Incest Ek bechara (एक बेचारा)

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Update 23
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mai chilla kar - abe o suaro ki aulaado, dikhayi nahi deta kya, jab gadi chalane nhi aati to kyun rakhhe ho,
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Meri baato ko sun kar scorpio wale ne apni gaadi rok di aur fir apne gate khola...
Ye ek lagbhag 65 saal ka budha tha, jisko dekhte ke sath lag raha tha ki iska audha bhi shayad bijendra dada jaisa hi hoga.
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Ab aage
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(New introduction)
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Sukhdev seth ( lala) 65 - bijendra ji ke gao ka hi ek rasukhdaar aur ghamandi insaan, shehar me iska apna realstate ka business hai, par wo shirf naam ka hai, baaki real state ke aad me ye bahot saare gair kanuni dhande ko anjam deta hai, jaise drugs smugling, duplicate medecine,
Illegal transport, aur bhi bahot sara gair kanuni kaam karta hai ye.
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Hari laal ( munsi)56 - ye hai seth ka chamcha, jo ki seth ki saari legal aur illegal dhando ki lekha jokha rakhta hai, ye hamesh seth ke sath hi rahta hai.
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Kallu pahalvan 26( seth ka personal bodyguard ) - kallu sukhdev seth ka personal bodyguard hai, par uski ek aur parichay bhi hai jo ki aage kahani ke sath sath pata chalega.
Kallu ke pita gaao me akhada khole huye hai aur waha wo gai ke navyuvko ko kushti ke gur sikhate hai.
Kallu uss akhade ka sabse behtar pehalwaan hai, par kuchh majboori ke kaaran usse lala ka bodyguard banna pada, baaki dil ka bahot saaf hai.
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(Lala ki family)
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Ranjeet ( bada beta) 50 - baap ke sath uske saare ache aur bure dhando me involve rahta hai... Ek taraf se dekha jaye to lala ka itna bada gair kanuni dhande ko khada karna ranjeet ke tez dimag ke vajah se hi hua hai. Ladkiyo ko tuchh samjhta hai, iske anusaar ladkiya sirf ladko ke bistar garm karne ki chiz hoti hai. Par kahte hai na ki jo insaan darinda hota hai unhi ke naseeb me bhagvaan kisi sati savitri ko likh deti hai, waisa hi haal kuchh iska hai, jitna kameena ye hai utni hi sidhi aur sanskaari iski bibi reena hai.
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Reena ( ranjeet ki patni) 45- ye ek shant swabhav ki aurat hai , isko shirf apne bache aur bhagvaan ki pooja inhi do chizo se matlab hai,
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Rockey 25(Ranjeet aur reena ka beta) - ye ek awara kism ka insaan hai,jyadatar sahar me hi apne baap ke farmhouse me raate rangeen karte rahta hai. Par gai me jab bhi aata hai to ekdam seedha ban ke aata hai, kaaran hai sheetal , sheetal ka jisse vivaah tay hua hai wo rockey hi hai. Rockey jab se sheetal ko dekha tha rab se hi uske jism ke prati uski iraade badal gaye the... Par usne jaldbaaji nhi ki, rockey bhi apne baap jaisa hi bahot tez tha... Usne dimag lagaya aur apne gao me apni ek alag hi chhavi bana li. Sath hi sath sheetal ke maa ke dil me bhi ek achhe ladke ki chhavi bana li, yahi karan tha ki uske ek baar bolne matra se hi sheetal ki maa shadi ke liye razi ho gyi thi.
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Simran 20( urf simi) - ye jaldi gao nhi aati hai, jyadatar shahar me hi rahti hai, iska nature apni maa jaisa hai, kabhi bhi galat kaam nhi karti hai , hamesha apni study pe focused rahti hai.

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Ab kahani ke taraf
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" Ee kon hai re hariya, gao me pahle to kabhi nhi dekha dekha hai, par chehra kuchh jana pehchana lag rha hai, aur iske sath itni subah subah sheetal ka kar rhi hai. "
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Lala ne jaise hi kishan ki aawaj suni waise hi gadi se utar kar munshi se poocha.
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Lala ke gaadi se bahar nikalte hi munshi aur kallu pehalwaan bhi bahar nikal gya.
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" Kaun hai re Tu chhokre, aur yahann seth ji ki hone waali bahu ke sath kya kar rha hai... Aur sheetal bitiya aap yaha kya kar rhi ho... Aapko maalum hai na ki aap kuchh mahino me seth ji ke ghar ke bahu banogi to aise itne subah subah kisi gair mard ke sath ghumna achhi baat nhi. "
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Munshi ne pahle to tav se kishan se uska parichay poochha fir baad me sheetal se uske yaha hone ka karan.
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"Sheetal" Jo ki lala ko gadi se utarte hi pehchan gyi thi, usse dekh kar darne lagi...
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Sheetal - wo wo, mai kal nimi ke ghar pe thi kaka, to ussi ke sath subah tahalne nikli thi, aur ye koi gair nhi hai, ye swargiye shambhu pratap ji ke pote hai yaha kalpana didi ke shadi me aaye hai.
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Sheetal ne jaise hi mera parichay diya waise hi wahan mauzud teeno shaks ke chehre ki bhav badal gaye.
Lala ke chehre pe ek nafrat aur aaahcharya ke bhao aagye the kishan ke shambhu pratap ji ke pote hone ki baat jaan kar,
Wahi munsi bhi aashchrya chakit hokar kishan ko dekhne laga, par uske chehre pe ek dar ka bhai bhi mujhe dekhne ko mila,
Wahin, kallu pehalvaan ke aankho me ek chamak dikhi thi mujhe, uske chehre pe aschrya ke saath khushi ke bhi bhai dikhe.
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Mujhe to kuchh samajh nhi aarha tha ki ye sab mere baare me sun kar aise kyu react kar rhe hai, mai to bas abhi yahi soch rha tha ki yahi hai wo log jinke ghar me sheetal ki shadi set hua hai.
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Pata nhi kyu, par mujhe ye jaan kar bahot bura lag raha tha. Shayad mai ab sheetal ko pasand karne ke sath sath pyar bhi karne laga tha. Mujhe achha nhi lag rha tha ki sheetal kisi aur ki ho jaye. Par abhi mai aisa kuchh karna nhi chahta tha jisse ki meri life me aur bhi pareshaniya aaye. Aur pahle sheetal ke man ki baat bhi to jaanna tha, uske baad hi iske baare me kuchh sochta.....
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Munshi - achha thik hai sheetal bitiya, dikha do chhote pratap ji ko apna gao fir. Ham log chalte hai. Hame der ho rhi hai.
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Munsi ji jaise hi waha se jaane lage maine unhe aawaj laga kar roka... Zahir si baat hai jiss baag ke liye usse roka tha wo ti hua hu nhi, aur kisi ko aise hi chhod dena mujhe pasand nahi...
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Mai - are thoda rukiye uncle ji, hamse bina mile kaha ja rhe hai... Av itna subah subah gaadi ko havayi jahaj bana kar nikal rhe ho, to thoda hamse bhi mil lo na.
Aur iss havaayi jahaj ko kon chutiya uda rha tha jara mujhe bataiye.
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Tabhi lala udhar se bolta hai .
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Lala - jaban samhal Kar baat karo ladke, varna yahi zameene dafan kar dunga tumhe... Tum mehmaan ho to mehmaan ban kar rh. Chalo hariya...
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Munshi - aur hann, wo Mai tha jo gaadi chala rha tha, bol kya bolna hai tujhe bol.
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Mai - filhaal to mai jyada kuchh nhi bolna chahta kyonki mai iss gao me koi bakheda nhi karna chahta, kyonki mai yaha shadi me aaya hun mehmaan ban kar...
Par ek hidayat deta hunn munshi ji, apni havayi jahaj ko soch samajh kar kahi le jana, ekadh baar tufaan me fas gayi na to tum sab gayab ho jaoge....
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Chalo sheetal....
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Itna bol kar kishan sheetal ki hath pakad kar waha se nikal gaya, aur jakar nimi aur rj ke paas baith gya...
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Aur idhar munshi - tum waha khade khade kya tamasha dekh rahe the kallu, jab wo ladka mere aur seth ji ke baare me ulti sidhi baate kar rha tha ! Yahi duty nibha rhe ho tum.... Koi bhi raah chalte hame gaali dekar chala jaye.
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Kallu - maaf karna munshi ji, par mai pratap ji ke kisi bhi sadasya pe hath nhi utha sakta. Unke bahut se upkaar hai hmare pariwar par.
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Lala - apna upakar apne pichhwade me daal le re kallua, saala wo 2 din ka chhokra hame suna kar chala gya aur tu upkaar ki baate kar rha hai.
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Fir teeno gaadi me baith kar shahar ki taraf nikal jaate hai.
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Charo kuchh der vyayam, yog aur daud lagte hai fir kishan rajnish ko wapas haveli chalne ko kahta haii, aaj se shadi ki veedh prarambh hone wala tha haveli me,
Aaj mehndi ke rashm ke sath sath aur bhi bahut saare kshetriye veedh aur rashm hone the.
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Wapas aate waqt bhi rj aur nimi apne me hi lage rhe,
Aur unke pichhe mai aur sheetal chupchap chale aa rhe the...
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Jab se mai,... lala aur munshi se mila tha, aur usse mujhe ye pata chala tha ki lala ke ghar me hi sheetal ka byaah tay hua hai, tab se mujhe kuchh bechaini si hone se lagi thi, dil me kahi dard sa uthne laga tha,... Aur man me chal rhe issi udhedbun ke karan mai abhi tak sheetal se kuchh bhi nhi bola tha.
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Sheetal bhi ye baat note kar rhi thi .
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Sheetal -" Kya hua kishan, aap kuchh bol kyu nhi rahe hai, mujhse koi galti ho gyi hai kya... "
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Mai - are nhi to, aisi koi baat nhi hai mai to bas aaj haveli me kya kya kaam bacha hai karne ko yahi sab soch rha tha.
Achha tumhare ghar me kon kon hai sheetal, ?
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Sheetal -filhaal to bas mai aur meri maa hai.... Papa abhi bhi dehradoon me hi hai, wo bhi army me hai na to unki duty wahi lagi pe base camp me lagi huyi hai.
Mai bhi wahin pe thi, pichhle mahine hi gao aayi hun...
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Mai - achha issiliye tum ne uss din bola tha ki mujhe pahle kabhi dehradun me dekhi ho.
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Sheetal - hann, par wi mere muh se achanak nikal gya tha,.... Sach to ye h ki mai pahle tumhe kabhi nhi dekhi hun.
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Mai - achha.... Waise shadi kab h tumhari. ( kishan aage dekhte huye bolta hai, jise sunkar sheetal uske chehre aur aankho ko dekhne lagti hai.
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Sheetal - .... .......
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Mai - kya hua, shadi ty huyi hai tumhari to apne dosto ko nhi bulaogi kya.
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Sheetal - mujhe nhi pata, meri shadi mujhse bina poochhe huye meri ma ne tay kar di, jabki Mai abhi shadi nahi karna chahti.
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Mai - kya.....? Tumne ladke ko dekha hai, ya fir uske baare me pata lagaya h ki nhi.
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Sheetal - Mai ne usse dekha hai dikhne me to thik hi lagta hai, par mujhe uske vyavhaar kuchh sasi nhi lagta. Gao me to shareef bana firta hai, Par neelam aur saveeta ka kahna hai ki shahar me wo apne college me poori aiyaashi karta hai.... Are wo bhi to aake hi shahar ne rahta hai... Wahi uske dadd ji ki apni buisness hai.
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Mai - jab tum itna sab kuchh janti ho to shadi kyun kar rhi ho usse, jab wo itna ghatiya hai tab to wo tumhari zindagi barbaad kar dega.
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Sheetal - Mai ne maa ko bahut samjhaya, par unka kehna hai ki shadi ke baad wo sudhar jayega. Aur wo kahti hai ki agar ab wo shadi ko todne ki koshish karengi to fir aage chal kar jab bhi meri kisi se shadi hogi go uss shadi me lala pareshani karega.
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Sheetal ki baat sun kar Mai achanak ruk gya, aur mere man me bas yehi khayal aaya ki ab Mai sheetal ko apne dil ki baat bol din, iss se acha mauka shayad fir dobara na mile.
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Mere achanak rukne se sheetal jo thoda aage chal gayi thi wo pichhe mud kar dekhi , aur mujhe yun khud ko ghoorta dekh nazre niche kar li.
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Ham dono abhi haveli ke pichhe wale bagiche me pahunche the... Jaha iss waqt koi nhi tha,... Rj aur nimi bhut aage nikal chuke the, shayad haveli bhi pahunch chuke honge.
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Mai dheere dheere sheetal ki aankho me dekhte huye uske taraf badhne laga. Aur uske paas pahonch kar uske haath pakad liye... Aur uske baad..
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" Sheetal, Mai kal se hi tumhe kuchh kehna chah raha tha, par maine jaise hi suna ki tumhari shadi tay ho gyi hai waise hi pichhe hat gya... Par ab nhi....
"Sheetal " Mai tumse bahut pyar karne laga hun, pata nhi kyunn tumhe dekhta hun to lagta hai tum me meri poori duniya samayi huyi hai....
Mai tumhe al a bana chahta hun sheetal,...
I love you.... Sheetal...
Kya tum meri pyaar ko apna sakti ho. . .
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Kishan jo ki itna bolte bolte apne ghutne pe baith gya tha aur ek aas bhari nigaho se sheetal ke jabab ka intezaar karne laga tha.... Par sheetal.... Ek pal ke liye to sheetal ko aisa laga ki usne poori duniya hi jeet li ho aur uske aankho se khushi ke aanshu tak girne lage.
Par jaise hi usse yaad aata hai ki uske shadi ek aise gharane me pahle hi tay ho chuki hai , jahan ke log insaan nhi balki haivaan hai.
Gao bhar me lala aue uske bete ranjeet ke kisse mashhoor the, rockey yahan nhi rhata tha islye usske baare me yaha gao me bahut kam log hi jante honge.
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" Mujhe maaf kar do kishan, Mai bhi tumhe bahut pasand karti hun par Mai ye shadi nhi tod sakti warna wo log ( lala aur ranjeet) hamare pariwar ko jine nhi denge , aur agar unhe pata chala ki Mai tum se pyar karti hun to wo tumhe bhi nuksaan pahunchane ke koshish karenge. Aur agar tumhe kuchh ho gya to Mai jeete ji mar jaungi.
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(Rote huye)
Mere bhagya me hi pyaar nhi likha hai kishan.... Nhi likha hai.... "
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys... Agla update ek mega update hoga neha se related... Jiska zikra maine pichhle mega update dene se pahle kiya tha.
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Neha ka swapn

