Yeh ek kaalpanik kahani hai
Sachchayi se door door tak iska koi vaasta nahi hai
Kirpa karke ismein dikhaye gaye karmo ko asli jindagi mein karne ki koshish na karein
Warna kahin se bhi udti hui chappal aake lag sakti hai
Taada bhi lag sakta
Phir bhi agar aapke gurdo mein khujli hoti hai
Toh uske jimmedar aap khud Honge
Khush rahiye
Swasth rahiye
Aur sath dete rahiye....
UPDATE 1
neelam devi 70saal
jaanki devi 60saal
aur sonia 40 saal
yeh hai ghar ki teen mukhya
deviya
neelam devi ka pariwar
Shalini
uske teen bachche hain
pehli beti..aarti
age 28 saal
vidhwa
dusri beti... Seema
age 27 saal
vidhwa
teesri beti..pooja
age 26
vidhwa
line mein dusri aurat jo khadi thi
woh thi majhli bahu
sushila
iske bhi teen bachche hain
pehli beti neha
age 26 saal
vidhwa
dusri beti rani
age 25 saal
vidhwa
teesri beti komal
age 24
vidhwa
line mein jo teesri aurat khadi thi
woh thi khandan ki badi beti
Chandni
iske bhi teen bachche hain
pehli beti Priya
age 25 saal
vidhwa
dusri beti preeti
age 24 saal
vidhwa
teesri beti Paridhi
age 23 saal
vidhwa
line mein chauthi
aurat jo khadi thi
woh thi ghar ki chhoti beti
meera
iske bhi teen bachche hue
pehli beti anjali
age 22
dusri beti kajal
age 21
teesri beti payal
age 20
jaanki devi ka pariwar
badi bahu
rekha
rekha ke do bachche hain
pehli beti Madhuri
age 22
dusri beti Manisha
age 21 saal
chhoti bahu
aasha
aasha ke bhi do bachche hain
badi beti Deepika
age 20
chhoti beti Anushka
age 19
jaanki devi ki badi beti
geeta
age 32
shaadi hi nahi ki
jaanki devi ki chhoti beti
meeta
age 30 saal
inhone bhi shaadi nahi ki
aur in sabke karta dharta
raja dharamveer singh
jinhone apni jindagi mein aise aise kaand kiye
ki puchho mat
kabhi bhi kisi ki bahu beti ko uthwa lete
aur unhein chod dete
shaadi kisi ki bhi ho
suhagrat yeh manate the
basically yeh sabko apna ghulam maante hain
aur hain bhi sab log inke ghulam
usi ka toh inhein bhugtaan bhi karna pada
ki inka ek bhi waaris nahi hai
upar se 9 granddaughters widow ho gayi
woh bhi shaadi ki raat
jab dharam veer singh mare
toh inke dono bade beto ne apne baap ka kaam sambhala
bada beta Sanjay
chhota beta vijay
dono bhi apne baap ke hi raaste pe chale
yeh dono toh apne baap se bhi ek kadam aage badhe
inhone apne rajye mein personal kotha banwa diya
jahan ek se badhke ek ladkiya hoti
yeh din bhar wahan aiyyashi karte
aur raat ko ghar aajate
jab yeh baat janki devi ke dono beto ko pata chali
toh unhone in dono ko bahut samjhaya
lekin yeh na maane
ek raat yeh dono soye
aur phir uthe nahi
coma mein chale gaye
janki devi ke dono bete
bahut shareef aur suljhe hue the
unhone hi sanjay aur vijay ki betiyo ki shaadi ki
lekin un bechariyo ki kismat ki shaadi ki raat hi woh sab vidhwa ho gayi
uske baad kisi bhi ladki ki shaadi hi nahi hui
ek raat chandni aur meera ke pati bhi coma mein chale gaye
neelam devi ne kayi hawan karwaye pooja karwayi
lekin phir bhi uske pariwar ke upar se yeh shraap nahi hata
geeta aur meeta ko is shraap ke baare mein pata tha.isi liye un dono ne bhi shaadi nahi ki
jab jaanki devi ne un dono pe pressure daala
shaadi karne ke liye
toh dono ne ek hi baat kahi
ki agar dono ke sath zabardasti ki gayi
toh dono sucide kar lengi
wohin chandni aur meera ki shaadi jab dharamveer singh ne kiya
toh dono ke pati ko ghar jamai bana liya
dono bechaare kismat ke maare
kuchh kar bhi nahi sakte the
dharamveer singh tha hi itna powerfull
