UPDATE 13
Main jab us chamber se bahar nikla
toh mere kapdo pe khoon dekhke sab chaunk gaye
reema madam bhaagti hui mere paas aayi
reema..kahan hai shamita
main kuchh nahi bola
itni training lene ke baad bhi main shamita ko nahi bacha paaya
laanat hai meri jindagi pe
main aage badhne laga
reema..prem tum chup kyun ho
batate Kyu nahi
main..mar gayi shamita
yeh sunke reema ki aankho mein aansu aagaye
main..aaj date kaunsi hai
reema..teen din hi toh gujre hain
main.. matlab
reema.. matlab tumhein yahan aaye hue teen din hi hue hain
chalo meri aadhi problem toh solve ho gayi
main..ab mujhe mere gaon chhod dijiye
Reema..tumhare kapdo pe yeh khoon kiska hai
main..bahut sawal puchhti hain aap
aur main aage badh gaya
reema bhi mere peechhe peechhe aane lagi
uske baad hum ship mein baith gaye
aur kuchh der baad hum gaon pahunch gaye the
Reema..maine kaha tha shamita se
ki woh andar na jaaye
lekin usne meri baat nahi maani
main..ab mujhe in baato se koi matlab nahi hai
yeh bolke main apne ghar ki taraf badh gaya
raaste mein maine apne kapdo pe lage khoon ko saaf kiya
jaise hi ghar mein ghusa
poore ghar mein maatam chhaaya hua tha
tabhi meena didi ki najar mujhpe padi
aur unki aankho mein aansu aagaye
sheetal ne jaise hi mujhe dekha
bhaagte hue aayi
aur mere seene se lag gayi
uske rone ki awaj sunke sabki najar mujhpe padi
aur woh sab bhi mere paas pahunchi
unke sawal
3 din se main kaha tha
tabhi daadi aake mujhse lipat gayi
aur rone lagi
maine itna hi bola ki thakur ke kaam se bahar gaya tha
yeh sunke Madhuri didi ne thakur ko gaaliya deni shuru kar di
main apne room mein aake let gaya
jaise hi aankhein band kiya
shamita ka chehra mere saamne aagaya
Reena..bhaiya so gaye kya
main..nahi gudiya
Reena..kahan the aap
main.. bahar gaya tha kisi kaam se
reena school se abhi abhi ghar aayi thi
main..ab school jaane lagi
Reena.. aap jab gayab ho gaye
toh daadi aur baaki sab bahut roye
phir daadi ne mujhe kaha ki main roz school jaya karu
mera prem yahi chahta tha
aur reena mere paas aake baith gayi
main..man lagake padhai karna
reena chali gayi
uske jaate hi meena didi room mein aagayi
aur mere paas baith gayi
Meena..yeh sab chhod Kyu nahi deta
agar tujhe kuchh ho gaya
toh teri maa behno ka kya hoga
kahan bhatkengi woh
main..aap apni batao
mere jaane ke baad aapko kaisa lagega
yeh sunke woh chaunk gayi
meena..kaisa lagega matlab
tu mera bhai hai
bura toh mujhe bhi lagega
main..ab nahi jaaunga kahin bhi
promise
Meena..kya baat badi English bol raha hai
kahan se seekha
meena baithi hui thi
main apna sar unki godi mein rakh diya
meena didi ki aankhein badi ho gayi
woh mujhe dekhne lagi
main apni aankhein band kiya
aur meena didi mere sar ko sehla ne lagi
raat mein. sab sone ke liye
room mein aagaye
main soya tha
mere bagal mein Madhuri didi
uske bagal mein maa
sheetal daadi ke sath soti thi
neend toh aanahi rahi thi
tabhi mujhe apne sar pe kisi ka hath Mehsus hua
main aankhein khola
toh dekha shamita madam thi
Shamita.. hello devdaas
main samajh gaya ki yeh madam ki aatma hai
main unke sath chhat pe aagaya
Shamita..ab aise rahoge
toh pata hai na mujhe kitni takleef hogi
Shamita..main toh waise bhi mar jaati
chamber se bahar nikalte hi
tum Kyu guilt mehsus kar rahe ho
main..aapne mujhe pehle Kyu nahi bataya
shamita..agar main tumhein pehle bata deti
toh master tumhein maar dete
main shamita se lipat gaya
Shamita..main humesha tumhare sath rahungi
Jaya..kisse baatein kar rahe ho
prem
main Jaya chachi ki taraf dekha
main..kisi se nahi chachi
Jaya.. aise bina bataye mat jaaya karo
hum sab pareshan ho jaate hain
main..ab nahi jaaunga chachi
Jaya.. hmm
ab jaao apne kamre mein
main chachi ke paas pahuncha
aur unhein dekhne laga
Jaya..kya hua
main..aapka kaam ho ho gaya ki nahi
Jaya..abhi toh nahi
itni jaldi thodi hota hai
main chachi ka hath pakda
aur unhe room mein leke ghus gaya
Jaya..abhi nahi prem
koi upar aasakta tha hai
main..koi nahi aayega chachi
aur main chachi ko kiss karne laga
woh bhi mera sath dene lagi
kuchh der tak kiss karne ke baad main unhein nanga kar diya