wo mega update kab milega kal ya 2 din bad

 

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Update 24
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Mujhe maaf kar do kishan, Mai bhi tumhe bahut pasand karti hun par Mai ye shadi nhi tod sakti warna wo log ( lala aur ranjeet) hamare pariwar ko jine nhi denge , aur agar unhe pata chala ki Mai tum se pyar karti hun to wo tumhe bhi nuksaan pahunchane ke koshish karenge. Aur agar tumhe kuchh ho gya to Mai jeete ji mar jaungi.
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(Rote huye)
Mere bhagya me hi pyaar nhi likha hai kishan.... Nhi likha hai.... "
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Ab aage
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Itna bol kar sheetal rote huye waha se sidhe nimi ke bangle ke taraf chali jaati hai, kishan bhi usse jaane deta hai, filhaal uske paas waqt tha, kishan ne ye than liya tha ki kuchh bhi kar ke wo sheetal ko lala ke changul se chhuda hi lega, usne ek bar ke liye ye baat dadi aur bijendra dada ko batane ka socha, lekin fir wo ye bhi nhi chahta tha ki uski vajah se birendra ji aur lala ke pariwaaro me dushmani ki neeb pad jaaye.
Par hamare kishan bhaiya iss baat se poore anjaan the ki lala aur birendra ji ki dushmani ki neeb to uske janm ke samay hi rakhi ja chuki thi , jab shambhu pratap ji kishan ke janm ke baad rakhe samaroh ki nimantran dene iss gao me aaye the.
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Sheetal ke iss tarah se mana kar ke rote huye chala jana kishan ko bahut pida de rhi thi.
Usse samajh nhi aarha tha ki wo kya kare, ant me wo haveli ke tarf chala gya.
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(Me as Kishan)
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Mai iss waqt bahot ashant mehsoos kar rha tha,
Socho log morning walk kar ke ekdam tarortaza feel karte hai, par Mai,.... Sala mere sath hi aisa hota rha hai hamesha se . Jis bhi chiz ki lalsa man me jaagti hai bhagwan usse mujhse chhen leti hai... Bachpan me maa ko mujhse aisa door kiya bhagwan ne ki bas usse dekh sakte the... Na wo mujhe God me letti aur pyar karti thi, aur na meri itni himmat hoti thi ki Mai wo pyaar mang saku apni maa se...
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Fir ek bahan thi, jo suruat me to mujhpe jaan nyochhbar karti thi jab tak 3 - 4 saal ki thi... Par jaise jaise vo badi hoti gayi bhagwan usse bhi hamse door karte gaye.
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Pita to janm ke saal bhar baad se hi mujhse door hone lage the.
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Ek dada ji the jinse thoda bahut jeene ke liye himmat milti thi, par bhagwan ko wo bhi pasand nhi aaya aur unhone unhe bhi mujhse chhen liya wo bhi hamesha hamesha ke liye.
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Aur aaj, pahli baar ........ pahli baar kissi ladki ko dekh kar mujhe ye ehsahah hua tha ki , haa mere andar bhi ek dil hai...
Mujhe bhi pyaar ho gya tha usse....
Aur ussne bhi mere pyaar ki avhelna na ki...
Par bhagwaan kaha khush hote ye sab dekh kar, unhone ek aisa jaal pahle hi bichha diya tha jisme Mai aaj aakr phas gya hun.
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Sach kahu to din pratidin mere antarman me mai upar wale ke astitwa par hi sawal uthane laga tha, aur agar lagta ki nhi upar wala sach me hai, to hamesha ek shikayat ki bhavna mujhe uparbale se hoti thi.
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Aaj meri aankhe anayash hi nam ho gyi thi, aur issi udhedboon me sochte huye mai kab haveli pahonch gya mujhe iska gyat hi nhi rha... Mera chehra aisa ho rkha tha ki jaise agar koi mujhe sneh se gale laga leta to Mai wahi ro padta.
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"Kishan, ... Kishaannnnn.....
Kaha kho gaye ho itne der se aawaj laga raha hunn....
Are ye kya halat bana rakhe ho, kya hua hai , kisi ne kuchh bola kya... "
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Birendra ji jo ki abhi haveli ke mukhya dwar ke paas bane dalan me kuchh mehmano ke sath baatchit kar rhe the unhone kishan ki aisi halat dekhi to daudte huye kishan ke pas pahunche...
Unhe laga ki kal raat me jo kuchh bhi hua uska khunnas nikalne ke liye mere pariwar walo ne mujhe kuchh kaha hoga.
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Mai - are, kuchh nhi hua dada ji, aur mujhe koi kya bolega... Wo to Mai kuchh jyada hi running kar liya hun iss liye thodi thakavat si hone lagi. Baaki koi baat nhi hai, aap bevajah hi pareshan ho rahe h.
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Birendra ji - to fir kya jaruri thi itni daud lagane ki, chalo mere sath pahle.... Mai abhi kalpana se bol kar ladsi mangawata hunnn...
Jab sehat hi nhi rahegi to fir daud kaise laga payrga.
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Mai mana karte raha fir bhi dada nhi mane aur mujhe apne sath dalan me le gaye. Waha aur bhi bahut sare log mausud the jinme mere bade papa bhi mausud the.
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Mai bhi wahi dalan kursi pe baith gya, kuchh dere jab kalpana bua aayi to unhone mujhe lassi ka ek bada sa gilas thama diya aur sath me ek plate mix dry fruits....
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Kalpana - tum ne abhi tak apne joote bhi nhi khole, hadd karte ho tum bhi. Lo jaldi se pi lo aur ye saare dry fruits khaane hai tumhe.
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Mai - saare.... Are buaa, aap bhi to dekho aap kitni patli ho, aur mujhe dekho... ( apne dole dikhate huye) ..
Mujhe nhi aap ko inn dry fruits ki zarurat hai... Wo aap kha lo Mai lassi pi leta hunn.
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Kalpana - jyada hoshiyar banne ki koshish mat karna samjhe, Mai sab samajhti hunn., aur Mai kis angle se tujhe dubli patli dikhti hun... Chup chaap ye khaa varna mujhse bura koi nhi hoga.
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Mai - are , Mai to bas mazak kar rha tha kalpi bua, aap bhi na turant gussa ho jaate ho...
Aap yahi ruko thode der, Mai abhi aaya kapde badal kar... Ye to paseene me poori gandh deni lagi hai.
Aap ruko.. Aur Hann....Par aapko bhi in dryfruits me se thoda khana padega....
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Kalpana - Mai nhi kha sakti kishan aaj, samjho na baat ko. Pita ji aap hi boliye na.
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Birendra ji - kalpi sahi bol rahi hai kishan, kuchh rashm hai jinke poore hone ke baad hi kalpana kuchh khayegi.
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Mai - to kya tab tak bua bhookhi rahegi.
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Tabhi haveli ke andar se dadi aate huye boli, jo ki kab se hamlog ki baate sun kar mushkura rahi thi,...
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" Are ho bail, uski byah hone ja rhi hai, to ek din bhookhi rah sakti hai wo, byah thode na baar baar hoti hai. Aur waise bhi rashm bas kuchh ghanto ka hi hai, aur agar Tu aise hi isse apne bato me bajhaye rakha to isse aur der hogi. "
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Mai - ( kalpana bua ki hatho se jhat se lassi aur dryfruits lete huye) are der kyu hogi dadi, aap le jao inhi aur jaldi se rashm poora karo... Varna jyada late hi jayega bua ko khane me.
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Meri harkat par waha mauzud saare log hasne lage, mera man bhi ab bahut had tak shant ho chuka tha. Maine lassi aur plate ko wahi table pe rakha aur bahar bane hi bathroom me chala gya haath mooh dhone.
Uske baad apne kamre me jakar kapde badalne laga. Mujhe abhi tak ghar me rajnish nazar nhi aaya tha.
Mai wapas niche aaya aur dalan me hi baith kar lassi pine laga.
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Mai - " Dada ji, rajnish to mujhse pahle hi idhar aagya tha, to wo nazar nhi aarha hai. "
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Birendra ji- are hann, usse Mai e hi bheja hai nimi bitiya ke sath, .. Wo aaj mehndi ki rashm bhi hai na sham ko to uske liye jo jo zaruri saman chahiye tha wo laane ja rha tha, nimi ko bhi kuchh lena tha market seto wo bhi sath hi chali gayi.
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Mai- (man me) achha beta, bina bole hi nikal gaye dono , aane di fir inke khabar leta hunn.
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Mai - dada kuchh kaam bhi hai kya, to bata dijiye Mai abhi khali hi baitha hunnn.