ek din dharamveer singh ek ladke ko leke aaye
pata nahi kaun tha woh
neelam devi ko gareebo se nafrat thi
usne saaf mana kar diya
ki yeh ladka mere mahal mein nahi reh sakta
dharamveer singh ne neelam devi ko mana liya
5 saal ka tha woh ladka
jab woh 18 saal ka hua
toh dharamveer singh chal base
13 saal se woh ladka dharamveer singh ke mahal mein reh raha tha
lekin wahan ke kisi bhi ek sadasya ne use pyar nahi kiya
pyar toh bahut door ki baat hai
kisi ne uspe rehem bhi nahi kiya
jis din neelam devi vidhwa hui
us din usne us ladke ki chamdi udhed di
hunter se maar maar ke
agle 6 mahine mein ke andar
neelam devi ke dono bete aur dono damad coma mein chale gaye
reh gaye the
sachin aur paras
jaanki devi ke dono bete
waise toh neelam devi se pooa state kaanpta tha
neelam devi ka bas chalta toh woh apne pariwar ke logo ko chhod
poori duniya ko apna ghulam bana leti
sachin aur paras ne apni badi maa ko bahut samjhaya lekin badi maa samajhne ko tayyar hi nahi thi
ek din sachin aur paras ko pata chala
ki uski badi maa ne aadesh diya hai
ki us ladke ko khatam kar diya jaaye
dono use bachane gaye
us ladke ko bachane ke chakkar mein dono maare gaye
jaanki devi buri tarah se toot gayi
apne beto ke marne ki khabar sunke
woh ladka bhaagta raha
apni jaan bachane ke liye
lekin use neelam devi ke aadmiyo ne dhund liya
aur phir neelam devi ke saamne use laaya gaya
neelam devi ke hath mein khanjar tha
neelam devi uski taraf badhi
woh ladka rote hue bola
daadi maine aapka kya bigaada hai
aap aisa kyun kar rahi hain
mujhe chhod dijiye
jaane dijiye mujhe
main kabhi ab yahan nahi aaunga
neelam devi
jis din tu humare ghar aaya
humari zindagi ek shraap ban gayi
tere aane ke baad humare pati chal base
humare bete coma mein chale gaye
tujh naali ke keede ko bachane ke chakkar mein
humare dono chhote bete maare gaye
humari jaanki ek zinda laash bani hui hai
yeh bolke neelam devi ne us ladke ki aankh mein woh khanjar utaar diya
woh ladka cheekhne laga
neelam devi ne woh khanjar nikaala
aur phir uski dusri aankh mein ghusa diya
us ladke ne dum tod diya
neelam devi
fenk do iski laash ko nadi mein
woh us ladke ki laash ko utha le gaye
aur phir use jala diya
tabhi us ladke ne dekha
ki uski chita jal rahi hai
aur phir woh ladka hansne laga
aur phir woh hanste hue cheekh pada.....maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
neelam devi apne room mein soyi hui thi
is baat se bekhabar ki woh ladka uske room mein hai
aur use dekh raha hai
in future
mere saamne neelam devi aur uske poore khaandan ki ek ek aurat aur ek ek ladki nangi ghutno ke bal baithi thi
main neelam devi ke paas pahuncha
aur uske honton pe apni ungliya ferne laga
main
apna munh kholo
neelam devi ne apna munh khola
main apna lund uske munh mein pel diya
aur uske sar ko pakadke uske munh ko badi berehmi se chodne laga
neelam devi ki aankhein bahar ko aagayi
neelam devi ki aankho se aansu behne lage
main tab tak uske munh ko chodta raha
jab tak mera paani nahi nikal gaya
main lund uske gale mein pele hue tha
neelam devi mera saara ras pee gayi
main lund uske munh se apna lund nikaala
aur phir jaanki devi ki taraf dekha
un sabke hosh ude hue the
ki abhi abhi main jhada tha
aur mera lund phir bhi khada tha
ek samay woh bhi tha
inki najar main ek kutta bhi nahi tha
aur aaj yeh sab meri rakhel hain
mera naam surya hai
aur yeh meri kahani hai....
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