aur khud bhi ho gaya
Jaya..hero jaise dikhne lage ho
kya baat hai
main..aapka jaadu hai
yeh bolke main unhein lita diya
aur phir unke upar aake unki chuchiyon ko chusne laga
chachi aahein bharne lagi
jaya.. uff prem tum toh mujhe paagal hi kar dete ho
aur chuso inhein
khaa jaao uff maa
main chachi ke boobs tab tak chusta raha
jab tak mera man nahi bhar gaya
phir main unki choot pe apna munh rakh diya
aur dekhte hi dekhte Chachi ka paani nikal gaya
uske baad chachi mere lund ko chusne lagi
main..bas aise hi chusiye chachi
bahut maza aaraha hai
aur andar lijiye
chachi bhi gale tak bhar bhar ke lund chusne lagi
kuchh der baad unhone lund munh se nikaal liya
aur haanfne lagi
main unhein lita diya
aur unke choot pe lund set karke dhakka maar diya
aadha lund ghus chuka tha choot mein
aur agle dhakke mein lund bachchedani se takra gaya
chachi ki cheekh mere munh mein hi dab gayo
main bina ruke unhein chodne laga
Jaya..oh prem bas aise hi chodo apni chachi ko
bahut maza aaraha hai aur zor se prem
agar aisa hi raha toh main tunhari ghulam ban jaaungi
bas aise hi beta aur zor se chodo
kuchh der mein unka paani nikal gaya
main unhein ulta lita diya
aur phirse unhein chodne laga
is postion mein chachi ki haalat kharab hone lagi thi
chachi ki aahein poore room mein gunj rahi thi
Jaya..uff prem yeh sab kahan seekha beta
roz din alag tarah se chodte hai
kaash meri shaadi tumse hui hoti
uff maa aaj toh jaan hi nikal rahe ho
kuchha der mein chachi ki choot ne phirse paani chhod diya
aur aakhir mein main bhi chachi ki choot mein paani chhod diya
chachi ka 6 baar paani nikla tha
chachi mujhe dekh rahi thi
Jaya..kya hua hai pareshan lag rahe ho
main apne room mein aake so gaya
subah jab madhuri ki aankh khuli
toh usne dekha
ki woh prem se lipti hui hai
subah hone ki wajah se prem ka lund khada tha
Madhuri ko kuchh samajh nahi aaya woh kya kare
woh jaise hi alag hone ki koshish ki
prem ne use aur kaske gale laga liya
madhuri ki aah nikal gayi
prem ka lund madhuri ki naabhi ko touch kar raha tha
madhuri ki saansein tez ho gayi
woh waise hi let gayi
meri jab aankh khuli
toh main didi se lipta hua tha
didi so rahi thi
main unse alag hua
aur bathroom chala gaya
nahake jab room mein aaya
toh didi jaa chuki thi
main apne kapde pehna
aur angan mein aake baith gaya
seema didi mere liye nashta leke aagayi
bade aur chhote chacha apne kaam pe jaa chuke the
main paise ka bag nikaala
aur nikal gaya sheher
wahan jaake ek account khulwaya
usmein saare paise daal diya
phir jaake ek phone khareeda
sim daala
aur naresh ko call kiya
Naresh ne mujhe address bata diya
usne jaise hi mujhe dekha chaunk gaya
Naresh..tum toh bachche ho
maine use bataya
ki mujhe share market mein paisa lagana hai
woh mujhe kuchh der tak samjhata raha
2 ghante tak
dmat account
budget
invest in large cap or midcap
dont go for penny stocks
main..yeh aapka kaam hai
mujhe batana
ki mujhe kis company ke share khareedne hain
kiske nahi
aap bas mujhe call kar dena
Naresh..aur agar main tumhare paise khaa gaya
main use ghurne laga
Naresh.. matlab
kisi pe bhi andha vishwas nahi karna chahiye
main.. meri kismat thodi le jaaoge aap
Naresh..theek hai
phir main apne hisaab se tumhare stock khareedunga
aur 10 percent lunga
jitna tum invest karoge
main..20 Percent
ab mere paas jo paisa tha
woh kaunsa mere khoon paseene ka tha
haram ka hi toh paisa tha
ghar aate aate sham ho gayi
main ghar aaya
aur apne room mein aake let gaya
tabhi sheetal mere paas aagayi
sheetal..bhaiya main aapki behen hoon ki nahi
main...aisa kyun bol rahi ho gudiya
sheetal..reena school jaa sakti hai
lekin main nahi
main.. kal se tum bhi chali jaaya karna
sheetal..daadi maan jaayengi
main.. unhein main dekh lunga
tabhi Madhuri didi room mein aagayi
Madhuri..chhote chacha tumhein bula rahe hain
bahut gusse mein hain
main bahar nikla
dekha sachmein woh gusse mein the
aur tabhi unhone mujhe thappad maar diya
hardev..tumhara dimaag kharab hai
thakur sahab ke bete ko tumhari himmat kaise hui maarne ki
main..aapko kisne bataya
hardev..toh yeh sach hai