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Fir birendra dada ji ne mujhe kuchh kaam diye, jisme ki ghar aaye mehmaano ke liye jagmha khana banaya ja tha tha waha dhyan dena. Waise to waha par pahle se hi raghav chacha mauzud the. , wahin ghar me 2din baad bat at aane wali thi to uske swagat me jo pandal lagna tha wo bhi aaj aaj hi lagna tha. Waha bhi ja kar mai dekhne laga .
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Wahin chhat pe ek kamre ke khidki se ek ladki kishan ko tab se dekh rhi the jab se wo daud laga kar haveli aaya tha, suruat me to uss ladki ko bhi chinta hone lagi kishan ke ruansi chehre ko dekh kar. Uske chehre pe chhaye dard ko achhi tarah se dekh paarhi thi wo yuvti.
Par jaise jaise kishan, birendra ji, kalpana aur sharda ji ke sath baat karte karte shant hua waise hi iss ulti ka bhi man ekdam shant ho gya, aur kishan ne jo harkat dalan me kiya tha usse dekh kar iss ladki ke chand se chehre par bhi bahut hi sundar mushkan aajati hai, oar jaise hi kishan birendra ji ke bataye kaamo ko karne ke liye waha se jata hai, waise hi uss ladki ke chehre pe bhi bhao badal jaate hai, aur uske aankho me aanshu aane lagti hai.
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" Are nehu, Tu ro kyu rahi hai, kya hua hai. "
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. Ji hanan ye ladki aur koi nahi balki neha hi thi, jiske man me kal raat se hi bahut saaare khyala aarhe the. Vajah bhi kal ku raat hi thi jisme ek aisa sapna iss ladki ne dekha tha jisne isse raat bhar sone nhi diya.
Aur to aur sapne me usne dekha bhi to kise, apne uss bhai ko jisse wo apne hosh samhale ke baad se shirf nafrat karti aarhi thi.
Par wo nafart kyu tha uske man me apne bhai ke prati, ishka jabab to uske paas bhi nhi tha.
Usse to bachpan se uske mata, pita, chachi, didi( sonam & poonam) sabke muh se apne bhai ke baare me galat hi suna tha. Use bachpan se hi uske pita (sunil) bataya karta tha ki tumhara bhai manhoosh hai, jis din se wo janm liy hai ghar ke halat bigad gaye hai issiliye usse ghar se baahar kar diya hai.
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Fir usse wo baate yaad aati hai ki kaise ussne apne hatho se uss din apne bhai ko chanta mara tha, jab school me kishan ko bhookh lagne ke karan uske paas gya aur lunch mangne par usse chanta maar diya tha... Wo bhi bas apne ek dost ke kahne par, uss din bhi usse bura laga tha, aur wo agle din maafi mangne ke liye bhi taiyaar hi gyi thi. Par shayad uske naseebme maafi likha hi nhi tha upar wale ne, kyonhki agle din hi kishan subah subah hi apne dadi ke kahne par, uske dada ke ek dost ke flat , jo ki bhopal me tha waha chala gya. Jisee bhopal tak khud raaju kaka chhodne gaye the.
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Tab bhi neha ke ankho se anshu beh rahe the aur ab bhi, usse aisa lag rha tha ki bhagwan hi nhi chahte hai ki uska bhai usse maaf kar de.
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Kamre me avni aur khushi aayi thi, jo ki apne bahan ko iss tarah aanshu bahate dekh thoda ghabra jaati hai aur usse poochti hai, par neha to abhi apne khayalo me utna khoyi huyi thi ki usko ehsaas bhi nhi hua ki usse koi aawaz de rha hai, wo tab bhi waise hi khidki ke bahar anant ko nihar rahi thi aur apne khayalo me kishan ke sath ki gayi jyadtiyo ko soch soch kar aanshu baha rahi thi.
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Par uski aisi halat ko uski banne sahan nhi kar pati aur jhat se dono mil kar neha ko gale laga li aur fir boli.
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Khushi - neha, neha... Kya hua.... Ro kyu rahi ho hannn..... Kisi ne kuchh bola hai kya...
Nehaaaa. a.
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Neha jo ab tak apne khayalo me thi wo achanak khushi ke yu chillane se apne khayalo se bahar aa jati hai, aaur samne dekhti hai to uski dono bahne,... Jo ki bahan se jyada hamsaya the ek dusre ke liye wo khadi pareshan ho rhi hai.
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Neha - (hosh me aate hi) Kkyaaa. Huaa tttumm llog yahaaa,
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Avni - Tu ro kyun rahi thi pahle ye bata, kisi ne kuchh bola kya yahann...
Badi ma ne kuchh bola kya...
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Neha - nhi, aisi koi baat nhi hai, mujhe bhala koi kyu kuchh bolenge.
Mai to bahar bhai ko dekh rhi thi, aur yahi soch rhi thi ki bhai kabhi mujhe maaf karega bhi ya nhi, kal ki ghatna se to saf pata chal gya ki hamare ghar bale jan boojh kar ham logo ko bhaiya ke khilaf bhadkate Aye hai, jiske karan hamlog hamsha unse galat pesh aate rahe.
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Avni & khushi - ham dono bhi raat se yahi sab soch rahe the nehu, pata hai hame hamesha mummy gussa karti thi jab bhi ham dono bhaiya ke sath unchi awaj me kuchh bolte the tab tab mummy hampe gussa karti thi . Aur wo ye baat bolti thi ki jo tum log kar rhi ho na shayad hi uska maafi mile tum logo ko.
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Itna bolte bolte unke aankhe bhi halki si nam ho gyi thi., aakhir the bhi to ye teeno ghar ke sabse chhote sadasya, bechariyo ke dil bhi utna hi nazuk tha.
Par yaha Neha wo baat nhi batati thi jiske kaaran wo aaj itna pareshan lag rhi thi.
'Raat me jo swapn dekhi thi uski baat '
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Aakhir kya tha wo . . .
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(Short Flash back of night)
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Raat ka samay, Ek nizzan vishal registaan, chandni raat me aisa lag rha tha ku jaise ret ki jagah wahan safed barf ho. Wahin charo taraf bas ret hi ret ke tille nazar aa rhe the, waise to aam taur par dekha jata hai ki registan me door door tak kahin bhi paani ki ek boond bhi nazar nhi aati hai, par yahan waisa kuchh nhi tha, ...
Regustan me door se ek khoobsoorat si ladki daudte huye kahi ja rhi thi. . . Wo ladki iss waqt ek rajasthani choli aur ghaghra pehan rakhi thi, chhann chhann ki aawaj se ye maalum pad raha tha ki usne koi bhati payjeb pahan rakha hai, aakho se bah rhe ashruo pe jaise hi chand ki raushni girti, aisa lagta aashmab se koi tara toot kar dhari pe gira ho.
Hafte hafte, wo ladki apni bhari ghaghre ko achhi tarah se samhalte huye uss kuye ke paas pahunchi jiske bagal me ek foos ka jhopda bana hua tha, ... Yahi wo kuaa tha jisme hamesha paani bhara rhta tha....
Uss jhopade ke andar piliya roshni iss baat ko shabit kar rhi thi ki andar jarur kisi na kisi ka basera hai,
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. " Jay, jay.... Suraj abhi tak wapis nhi aaye hai jay.... Naahi unka koi sandesh aaya hai jay... Tum to bole the ki wo jald hi wapas aa jayenge.....
par... Wo nhi aaye jay...
Nahi aaye..... ( itna bol kar wo ladki uss shaks ke samne hi zameen par baith kar rone lagti hai. )
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"Aapko apne suraj par bharosha nhi hai bhabhi, unhone vachan diya hai ki wo wapas jarur lautenge. Aur mujhe gyat hai ku pandit surajdev ka vachan surya ke tarah hi atal hai, jis tarah surya kabhi apna rashta nhi bhatakta waise hai mera mita suraj bhi kabhi apne vachno se bimukh nhi hota hai.
Aap vyarth hi pareshan ho rhi hai...? "
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Wo shaks jise ladki ne jay keh kar pukara tha usne ladki ko izzat ke sath foosh ke bane aashan pe baithate huye, aur ghade se pani nikal usse dete huye aasvashan diya...
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Mai vyarth pareshan ho rhi hun, kyu na hunn pareshan... 4 barsh beet gaye hai jay aur pratidin tum ta ho baat bolte ho ki wo aajayenge, ye bhi nhi batate ki wo gaye kahan hai....
Pratidin,... Pratidin unke liye shrangar karti hun, savar ke baithi rahti hun , mane bas yahi khayal rahta hai ki asj mere suraj jarur aayenge. Par...
Tum batate kyun nhi ki wo kaha gaye hai, kiske kahne pe gaye hai...
Mai pita ji se poichti hunn to wo bhi nhi batate, ab aur intezar nhi hota mujhse jay... Nhi hota..... (Fir rone lagti hai)
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Achanak kisi film ki tarah scene change hota hai
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"Nandani, tum mere liye baaghi ban gayi..... Tumhe pata hai na guru ji ka krodh, unse aisi baat nhi karni chahiye thi tumhe. Tumhe maagi mangni chahiye apne pita se, wo mere guru hai, unki aagya manna mera dharm hai na nandani...
Unhone mujhe jo karta saunpa tha jab tak wo purna nahi hota Mai kaise lautta batao....
Chalo pahle guru ji se maafi mango, nahi to Mai iss math me nahi rah paunga... "

