Romance Bewafa (Hum ya Woh ?) completed

[Monkey D. Dragon]

Story review dene se pahle ek baat zo xp pay kahna chahta tha but keh nahi paya. Ye story agar kahi se churai hai woh bhi bina credit se to is thand mai baraf wala pani se nehla dunga keya duba dunga lol m just joooking.
Btw i know my bro wont do a thing like that.
Although ye story mujhe bilkul bhi acha nahi lagta zab bhi parhta hu but this story is truly a master piece
I can say the best story from you ever i had
(I personally dont like emotional or sad ending stories.)
It says Bengalians loves the tragedy/emotional story but as a bengalian i never like these it just makes me very angry but who cares

 

[E$COBAR]

Story review dene se pahle ek baat zo xp pay kahna chahta tha but keh nahi paya. Ye story agar kahi se churai hai woh bhi bina credit se to is thand mai baraf wala pani se nehla dunga keya duba dunga lol m just joooking.
Btw i know my bro wont do a thing like that.
Although ye story mujhe bilkul bhi acha nahi lagta zab bhi parhta hu but this story is truly a master piece
I can say the best story from you ever i had
(I personally dont like emotional or sad ending stories.)
It says Bengalians loves the tragedy/emotional story but as a bengalian i never like these it just makes me very angry but who cares

Fuck didn't expect this type of review on this story.

Mujhe to tbh boht immature writing lagti hai mere is story ki. Well ye churai huyi to nahi hai but inspired hai aik dost k life se. End ko chorh k baki sab real hai

Btw for your beautiful review

 

[Monkey D. Dragon]

Fuck didn't expect this type of review on this story.

Mujhe to tbh boht immature writing lagti hai mere is story ki. Well ye churai huyi to nahi hai but inspired hai aik dost k life se. End ko chorh k baki sab real hai

Btw for your beautiful review

Nah ye ek master piece hai.
Well maine aise bohot ending dekhe(real life mai ek to relatives tha) sune hai
But woh sabh messenger pai bataunga agar kabhi time mila to

 

[E$COBAR]

Nah ye ek master piece hai.
Well maine aise bohot ending dekhe(real life mai) sune hai
But woh sabh messenger pai bataunga agar kabhi time mila to

Ho sakta hai, jab messenger pe gapshap hogi to mein bhi mazeed baatein khul k karunga

 

[Monkey D. Dragon]

Maine pahle bhi kaha hai tujhme writing ka skills hai , tu bas jab thriller romance or adventure likhe to reality wise likhna. Baki sab sahi hai as an experienced reader. Maine educational chor ke sirf 2500 book hi parha hai apne life mai not just short books. And ab to kuch ke naam bhi bhul raha hu just kabhi kabhi story ka ek ek part flash hota hai or mai pagal ho zata hu usko dhudne ke liye

 

[E$COBAR]

Maine pahle bhi kaha hai tujhme writing ka skills hai , tu bas jab thriller romance or adventure likhe to reality wise likhna. Baki sab sahi hai as an experienced reader. Maine educational chor ke sirf 2500 book hi parha hai apne life mai not just short books. And ab to kuch ke naam bhi bhul raha hu just kabhi kabhi story ka ek ek part flash hota hai or mai pagal ho zata hu usko dhudne ke liye

Chalo aik din mera book bhi parhoge

 

[YUDI]

Review k sath ye bhi bataye k aap logo ko kya lagta hai kon bewafa hai is kahani mein ?
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• Zeeniya - Jo Zakki se pehle shadi kar rhi hai.​
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• Zakki - Jo apne family ko mana nahi saka aur is dunya ko chorh k chala gaya ?​
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• Ya koi aur ?​

Zindgi

 

[Monkey D. Dragon]

Review k sath ye bhi bataye k aap logo ko kya lagta hai kon bewafa hai is kahani mein ?
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• Zeeniya - Jo Zakki se pehle shadi kar rhi hai.​
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• Zakki - Jo apne family ko mana nahi saka aur is dunya ko chorh k chala gaya ?​
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• Ya koi aur ?​

Well bewafa to mujhe, writer hi lagta hai. Dono ko bulaya writer ne, shadi bhi karwa Raha hai writer. last Mai mar hi dala writer ne. To ye writer hi bewafa hai

 

[Scorpio 🦂]

Review k sath ye bhi bataye k aap logo ko kya lagta hai kon bewafa hai is kahani mein ?
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• Zeeniya - Jo Zakki se pehle shadi kar rhi hai.​
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• Zakki - Jo apne family ko mana nahi saka aur is dunya ko chorh k chala gaya ?​
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• Ya koi aur ?​

Qismat ki lakeerein... jo humare hath me hote hue bhi humari nahi hoti.

 

[Scorpio 🦂]

Bohat hi shandaar or emotional kahani hai bro... ending aisi sochi nahi thi par ek sach ye bhi k adhuri muhabbat ki kahaniyan to azal se chalti aa rahi hain or shayad ye qayamat tak jaari rahengi... kisi khaas insan ka mil jana phir us khaas insan ka humari zindagi ban jana or phir inteha ye k uske baghair zindagi guzarni hogi phir aise me qabar ka ehsas hota hai jo qayamat tak apne aagosh se nikalne nahi deti