main..bataya kisne
hardev..ek ladke ne
use hosh aagaya
chalo ab haveli pe
main.. chaliye
aur main haveli pe pahunch chuka tha
thakur uska beta
aur ajit ki maa
teeno mujhe ghur ghur ke dekh rahe the
main ek chair pe baith gaya
thakur aur Arjun Singh ka khoon khaul gaya
deepali..gusse mein..khade khade dekh kya rahe ho arjun
iska sar kaatke fenk do
main..aapka beta ek ladki ka rape kar raha tha
woh mere sath padhti thi
dusra koi rehta toh use jaan se maar deta
aapka beta tha isi liye use zinda chhod diya
deepali.. arjun
tumne suna nahi
arjun..theek hai chhoti maa
jab aap yahi chahti hain
toh theek hai
Bheem Singh
bheem Singh aage aaya
6.5 feet ka haiwaan
normal aadmi dekhke hi ghabra jaaye
itna bhayankar dikhta tha woh
arjun..khatam kar do
bheem meri taraf badha
thakur chup karke baitha hua tha
hardev..maalik ek baar ki galti toh bhagwan bhi maaf kar deta hai
ise maaf kar dijiye
main..kya hai chacha
side ho jaao
chacha ka khoon khaul gaya
arjun..hat jaao hardev
aur phir chacha hat gaye
bheem mere paas pahuncha
aur usne mera gala dabana shuru kar diya
gaon mein sab jaante the ki bheem ne agar kisi ka gala pakad liya
toh woh marta bhi rahega.tab bhi woh gala nahi chhodega
meri saansein band hone lagi thi
wow
ab jaake mehsus hua dard kya hota hai
main dono hath se bheem ke kaano pe taali bajaya
bheem ki cheekh nikal Gayi
uske kaanp se khoon nikalne laga
main bheem ke gaal pe phirse hath maara
aur bheem behosh hoke neeche gid pada
sabki aankhein chaundhya gayi
bheem akayle 50 logo ko maar sakta tha
deepali..goli maar do
ise Arjun
arjun.. pitaji chhoti maa se kahiye
ki apne room mein jaaye
thakur.. tumhein toh pata hai
ki woh kitne gusse waali hai
Deepali..haramzaade kutte
mera beta kisi ke sath kuchh bhi kar sakta hai
woh maalik hai
tu hota kaun hai use rokne waala
teri aukaat kya hai
tere baap ne humari ghulami ki
tera dono chacha humari ghulami karta hai
tu bhi humara ghulam hai
aur tu humare bete pe hath uthayega
ek baar mera beta theek ho jaaye
phir tere khandan ki ek ek aurat
mere bete ke bistar pe hogi
thakur.. thakurain
deepali..aap chup rahiye
main thakur ki taraf dekha
thakur..prem thakurain ke pair pakadke maafi maango
main thakurain ke pair pakad liya
usne mujhe laat maar di
deepali..dafa ho jaa yahan se
main chacha ke sath haveli se nikal gaya
hardev.. bhagwan ki kirpa hai
thakurain ne humein maaf kar diya
warna pata nahi kya hota
main..chacha aap chalo main thoda gaon ghumke aata hoon
chacha ne mujhe ghura aur chale gaye
uske baad main haveli ki taraf badh gaya
jaise hi sabne mujhe dekha chaunk gaye...
shamita bhi aatma ban gayi..... shayad uski ruh ko prem ka dard saha nahi gaya, isiliye wapis laut aayi....agle din meera ke kahe mutabik prem sara paisa naresh ko de diya share market mein lagane ke liye....... maybe yahin se ameer banne ka raah khul chuka hai....
dusri taraf thakur aur uske gharwaalo ko pata chal gaya ki ajit ko maarne wala saksh aur koi nahi balki prem hi hai.....
Prem waha pahunchte hi thakur ki haweli pe bada hungama hua...... prem ab pehle hi tarah nahi tha.... uski fauladi haatho ke ek waar se hi bheema ka kissa khatam ho gaya.....
I think haweli wapis isiliye jaa raha hai kyunki jo apaman hua tha uska badla lena jo tha prem ki...
Shaandaar update, shaandaar lekni aur shaandaar shabdon ka chayan...
bahot nirale aur dilachasp tarike se update ko pesh kiya gaya hai..
.. let's see what happens next...
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sala suru se hi 
hu phale dadi me hero ki behan ko bech diya 
fir hero ka baap 
jo khud ki beti ko bech raha 
le ya 
kar le ko Kay kar lega 
sayad kar le 
jarur iske piche koi sajish hai 
hero bhi Kamal ka hi fight kar ke 
ka rasta chun liya 
khair thakur ne bacha liya 
but apna koi khatarnak kam karne ke liye. Hero ready bhi ho gaya aur kam bhi kar diya but uder se bag na de rahe the aur isko hi shut kar diya 
aur hero mara nahi 
hero ne sab ko maar diya 
aur ek Ghayal ho gai but ye kya 
ye to iski behen nikli 
ab dekte hai ki vo bach pati hai ki nahi 
full emotional update 