Ek yuvak ke God me sar rakh kar leti huyi ye wohi ladki thi ji ki registan me dikhi thi... Abhi iske chehre pe saare jahaan ka santosh aur sukoon dikh rha tha, uska pritam jo laut aaya tha. Pokre 6 saalo ke baad lauta tha suraj...
Nandani hi thi wo ladki jo jay se milne ke liye registan me gayi thi.
Nandani ke pita ek shukra math ke guru the jaha uvko aur uvtiyao ko shashtra aur shaaashtra vidya ki shiksha di jaati hai, aur iss math ka sabse kaabil vidyarthi tha suraj.... Pandit suraj dev
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Zaahir si baat hai kabil hone kaaran wo apne guru ka chahita bhi tha, par aamilpur rajya ke raajkumar se apni beti nandani ka vivah inhone bachpan me hi tay kar diya tha, issiliye wo thode pareshan rahne lage the. Unhe apna shishya bhi sabse pyara tha, par sath me rajya ka bhi lobh, aamilpur ka matra ek varish tha agar usse nandani ka vivah ho jata to uski beti raani banjati aur wo uss rajya ka raajguru...
Yahi lalach ne unke man me suraj ko raste se hatane ka khyala janm le lita.
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Yahi karan tha ki unhone suraj ko ek aise asur ka naash karne ki aagya de diya tha jisse aaj tak kisi ne nhi hara paya tha...
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Par suraj 6 varsho ki lagatar mehanat aur prayash ke baad uss asur ko samapt kar ke math me fir bapas aagya tha .
Suraj ko to ratti bhar bhi apne guru par sandeh nhi tha, wo kabhi sapne me bhi nhi soch sakta tha ki uske guru usse jaanbujh kar maut ke muh me bhejna chahte hai,
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Par nandani, jise bhanak lag gayi thi ki uske pita uska kahi aur vivah karane ke liye suraj ko jaanboojh kar maut ke muh me Bheje the.
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Iski pushti ke liye usne apne kuchh khash saheliyo ko apne pita ki jashushi pe laga diya tha jisse usska shak sach saabit ho gya tha, ... Aur sach jante hi usne apne pita se bagavat kar diya....
Aur jaise hi suraj wapas aaya usne apne pita se bol diya ki wo jald hi suraj se vivah kar ke iss math ko chhod kar surajdev ke rajya chali jayegi.
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Aur yahi karan tha ki suraj apni nandani ko samjha rha tha , jo ki abhi befiakar ho kar apne suraj ke God me uske pyar ko mehshoos kar rhi thi.
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Nandani - aap sachayi se avgat nhi hai suraj, mai janti hunn sachayi... Mere pita ne meri vivah aamilpur ke rajkumar ke sath tay kar chkr hai, issilye unhone janbujh kar aapko uss asur se yudh karne bheje jisse aaj tak koi hara na paya tha.
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Suraj- maine to hara diya na ...
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Nandani - ha, par ab aur nhi, agar aapko kuchh ho jata to aapki kasam mai mera krodhagni poore rajya ko jala deti.
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. Abhi ye dono aapas me baat kar hi rahe the ki waha nandani ki ek saheli aati hai aur bolti hai ki undono ko guru ji math ke aashram me bula rhe hai. Jise sunkar dono ashram ki or jane lagte hai.
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Suraj - Apne krodh ko kahu me rkhna nandani, ye mat bhoolna ki wo tumhare pita krme sath sath ham dono ke guru bhi hai.
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Nandani - (nazre niche karte huye) theek hai....
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Ashram me
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Guru ji - bahot bahot badhayi tumhari safalta ke liye, suraj... Mujhe garv hai putra ki tumhare jaisa tezbaan , aur sauryavaan shisya mere math me, mere ashram me shiksha prapt kiya hai.
Mujhe garv hai ki mai tumhara guru hunn.
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Suraj - ye to mera kartavya tha guru dev, guru ki aagya ka palan karna to mera sarvpratnam kartavya hai, aur mujhe mere kartavyo se vimukh to Maut bhi nahi kar sakti guru dev.
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Guru ji - bahut khoob putra.... Mujhe sun kar.... Akhunnn ukhunnnn....... Akhunnnnn....
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Suraj - (guru ji ko pakadte huye) kya hua guredev, aspki tabiyat thik nhi lag rhu hai mujhe, aap vishram kariye chaliye mai aapko apke kaksh me le jata hunnn....
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Guru ji- nhi nhi putra, bas halka sa khanshi hai.... Akhuunn ukhunnn...
Nandani beta jara mere kamre me jo ghada hai usse pani le aao....
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Nandani bhi daudte huye kamre me jaate hai par ghade me paani nhi hota hai.
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Nandani bahar aste huye, - is ghade me to paani nhi hai, mai apne jamre se lekar aati hun.
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Fir wo daudte huye apni kamre ki taraf bhagti hai, jise dekh kar uske pita yani ke guru dev ke chehre pe pal bhar ke liye el shaitani mushkan aajati hai... Lalach bhi kya se kya kara deti hai na...
Wahi jasl kuchh nandani ke pita yani ki guru ji ka bhi tha.
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Nandani ke jaate hi,
Guru ji - suraj, mere putra, mai tumse abhi tak guru dakshina nhi managa hun uska samay ab aagya hai...
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Suraj - aap bas agya dijiye gurudev aapko gurudakshina me kya dunn mai...
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Guru - pahle vachan do ki mai jo bhi mangunga tum nih sankoch mujhe bina samay vyarth kiye tatkaal doge.
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Suraj - mai, pandit suraj dev aapko vachan deta hun ki aap jo bhi mujhse gurudakshina mangiyega mai usse bina vilambh kiye tatkal aapko de dunga.
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Guru ji - mujhe tumhari sheesh chahiye suraj... Kya tum doge....
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Suraj bina kuchh soche huye,.... - jo agya gurudev....

.... Naheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee..............


. Khaaaachhh
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Nandani jo ki apne pita aur suraj ki antim baate sun ki thi wo abhi jyada kuchh bol bhi nhi paayi ki suraj ne turant apni talvaar nikalkar apne gale par tez vaar kar diya uska sar guru ji ke hatho me ja gira aur dhad wahi pe gur kar chhatpatane laga... Waha khoon ke ek dhara si bah gayi......
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Par yahi tha jo nhi hona chahiye the....
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Nandani daudte huye aayi aur suraj ke sharir ke paas baith kar rone lagi....
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Lekin ye rudhan ek bahut bada tufaan laane wala tha.... Ye sanket tha uss bhavishya ka jisme shirf aur shirf sarvnaash th aur kuchh nhi...
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Nandani jo ki apne pita ki hatho se apne suraj ki sar ko lekar apne God me rakg kar dahad dahad kar ro rhi thi, usko dhyan bhi nhi tha ki uske uss dard bhare rudhan se waha kya ho raha hai....
Pal bhar me hi poora mausam badal gya... Jahan kuchh der pahle tak aashman ekdam neela aur sar pe surya dera dale huye tha wahi nandani ke iss vilaap ne jaise saare sansaar ko ek andhere me dubo diya.....
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Achanak nandani ne apni aankhe kholi, uski aankhe agar swaym kaal bhi dekh leta to dar jata....
" Tum ne ek baap, ek guru , aur to aur ek inshan ke ashtitwa ko kalankit kiye ho guru pashumitra, tum ne aaj wo apradh kiye ho jiska dand shirf aur shirf maut hai , apr mai ek putri ki audhe ko kalankit nhi karungi guru pashumitra .
He agni dev, agar mera suraj ke prati pyar me ek bhi khot na ho, agar mere samarpan me ek bhi kami na ho to mai aap se nivedan karti hun ki jiss rajya ke liye iss paapi ne mere suraj ka katl kiya hai wo rajya jal kar bhashm ho jaye. , aur agar mera pyar sachha hai to mujhe aur mere pritam suraj ko ek sath apne saran me le...
Aur aap, khud ko guru kahte ho na , mere pita ho na.... Mai aapko shrap deti hunnn... Ki aap jis sthan pe mere suraj ki hatya kiye ho tab tak aap wahi pe kaid ho kar rahoge....
Jab tak aapko nandani aur suraj se maafi nhi mil jaati.... Jo ki ab sambhav nhi hai....
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He agni dev vilambh mat kijiye...... Mai aapka aavahan karti hunnn.....

