo na kuchh khate h
Mai- thik h chalo
Kavya- mai bhi chalti hu mujhe bhi bhukh lagi h
Palvi- ha ha chalo tum bhi
Phir hamlog usi mall ke ek resturant gye aur palvi ne pizza ordar ki mujhe bhi pizza bahut pasand tha jab mai bachpan me yaha tha tab pizza bahut pasand tha jab mai bachpan me yaha tha tab pizza bahut khata tha mujhe washroom jana tha to socha jab tak pizza aata h mai washroom se hokar aa jata hu fir mai unlogo se bol kar washroom chala jata hu fir mai washroom se fresh hoke bahar aata hu aur palvi ke pass jane lagta hu ki tabhi mujhe ek ladki se takar ho jata h aur wo niche gir jati aur
Aur fir guse se bolti h

Ladki- haye dhaiya mar dala re kute kamine dikhai nhi deta kya angha h kya
Mai- (usko uthane ke liye hath badhate huye) sorry miss galti se ho gya mera dhyan idhar nhi tha lekin aapko bhi dekh ke chalna chahiye na
Ladki- ( uthte huye ) kamine mujhe chuna bhi mat mai tum jaise ladko ko achi tarah se janti hu sundar ladki dekhi nhi ki pahle dhake marte ho aur phir bad me hath dekar uthane ke bahane idhar udhar chhute ho
Mai- dekhiye miss galti sirf meri nhi apki bhi h apko bhi dekh ke chalna chahiye tha mai to apka madad kar rha tha ulta aap mujhpe iljam laga rhi h
Ladki- u bastard pahle khud mujhe Dhaka Marta h aur bad me jaban ladata h ruko mai abhi tumhe batati hu

Ye bol kar wo mujhe tapad marne ke liye apna hath uthai jo mai bich me hi pakad liya aur usse bola

Mai- dekhiye madam bahut ho gya mai ladki samajh kar kuchh nhi bol rha hu to iska ye matalb nhi ki aap mere sar pe chadh baitha samjhi
Ladki-(guse me ) tumne mujhe pahle Dhaka mara aur bhir mera hath pakad ke achha nhi kiya iska dand tumhe bhugtna padega mai tumhe chhodungi nhi

Itna bol kar ladki chali gyi mai bhi un dono ke pass aa gya mujhe yaha se gye kafi der ho gya tha to palvi boli

Palvi- bhai itna der kyu lagai
Mai- are kuch nhi wo raste me ek ladki se takar ho gya tha bahut hi jyada batamij ladki thi pahle khud galti ki aur mujhse ladne lagi
Palvi- kon thi wo ladki mujhe bataye mai use achhi sabak sikhati
Mai- are bas bas jhasi ki rani waha itna bhi bada problam nhi huya tha ki apki jarurat ho
Palvi- huh to phir thik h

Phir ham sab ne pizza khaya aur mall se bahar nikal gya jaha ek aur musibat mera intjar kar rhi thi jab mai bahar aaya to dekha wo ladki kuchh ladko ke sath idhar udhar dekh rhi thi jab uski najar hampe padi to wo ek ladke ko isara kar ke mere taraf dikhai fir wo ladko ko lekar mere taraf aaya aur bola
Ladka- kyu re jyada charbi chad gya h tune meri bahan ko chhedta h
Mai- dekho bhai mai use chheda nhi h wo to dono ke galti se takar ho gya
Ladka - agar yahi galti mai is ladki ke sath karu to kya kroge (uska isara palvi ke taraf tha)
Mai- dekho bhai mai ladai jhagada nhi chahta hu is liye mujhe jane do
Ladki- bhai dekh kya rhe maro sale ko tum maroge ya mai aau
Ladka- are bahan is jaise chuhe ko marne aane ke liye tumari jarurat nhi h iske liye to mai hi kafi hu

Mai ye logo ke bat ko ignore kar ke aage jane lga ki wo ladka piche se ek kik mara jis se mai thoda aage ho gya mai uske taraf dekhte huye bola

Mai- dekho mujhe gusa nhi dilao nhi to bad me tumhe bahut pachtana padega
Ladka- are wah damaki bhi dete ho kya (phir apne ladko se) are suna tumlogo ne ise gusa gya to mujhe pachhtane padega ( uski bat sun wo ladki or ladke sab hasne lage)

Wo logo ko aise haste dekh palvi ko bahut gusa aa rha tha wo guse me aage badi aur khich ke ek tapad mari us ladke ko wo sare ladke dekhte rah gye fir wo ladka guse se palvi ke bal pakad liya aur bola

Ladka- sali kamini mujhe marti h abhi batata hu tujhe ki Rohit Thakur ko tapad marne ka saja kya h (ji ha dosto ye Rohit Thakur h aur jo ladki h wo h Anshika thakur)

Itna bol kar usne palvi ko ek tapad mar diya jis se uske hoth se khun nikalne laga jise dekh mera gusa bad gya jo abtak sant tha fir mai age badh ke Rohit ko ek tapad mara jis se wo udta huya kuchh dur jake gira aur behos ho gya use is tarah ek hi tapad me behosh hote dekh sare ladke dar gye lekin apne ghamand me sab ek sath mujhpe attack kiya fir kuch hi second me sab behosh ho gye mera ek hi tapad kafi tha wo logo ke liye ye dekh kar Anshika ko bahut gusa aaya aur wo daudte huye mere pass aai aur mujhe ek panch mari uske panch me itna takat tha ki mai udta huya kuch piche jakar gira mere samajh me nhi aa rha tha ki ek normal ladki me itna takat kaise h mai abhi soch hi rha tha ki wo daudte huye mere pas aai aur uchhal ke ek kik mari jis se mai phir se thoda piche ho gya mai is bar khada hi tha ye dekh kar use aur bhi jyada gusa aa gya wo fir se mere taraf daudi is bar mai taiyar tha wo mujhe panch marne hi wali thi ki mai uska hath pakad liya aur bola

Mai - Dekho tum ek ladki ho is liye mai tumpe hath nhi uthana chahta samjhi is liye apne bhai ko lekar jao yaha use hospital ki jarurat h abhi
Anshika- mai to abhi ja rhi hu lekin ye mat samjhna ki ye yahi khatam ho gya mai tumhe sabak sikha ke rahungi tum sayad ye nhi jante ki mai ek aag hu aur aag se khelne wala jal jata h jald hi dubara mulakat hogi

Itna bol kar wo apne bhai ko lekar chali gyi idhar palvi ascharya aur guse se mujhe dekh rhi thi fir mai uske pass gya aur uska khun jo uske hotho se bah rha tha usko pochha aur bola

Mai- kya jarurat thi jasi ki rani banne ki
Palvi- to mai kya karti wo apko kitna kuchh bole ja rha tha jo mujhe bardast nhi huya fir dedi ek rakh ke uske gal pe mujhe ek bat samajh me nhi aaya ki wo ladke aapke ek tapad me behos kaise ho gye
Mai- are kuchh nhi wonkya h na ki mai jaha padhne gya tha na waha martial arts bhi sikha hu sab usi ka kamal h chhodo ye sab chhalo ghar chalte h bahut der ho gya h mummy ghar pe intjar kar rhi hogi
Palvi- ha ha chalo jaldi

Fir hamlog waha se ghar aa gye