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Agle hi pal raj nandani jo ki apne God me suraj ke sav ko rakhe huye thi... Wo dhuu dhuu kar jalne lagi.....
Aur wahi haal uss rajya ka bhi huaa, jaha ka har makaan, raajmahal, baag, bagiche.... Doshi, nirdosh,,,,,, raja rank..... Sab kuch... Sab kuchh jalne laga...
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Wahi.. Guru pashumitra, jo ki ekdam stabdh khade the, unki halat aisi ho gyi thi ki kaato to khoon nhi niklega.... Unki putri ne ek aisa shrap diya tha unhe jisse unhe shrishti ke ant tak jhelna tha,
Ab unkko apne kiye par pachhtava ho rha tha....
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Abhi wo apne aanshu baha hi rahe the ki....
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Booooom...... Nandani aur suraj ke shareer me ek bahut bada vishfot hua aur ussi ke sath poora math tabah ho gya... Waha mausud har ek shaks rakh ban gya... Sibay guru pashumitra ke...
Jaise hi unke sav me vishfot huaa waise hi guru pashumitra apne aapko kisi janjeer me bandhte mehshoosh hone lage aur ant tah wo wahinn.... Ush math me ashram me hi bandh ke rah gaye....
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Aur ushheee vishfot ke kaaran raatri ko neha ka swapna tuta....
Wi iss vakt itna dar gayi thi ki usse pata hi nhi chala kab wi suraj nam ka vilaap kar ke rone lagi thi....
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Jab wo shant huyi tab uska dhyan bartmaan pe aaya... Usne ghadi me dekha to raat ke 1.30 baje the....
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Neha (man me) ... - aakhir kaun tha wo ladka... Uska chehra to bilkul kishan bhai jaisa tha...
Aur uss ladki ka chehra bilkul mere jaisa....
Ye aakhir kaisa swapn tha, kya ye koi bhram tha, ya sanyog.
Bhavishya ki kalpanaye tha ya beeta huaa kal...
Aakhir ye kya tha....
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys. Bahut mehnat lagi hai iss ansh ko likhne me, like to thok ke hi jana hoga.

 

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[Rahul]

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[Destiny]

Update 9​

Ab tak...
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Chachi- tum bar bar meri badnami ki kyu jhuthi chinta kar rahe ho , agr tumhe sach me meri fikar hoti to yu hi mujhe meri hi nazro me zalil nahi karte, tumhe kya lagta hai ek aurt ko bar bar apne sharir ko pesh karna ashan baat hai. Par ab mujhe samjh aagya, jarur tum bhi apne chach jaise hi hoge.... jo ek aurat ko asli shukh na de sake , hannn.... Zarur tum bhi apne chacha jaise hi NAMARD ho ge jo kisi bhi aurat ko santusht nhi kar sakta hai. (Haste huye) Mai bhi pagal hi thi jo NAMARD ke pichhe apna wqt zaayaa kar.........
Abhi chachi ne itna hi bola tha ki mera gussa saatwe aashman pe pahunch gaya aur mai gusse me chhachu ke chehre ko apne hatho me pakad kar unke pure sharir ko diwar me sata diya aur unnpar chillate huye bola...
Me - bass....... Bahot bol liya aapne



Ab aage...

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Kishan ne jab suna ki chachi uski mardangi pe sawal utha rahi hai to uska para total high ho gya tha aur gusse me use pata hi nahi chala ki wo abhi iss wakt kaha hai aur to aur wo apne majboot panjo se chachi ke chehre ko iss tarah pakde huye tha ki chachi lakh koshish karne par bhi apne aap ko chhuda nhi pa rahi thi, chachi to abb maan li thi ki aaj ki raat uska kaam ban jayega aur wo wah andar hi andar soch rahi thi ki kahi usne iss bagad bille ko uksa kar galti to nahi kar di. Lekin tabhi... Kishan apne daant bhinchte huye bolta hai.
Kishan - bahut ho gya aapka, bahut bol liya aapne aur sun liya maine. Par ab nhi,
Aapko meri mardangi dekhne ka bahut shaukh hai na to thik hai.... Mai aapko dikhaunga apni mardaangi.
itn bol kar mai bhadara se bahar nikal gaya .
aur sidha apne room me ja ke baith gaya
yahann mera dimag poori tarah se kharab ho gaya tha , mujhe samajh nhi aarhi thi ki mai kya karu. sach kahu to mera sar fata ja raha tha. aisa nhi tha ki mujhe unke saath sone me problem thi , are mai to apne aap pe kaabu pa liya tha uss wakt warna agar mai chahta to si waqt unhe asli mard ki pahchan dikha deta.
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mai abb tak isse bachta aaarha tha iska sabse bada karan tha ki mujhe hamesha chachi ki harkto se kisi shazish ki buu arhi thi.
sochne wali baat hai ki koi aurat jo apne aap ko decent batati ho wo aap ko bina jane bina pechane bas kuchh ghanto ke mulakat me aapko apne sath sone ke liye kahne lage , aur bat bas yahi nhi thi , yaha to ye devi ji mujhe mazboor hi karne lagi ,
lekin ab ek sach ye bhi tha ki meri mardangi pe sawal me mujhe uljha kar unhone mujhw achaa fasaya tha , ab to mai bhi ye thha niya tha ki ab to iss aurat ko apni mardangi dikha kar hi rahunga .... yahi sab sochte sochte kishan ki aankh lg gyi , kuchh der baad rajnish bhi kamre me aaya aur wo bhi so gaya ...
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khair , ek nayi din ka suruat huyi , subah ka vatavarn to bahut hi manmohak aur sakaratmk thi par yahi din kishan ke liye ek bhaari aur akalpniye taur par hone wali thi jiska aabhash kishan ko tatkaal to nahi tha kyuki wo abhi tak gahri nind me so raha tha .
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yahan apne kishan ji ko sone dete hai aur chalte hai swargiye shambhu pratap ji ke aawash par jahan sharda devi ji (dadi) ki dono betiya apne apne bachho ke sath kuchh hi samay me aane wali thi. par sharda devi ji to kisi aur hi khayal me khoyi huyi thi.
yahan mai agr shmbhu pratap ji ke ghar ki baat karu to unka ghar ek pushtaini makan tha jishe mai haveli to nhi kah sakta par ussi ke jaisa hi samajh lijiye . wo gao me hote haina bade bade angan baale ghar jisme angan ke charo or osara aur uske baad bahut sare room hote hai , shambhu pratap ji ka ghar bhi kuchh issi parakar ka tha. unka ghar 2 talle ka tha jisme kul milakar 14 kamre the . 8 kamra niche ke talle pe aur 6 kamre upar ke talle pe . makan ka pravesh dwar uttar ki or tha . pravesh dwar ke bahar lagbhag 2 se teen katthe tak ki zameen khali thi jahan kuchh paudhe lage huye the , in paudho me kuchh sabjiya to kuchh fool aur fal ke paudhe the . wo poora khula maidan ke ek taraf lohe ke pipe ke sahare teen ka shade laga hua tha jisse dekh kar saf kaha ja sakta th ki yaha gadiyo ko park kiya jata hoga . isi maidan me wo makan tha aur maidaan ke charo or lagbhag 8 ft ki unchi ur moti deewar ki huyi thi .
makan ke pravesh dwar ke turant baad ka jo kamra tha wo sharda devi ka tha. jisme ek purani deewan palng aur 3 mote kath ke almira lage huye the , kare me jo kuchh bhi nazar aarha tha sab pushtaini hi nazar aarhatha . sharda devi ke kamre ke baad wala dono kamra anaaz rakhne ke liye kaam aata rha tha . aur unn kamro ke baad ghar ka rashoyi ghar tha , ye sare kamre angan ke dayi tarf ke the . wahi baye taraf se suruat me kisi kamre ke bazay ek bada sa bathroom tha , angan ke ek kinare me jo pravesh dwar aur bathrom ke nazdeek wala kinara tha waha ek bahot puraana chapakal ( handpump) gada hua tha .
bathroom ke baad wala kamra bade bete anil aur bahu chitra devi ka tha aur unke baad wala kamra 2sre bete sunil aur bahu shalini ka tha, aur uske baad wala chhote bete amar aur bahu sunaina ka tha aur last wala dono room ke beech ka diwar ko hata kar ek hall type drawing room bana diya gya tha. liske bagal se hi upar ki or jane ke liye sidhi bani huyi thi.
wahi oopar me jahan sidhi nikalti thi waha pe pahla kamra poonam aur sonam ka tha, uske baad wala kamra neha , khushi aur avni ka tha, in teeno ke baad wala kamra shambhu pratap ji kishan ke liye banbaye the par ab uske aupastithi me ye kamra ricky use kar rha tha. .. baaki ke kamre me bhi saari jarurat ke sama maujud the jo ki aya pariwar wale ke aane par kaam me aaya karte the ..
abb chalte hai sharda devi ji ke taraf jo ki apne kamre ke deewan par baithi huyi najane kya soch rahi thi , jiske kaaran unke chehre ka bhav pal pal badal raha tha. wahi unke darwaje par khadi unki sabse shaitan poti avni unke hi chehre ko dekh rahi thi jo ki abhi apne daadi ke liye subah ki chay le kar aayi thi. jab avni se na raha gya to usne dadi ko awaj lagakar poochh hi liya ki wo kya soch rahi h,
avni- dadi aap subah subah itna sada sa muh kyu banayi huyi ho mujhe achha nhi lgta apko yu aise dekna. batao na kya soch rahi thi aap jo aap ke chehre par rah rah ke pareshani ke bhav aarhe the.
dadi- are mai kyu kuchh sochne lagi , aur tune kya kaha mera muh sada sa lag rha hai , ruk mai abhi tujhe batati hun ki sada sa muh kaisa hota hai. itna bol kar dadi idhar udhar kuchh khojne lagi ...
avni- are kisne bola meri dadi ko ki unka chehra sada hua lag rha hai.. meri dadi to aaj bhi shridevi lagti hai , kyu dadi .... itna bolkar avni hasne lagi
aur sharda devi ke chehre par bhi ab muskan aagyi jaha kuchh der pahle pata nhi kya kya bhav aarhe the .
abhi in dono dadi aur potiyo me khatti mithi nok jhok ho hi rahi thi ki bahar angan se sunaina devi( chhoti bahu) ki aawaj aayi.
sunaina- maaji bahar raaju aaya hai aapne bulaya tha kya.?
Introducing
(raju - shambhu pratap ji ke ghar me kayi salo se kaam karta hai , filhaal sharda ji ko kahi bahar jana hota hai to wo isse hi sath le jati hai kyuki raju gadi chalane me ekdam mahir hai...
iska kahani me ek aham roll hoga... kyunki iska itihash bhi baht rochak raha hai jo ki aage pata chalegi...)
dadi - haann bahu , use kaho bahar baithak me ruke mai wahi aarhi hunn.
fir dadi avni ko ek cup chay aur bol kar ghar ke bahar bane ek chhote se jhule baithak me chali gayi.
raju- pranam kaki , aapne bulaya koi pareshani hai kya kaki.
dadi- wo to baad me pata chalegi ki aakhir pareshani kya hai, filhaal hame turant trimath mahakali mandir nikalna hai aur 2 baje ke pahle waha se lautna bhi hai to tum gadi ek baar dekhlo sab sahi hai ya nhi . aur nashta bhi kar lena mai sunaina se bhijwa deti hunn
ek baat aur yad rahe raju beta kisi ko pata nhi chalna chahiye ki ham kaha jarhe hai.
raju- ji mai samajh gaya kaki, par fir se wahi mandir jana kya sahi hoga, jiske chalte kishan babu ko itna zillat sahna pad raha hai.
dadi- yahi sab to bhagwan ki pariksha hoti hai raju bete jo ki ussi ki jyada kathin pariksha hoti hai jispar bhagwan koi dayitwa chhodna chahte hai... baaki wahan kya hota hai ye baad me dekha jayega , fillhal to aaj hi wo din hai jis din hame waha aane ko kaha gya tha., to tum taiyar rahna mai nashta kar leti hun tab tak.
. Uske baad raju wahi teen ke shade me cover kiye huye ek tata safari ko janchne laga ki sab kuchh thik hai ya nhi ... Sab kuchh achhe se dekh lene ke baad wo bahar hi paudho ko patane ke liye lage nal koo se haath mooh dho kar wahi baithak me baith gya, kuchh der baad uska nashta bhi aagya jo khushi aur avni lekar aayi thi unhone aate ke sath hi raju ko pahle namste kiya.
Khushi & avni - namaste raju kaka.
Raju- namaste bitiya, are ye kya itna sara nashta le kar chali aayi, aur ye kya hai.... Ohh dekho to mithayi layi ho... Are ye sab tum bachhe log khao ye lo ek tum aur ye wala tum khalo... Chalo aa karo... Aaa
Avni- mithayi khate huye.......ye achhi baat nahi hai raju kaka aap hamesha apne hisse ki mithayi hame khila dete ho, aur dadi bad me hame dantti hai.
Khushi- hannn... Ab na ham dono aao ke liye nashta hi nahi layenge dekh lena,
Avni - aur nahi to kya., ab se ham nahi layenge aap ke liye nashta, aur fir aapko nahta dene ghar ki hitler neha ko bhejenge jo.. Hamesha aapki watt laga ke chali jati hai,... Itna bol kar dono hashne lage.
Raju - neha bitiya bhi bahut achhi hai bitiya par unko gussa bahot jaldi aajata hai, issilye ham unsse darte hai, aisa karna ab se ham tumko mithayi nahi khilyenge par mera nashta aur khana tum hi lana nahi to roz meri shamat aati rahegi..
Raju kaka ki baat sun kar wo dono thahake laga kar hasne lagti hai tabhi andar se dadi kiaawaj aati hai,...
Dadi - ari o maharaniyo usse aaram se khane de, fir hame kuchh kaam se Jana bhi hai, kuchh kaam dhanda to hai nahi aur lag kaye panchayti jhadne.
Chalo jao apne room me aur karo kuchh padhayi badhayi.
Dadi ke jhadne ke baad wo dono daudte huye upar chhat par chali gayi.
Kuchh samay baad Raju aur sharda devi bhi apne gantavya ki or nikal chale, jo ki ek bahut purana khandhar tha jiske andar ek purani mandir thi jise log trimath mahakali mandir ke naam se jante the...
Ab iss mandir aur khndhar ka sambandh kishan aur uske pariwar se kis parkar ka hai ye to aage pata chalegi...
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. Aaj ke liye itna hi... Hamesha khush rahe

अब तक की कहानी रोचक रहा किशन के साथ कुछ ऐसा हुआ जिसके कारण दादी दादा जो अब नहीं रहे, को छोड़कर बाकी सभी नफरत करते हैं। जिसका राज त्रिमठ महाकाली मंदिर से जुड़ा हैं। जहां दादी अभी जा रहीं हैं।

वहीं दूसरी ओर गांव में चाची किशन के साथ सम्बंध बना चहती हैं कारण ये है उनका पति उन पर ध्यान नहीं देते हैं। वहीं किसान का सोच भी वाजिब है कोई भी महिला पहली मुलाकात में साफ साफ बता दे की वो उससे क्या चहती है तो मन में खटका आ ही जाता है। रहीं बात किसान को तो वो चाहकर भी जो चाची चाह रहीं है कर नहीं सकता क्योंकि पहले से उसका परिवार से अनबन है और कुछ ऐसा वैसा करके गांव में भी अपना फजीहत नहीं करवाना चहती हैं। फ़िर भी देखते हैं किशन क्या करता हैं ?

रहीं बात कहानी की तो बहुत ही शानदार लिख रहे हों शब्दों का चयन करने में कहीं से कहीं तक कंजूसी नहीं किए गया जहां जितनी जरूरत हैं वहां उतना ही शब्द लिखा गया हैं। साथ ही कहानी की रोचकता बनाए रखने में भी ध्यान दिया गया हैं। बस ऐसे ही लिखते रहिए।

 

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Chachi- tum bar bar meri badnami ki kyu jhuthi chinta kar rahe ho , agr tumhe sach me meri fikar hoti to yu hi mujhe meri hi nazro me zalil nahi karte, tumhe kya lagta hai ek aurt ko bar bar apne sharir ko pesh karna ashan baat hai. Par ab mujhe samjh aagya, jarur tum bhi apne chach jaise hi hoge.... jo ek aurat ko asli shukh na de sake , hannn.... Zarur tum bhi apne chacha jaise hi NAMARD ho ge jo kisi bhi aurat ko santusht nhi kar sakta hai. (Haste huye) Mai bhi pagal hi thi jo NAMARD ke pichhe apna wqt zaayaa kar.........
Abhi chachi ne itna hi bola tha ki mera gussa saatwe aashman pe pahunch gaya aur mai gusse me chhachu ke chehre ko apne hatho me pakad kar unke pure sharir ko diwar me sata diya aur unnpar chillate huye bola...
Me - bass....... Bahot bol liya aapne



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Kishan ne jab suna ki chachi uski mardangi pe sawal utha rahi hai to uska para total high ho gya tha aur gusse me use pata hi nahi chala ki wo abhi iss wakt kaha hai aur to aur wo apne majboot panjo se chachi ke chehre ko iss tarah pakde huye tha ki chachi lakh koshish karne par bhi apne aap ko chhuda nhi pa rahi thi, chachi to abb maan li thi ki aaj ki raat uska kaam ban jayega aur wo wah andar hi andar soch rahi thi ki kahi usne iss bagad bille ko uksa kar galti to nahi kar di. Lekin tabhi... Kishan apne daant bhinchte huye bolta hai.
Kishan - bahut ho gya aapka, bahut bol liya aapne aur sun liya maine. Par ab nhi,
Aapko meri mardangi dekhne ka bahut shaukh hai na to thik hai.... Mai aapko dikhaunga apni mardaangi.
itn bol kar mai bhadara se bahar nikal gaya .
aur sidha apne room me ja ke baith gaya
yahann mera dimag poori tarah se kharab ho gaya tha , mujhe samajh nhi aarhi thi ki mai kya karu. sach kahu to mera sar fata ja raha tha. aisa nhi tha ki mujhe unke saath sone me problem thi , are mai to apne aap pe kaabu pa liya tha uss wakt warna agar mai chahta to si waqt unhe asli mard ki pahchan dikha deta.
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mai abb tak isse bachta aaarha tha iska sabse bada karan tha ki mujhe hamesha chachi ki harkto se kisi shazish ki buu arhi thi.
sochne wali baat hai ki koi aurat jo apne aap ko decent batati ho wo aap ko bina jane bina pechane bas kuchh ghanto ke mulakat me aapko apne sath sone ke liye kahne lage , aur bat bas yahi nhi thi , yaha to ye devi ji mujhe mazboor hi karne lagi ,
lekin ab ek sach ye bhi tha ki meri mardangi pe sawal me mujhe uljha kar unhone mujhw achaa fasaya tha , ab to mai bhi ye thha niya tha ki ab to iss aurat ko apni mardangi dikha kar hi rahunga .... yahi sab sochte sochte kishan ki aankh lg gyi , kuchh der baad rajnish bhi kamre me aaya aur wo bhi so gaya ...
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khair , ek nayi din ka suruat huyi , subah ka vatavarn to bahut hi manmohak aur sakaratmk thi par yahi din kishan ke liye ek bhaari aur akalpniye taur par hone wali thi jiska aabhash kishan ko tatkaal to nahi tha kyuki wo abhi tak gahri nind me so raha tha .
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yahan apne kishan ji ko sone dete hai aur chalte hai swargiye shambhu pratap ji ke aawash par jahan sharda devi ji (dadi) ki dono betiya apne apne bachho ke sath kuchh hi samay me aane wali thi. par sharda devi ji to kisi aur hi khayal me khoyi huyi thi.
yahan mai agr shmbhu pratap ji ke ghar ki baat karu to unka ghar ek pushtaini makan tha jishe mai haveli to nhi kah sakta par ussi ke jaisa hi samajh lijiye . wo gao me hote haina bade bade angan baale ghar jisme angan ke charo or osara aur uske baad bahut sare room hote hai , shambhu pratap ji ka ghar bhi kuchh issi parakar ka tha. unka ghar 2 talle ka tha jisme kul milakar 14 kamre the . 8 kamra niche ke talle pe aur 6 kamre upar ke talle pe . makan ka pravesh dwar uttar ki or tha . pravesh dwar ke bahar lagbhag 2 se teen katthe tak ki zameen khali thi jahan kuchh paudhe lage huye the , in paudho me kuchh sabjiya to kuchh fool aur fal ke paudhe the . wo poora khula maidan ke ek taraf lohe ke pipe ke sahare teen ka shade laga hua tha jisse dekh kar saf kaha ja sakta th ki yaha gadiyo ko park kiya jata hoga . isi maidan me wo makan tha aur maidaan ke charo or lagbhag 8 ft ki unchi ur moti deewar ki huyi thi .
makan ke pravesh dwar ke turant baad ka jo kamra tha wo sharda devi ka tha. jisme ek purani deewan palng aur 3 mote kath ke almira lage huye the , kare me jo kuchh bhi nazar aarha tha sab pushtaini hi nazar aarhatha . sharda devi ke kamre ke baad wala dono kamra anaaz rakhne ke liye kaam aata rha tha . aur unn kamro ke baad ghar ka rashoyi ghar tha , ye sare kamre angan ke dayi tarf ke the . wahi baye taraf se suruat me kisi kamre ke bazay ek bada sa bathroom tha , angan ke ek kinare me jo pravesh dwar aur bathrom ke nazdeek wala kinara tha waha ek bahot puraana chapakal ( handpump) gada hua tha .
bathroom ke baad wala kamra bade bete anil aur bahu chitra devi ka tha aur unke baad wala kamra 2sre bete sunil aur bahu shalini ka tha, aur uske baad wala chhote bete amar aur bahu sunaina ka tha aur last wala dono room ke beech ka diwar ko hata kar ek hall type drawing room bana diya gya tha. liske bagal se hi upar ki or jane ke liye sidhi bani huyi thi.
wahi oopar me jahan sidhi nikalti thi waha pe pahla kamra poonam aur sonam ka tha, uske baad wala kamra neha , khushi aur avni ka tha, in teeno ke baad wala kamra shambhu pratap ji kishan ke liye banbaye the par ab uske aupastithi me ye kamra ricky use kar rha tha. .. baaki ke kamre me bhi saari jarurat ke sama maujud the jo ki aya pariwar wale ke aane par kaam me aaya karte the ..
abb chalte hai sharda devi ji ke taraf jo ki apne kamre ke deewan par baithi huyi najane kya soch rahi thi , jiske kaaran unke chehre ka bhav pal pal badal raha tha. wahi unke darwaje par khadi unki sabse shaitan poti avni unke hi chehre ko dekh rahi thi jo ki abhi apne daadi ke liye subah ki chay le kar aayi thi. jab avni se na raha gya to usne dadi ko awaj lagakar poochh hi liya ki wo kya soch rahi h,
avni- dadi aap subah subah itna sada sa muh kyu banayi huyi ho mujhe achha nhi lgta apko yu aise dekna. batao na kya soch rahi thi aap jo aap ke chehre par rah rah ke pareshani ke bhav aarhe the.
dadi- are mai kyu kuchh sochne lagi , aur tune kya kaha mera muh sada sa lag rha hai , ruk mai abhi tujhe batati hun ki sada sa muh kaisa hota hai. itna bol kar dadi idhar udhar kuchh khojne lagi ...
avni- are kisne bola meri dadi ko ki unka chehra sada hua lag rha hai.. meri dadi to aaj bhi shridevi lagti hai , kyu dadi .... itna bolkar avni hasne lagi
aur sharda devi ke chehre par bhi ab muskan aagyi jaha kuchh der pahle pata nhi kya kya bhav aarhe the .
abhi in dono dadi aur potiyo me khatti mithi nok jhok ho hi rahi thi ki bahar angan se sunaina devi( chhoti bahu) ki aawaj aayi.
sunaina- maaji bahar raaju aaya hai aapne bulaya tha kya.?
Introducing
(raju - shambhu pratap ji ke ghar me kayi salo se kaam karta hai , filhaal sharda ji ko kahi bahar jana hota hai to wo isse hi sath le jati hai kyuki raju gadi chalane me ekdam mahir hai...
iska kahani me ek aham roll hoga... kyunki iska itihash bhi baht rochak raha hai jo ki aage pata chalegi...)
dadi - haann bahu , use kaho bahar baithak me ruke mai wahi aarhi hunn.
fir dadi avni ko ek cup chay aur bol kar ghar ke bahar bane ek chhote se jhule baithak me chali gayi.
raju- pranam kaki , aapne bulaya koi pareshani hai kya kaki.
dadi- wo to baad me pata chalegi ki aakhir pareshani kya hai, filhaal hame turant trimath mahakali mandir nikalna hai aur 2 baje ke pahle waha se lautna bhi hai to tum gadi ek baar dekhlo sab sahi hai ya nhi . aur nashta bhi kar lena mai sunaina se bhijwa deti hunn
ek baat aur yad rahe raju beta kisi ko pata nhi chalna chahiye ki ham kaha jarhe hai.
raju- ji mai samajh gaya kaki, par fir se wahi mandir jana kya sahi hoga, jiske chalte kishan babu ko itna zillat sahna pad raha hai.
dadi- yahi sab to bhagwan ki pariksha hoti hai raju bete jo ki ussi ki jyada kathin pariksha hoti hai jispar bhagwan koi dayitwa chhodna chahte hai... baaki wahan kya hota hai ye baad me dekha jayega , fillhal to aaj hi wo din hai jis din hame waha aane ko kaha gya tha., to tum taiyar rahna mai nashta kar leti hun tab tak.
. Uske baad raju wahi teen ke shade me cover kiye huye ek tata safari ko janchne laga ki sab kuchh thik hai ya nhi ... Sab kuchh achhe se dekh lene ke baad wo bahar hi paudho ko patane ke liye lage nal koo se haath mooh dho kar wahi baithak me baith gya, kuchh der baad uska nashta bhi aagya jo khushi aur avni lekar aayi thi unhone aate ke sath hi raju ko pahle namste kiya.
Khushi & avni - namaste raju kaka.
Raju- namaste bitiya, are ye kya itna sara nashta le kar chali aayi, aur ye kya hai.... Ohh dekho to mithayi layi ho... Are ye sab tum bachhe log khao ye lo ek tum aur ye wala tum khalo... Chalo aa karo... Aaa
Avni- mithayi khate huye.......ye achhi baat nahi hai raju kaka aap hamesha apne hisse ki mithayi hame khila dete ho, aur dadi bad me hame dantti hai.
Khushi- hannn... Ab na ham dono aao ke liye nashta hi nahi layenge dekh lena,
Avni - aur nahi to kya., ab se ham nahi layenge aap ke liye nashta, aur fir aapko nahta dene ghar ki hitler neha ko bhejenge jo.. Hamesha aapki watt laga ke chali jati hai,... Itna bol kar dono hashne lage.
Raju - neha bitiya bhi bahut achhi hai bitiya par unko gussa bahot jaldi aajata hai, issilye ham unsse darte hai, aisa karna ab se ham tumko mithayi nahi khilyenge par mera nashta aur khana tum hi lana nahi to roz meri shamat aati rahegi..
Raju kaka ki baat sun kar wo dono thahake laga kar hasne lagti hai tabhi andar se dadi kiaawaj aati hai,...
Dadi - ari o maharaniyo usse aaram se khane de, fir hame kuchh kaam se Jana bhi hai, kuchh kaam dhanda to hai nahi aur lag kaye panchayti jhadne.
Chalo jao apne room me aur karo kuchh padhayi badhayi.
Dadi ke jhadne ke baad wo dono daudte huye upar chhat par chali gayi.
Kuchh samay baad Raju aur sharda devi bhi apne gantavya ki or nikal chale, jo ki ek bahut purana khandhar tha jiske andar ek purani mandir thi jise log trimath mahakali mandir ke naam se jante the...
Ab iss mandir aur khndhar ka sambandh kishan aur uske pariwar se kis parkar ka hai ye to aage pata chalegi...
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कहानी एक ऐसे लड़के की हैं जिसे परिवार से निस्कासित कर दिया गया हैं। क्यों? इसका जवाब बो नही जानता अगर कोई जानता हैं तो वो है दादी शायद दादा भी जानते थे पर शंभू की बातों से लग रहा है वो भी कुछ न कुछ जानता हैं। शायद इसलिए त्रिमाठ महाकाली मंदिर जानें की बात सुनकर थोड़ा आनाकानी कर रहा है।

किसान एक तो पहले से ही परिवार की नजरों में गिरा हुआ है अब गांव में चाची इसके पूछे पड़ी है इसलिए की जो सुख पति से नहीं मिल रहा वो सुख किसान उसे दे पर किसान पहले से ही परिवार के नजरों में गिरा हुआ है अब ओर कुछ भी ऐसा नहीं करना चाहता जिसका पाता चलते हो गांव में भी इसकी किरकिरी हों जाएं। पर इस बात को चाची नहीं समझ रही उसने तो किसान के मर्दानगी पर ही सवाल उठा दिया। अब देखते है किशन चाची के इस सवाल का कैसे जवाब देता है?

मित्र आप कहानी बहुत अच्छा लिख रहे हो बस ऐसे ही लिखते रहो ।

 

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Chachi- tum bar bar meri badnami ki kyu jhuthi chinta kar rahe ho , agr tumhe sach me meri fikar hoti to yu hi mujhe meri hi nazro me zalil nahi karte, tumhe kya lagta hai ek aurt ko bar bar apne sharir ko pesh karna ashan baat hai. Par ab mujhe samjh aagya, jarur tum bhi apne chach jaise hi hoge.... jo ek aurat ko asli shukh na de sake , hannn.... Zarur tum bhi apne chacha jaise hi NAMARD ho ge jo kisi bhi aurat ko santusht nhi kar sakta hai. (Haste huye) Mai bhi pagal hi thi jo NAMARD ke pichhe apna wqt zaayaa kar.........
Abhi chachi ne itna hi bola tha ki mera gussa saatwe aashman pe pahunch gaya aur mai gusse me chhachu ke chehre ko apne hatho me pakad kar unke pure sharir ko diwar me sata diya aur unnpar chillate huye bola...
Me - bass....... Bahot bol liya aapne



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Kishan ne jab suna ki chachi uski mardangi pe sawal utha rahi hai to uska para total high ho gya tha aur gusse me use pata hi nahi chala ki wo abhi iss wakt kaha hai aur to aur wo apne majboot panjo se chachi ke chehre ko iss tarah pakde huye tha ki chachi lakh koshish karne par bhi apne aap ko chhuda nhi pa rahi thi, chachi to abb maan li thi ki aaj ki raat uska kaam ban jayega aur wo wah andar hi andar soch rahi thi ki kahi usne iss bagad bille ko uksa kar galti to nahi kar di. Lekin tabhi... Kishan apne daant bhinchte huye bolta hai.
Kishan - bahut ho gya aapka, bahut bol liya aapne aur sun liya maine. Par ab nhi,
Aapko meri mardangi dekhne ka bahut shaukh hai na to thik hai.... Mai aapko dikhaunga apni mardaangi.
itn bol kar mai bhadara se bahar nikal gaya .
aur sidha apne room me ja ke baith gaya
yahann mera dimag poori tarah se kharab ho gaya tha , mujhe samajh nhi aarhi thi ki mai kya karu. sach kahu to mera sar fata ja raha tha. aisa nhi tha ki mujhe unke saath sone me problem thi , are mai to apne aap pe kaabu pa liya tha uss wakt warna agar mai chahta to si waqt unhe asli mard ki pahchan dikha deta.
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mai abb tak isse bachta aaarha tha iska sabse bada karan tha ki mujhe hamesha chachi ki harkto se kisi shazish ki buu arhi thi.
sochne wali baat hai ki koi aurat jo apne aap ko decent batati ho wo aap ko bina jane bina pechane bas kuchh ghanto ke mulakat me aapko apne sath sone ke liye kahne lage , aur bat bas yahi nhi thi , yaha to ye devi ji mujhe mazboor hi karne lagi ,
lekin ab ek sach ye bhi tha ki meri mardangi pe sawal me mujhe uljha kar unhone mujhw achaa fasaya tha , ab to mai bhi ye thha niya tha ki ab to iss aurat ko apni mardangi dikha kar hi rahunga .... yahi sab sochte sochte kishan ki aankh lg gyi , kuchh der baad rajnish bhi kamre me aaya aur wo bhi so gaya ...
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khair , ek nayi din ka suruat huyi , subah ka vatavarn to bahut hi manmohak aur sakaratmk thi par yahi din kishan ke liye ek bhaari aur akalpniye taur par hone wali thi jiska aabhash kishan ko tatkaal to nahi tha kyuki wo abhi tak gahri nind me so raha tha .
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yahan apne kishan ji ko sone dete hai aur chalte hai swargiye shambhu pratap ji ke aawash par jahan sharda devi ji (dadi) ki dono betiya apne apne bachho ke sath kuchh hi samay me aane wali thi. par sharda devi ji to kisi aur hi khayal me khoyi huyi thi.
yahan mai agr shmbhu pratap ji ke ghar ki baat karu to unka ghar ek pushtaini makan tha jishe mai haveli to nhi kah sakta par ussi ke jaisa hi samajh lijiye . wo gao me hote haina bade bade angan baale ghar jisme angan ke charo or osara aur uske baad bahut sare room hote hai , shambhu pratap ji ka ghar bhi kuchh issi parakar ka tha. unka ghar 2 talle ka tha jisme kul milakar 14 kamre the . 8 kamra niche ke talle pe aur 6 kamre upar ke talle pe . makan ka pravesh dwar uttar ki or tha . pravesh dwar ke bahar lagbhag 2 se teen katthe tak ki zameen khali thi jahan kuchh paudhe lage huye the , in paudho me kuchh sabjiya to kuchh fool aur fal ke paudhe the . wo poora khula maidan ke ek taraf lohe ke pipe ke sahare teen ka shade laga hua tha jisse dekh kar saf kaha ja sakta th ki yaha gadiyo ko park kiya jata hoga . isi maidan me wo makan tha aur maidaan ke charo or lagbhag 8 ft ki unchi ur moti deewar ki huyi thi .
makan ke pravesh dwar ke turant baad ka jo kamra tha wo sharda devi ka tha. jisme ek purani deewan palng aur 3 mote kath ke almira lage huye the , kare me jo kuchh bhi nazar aarha tha sab pushtaini hi nazar aarhatha . sharda devi ke kamre ke baad wala dono kamra anaaz rakhne ke liye kaam aata rha tha . aur unn kamro ke baad ghar ka rashoyi ghar tha , ye sare kamre angan ke dayi tarf ke the . wahi baye taraf se suruat me kisi kamre ke bazay ek bada sa bathroom tha , angan ke ek kinare me jo pravesh dwar aur bathrom ke nazdeek wala kinara tha waha ek bahot puraana chapakal ( handpump) gada hua tha .
bathroom ke baad wala kamra bade bete anil aur bahu chitra devi ka tha aur unke baad wala kamra 2sre bete sunil aur bahu shalini ka tha, aur uske baad wala chhote bete amar aur bahu sunaina ka tha aur last wala dono room ke beech ka diwar ko hata kar ek hall type drawing room bana diya gya tha. liske bagal se hi upar ki or jane ke liye sidhi bani huyi thi.
wahi oopar me jahan sidhi nikalti thi waha pe pahla kamra poonam aur sonam ka tha, uske baad wala kamra neha , khushi aur avni ka tha, in teeno ke baad wala kamra shambhu pratap ji kishan ke liye banbaye the par ab uske aupastithi me ye kamra ricky use kar rha tha. .. baaki ke kamre me bhi saari jarurat ke sama maujud the jo ki aya pariwar wale ke aane par kaam me aaya karte the ..
abb chalte hai sharda devi ji ke taraf jo ki apne kamre ke deewan par baithi huyi najane kya soch rahi thi , jiske kaaran unke chehre ka bhav pal pal badal raha tha. wahi unke darwaje par khadi unki sabse shaitan poti avni unke hi chehre ko dekh rahi thi jo ki abhi apne daadi ke liye subah ki chay le kar aayi thi. jab avni se na raha gya to usne dadi ko awaj lagakar poochh hi liya ki wo kya soch rahi h,
avni- dadi aap subah subah itna sada sa muh kyu banayi huyi ho mujhe achha nhi lgta apko yu aise dekna. batao na kya soch rahi thi aap jo aap ke chehre par rah rah ke pareshani ke bhav aarhe the.
dadi- are mai kyu kuchh sochne lagi , aur tune kya kaha mera muh sada sa lag rha hai , ruk mai abhi tujhe batati hun ki sada sa muh kaisa hota hai. itna bol kar dadi idhar udhar kuchh khojne lagi ...
avni- are kisne bola meri dadi ko ki unka chehra sada hua lag rha hai.. meri dadi to aaj bhi shridevi lagti hai , kyu dadi .... itna bolkar avni hasne lagi
aur sharda devi ke chehre par bhi ab muskan aagyi jaha kuchh der pahle pata nhi kya kya bhav aarhe the .
abhi in dono dadi aur potiyo me khatti mithi nok jhok ho hi rahi thi ki bahar angan se sunaina devi( chhoti bahu) ki aawaj aayi.
sunaina- maaji bahar raaju aaya hai aapne bulaya tha kya.?
Introducing
(raju - shambhu pratap ji ke ghar me kayi salo se kaam karta hai , filhaal sharda ji ko kahi bahar jana hota hai to wo isse hi sath le jati hai kyuki raju gadi chalane me ekdam mahir hai...
iska kahani me ek aham roll hoga... kyunki iska itihash bhi baht rochak raha hai jo ki aage pata chalegi...)
dadi - haann bahu , use kaho bahar baithak me ruke mai wahi aarhi hunn.
fir dadi avni ko ek cup chay aur bol kar ghar ke bahar bane ek chhote se jhule baithak me chali gayi.
raju- pranam kaki , aapne bulaya koi pareshani hai kya kaki.
dadi- wo to baad me pata chalegi ki aakhir pareshani kya hai, filhaal hame turant trimath mahakali mandir nikalna hai aur 2 baje ke pahle waha se lautna bhi hai to tum gadi ek baar dekhlo sab sahi hai ya nhi . aur nashta bhi kar lena mai sunaina se bhijwa deti hunn
ek baat aur yad rahe raju beta kisi ko pata nhi chalna chahiye ki ham kaha jarhe hai.
raju- ji mai samajh gaya kaki, par fir se wahi mandir jana kya sahi hoga, jiske chalte kishan babu ko itna zillat sahna pad raha hai.
dadi- yahi sab to bhagwan ki pariksha hoti hai raju bete jo ki ussi ki jyada kathin pariksha hoti hai jispar bhagwan koi dayitwa chhodna chahte hai... baaki wahan kya hota hai ye baad me dekha jayega , fillhal to aaj hi wo din hai jis din hame waha aane ko kaha gya tha., to tum taiyar rahna mai nashta kar leti hun tab tak.
. Uske baad raju wahi teen ke shade me cover kiye huye ek tata safari ko janchne laga ki sab kuchh thik hai ya nhi ... Sab kuchh achhe se dekh lene ke baad wo bahar hi paudho ko patane ke liye lage nal koo se haath mooh dho kar wahi baithak me baith gya, kuchh der baad uska nashta bhi aagya jo khushi aur avni lekar aayi thi unhone aate ke sath hi raju ko pahle namste kiya.
Khushi & avni - namaste raju kaka.
Raju- namaste bitiya, are ye kya itna sara nashta le kar chali aayi, aur ye kya hai.... Ohh dekho to mithayi layi ho... Are ye sab tum bachhe log khao ye lo ek tum aur ye wala tum khalo... Chalo aa karo... Aaa
Avni- mithayi khate huye.......ye achhi baat nahi hai raju kaka aap hamesha apne hisse ki mithayi hame khila dete ho, aur dadi bad me hame dantti hai.
Khushi- hannn... Ab na ham dono aao ke liye nashta hi nahi layenge dekh lena,
Avni - aur nahi to kya., ab se ham nahi layenge aap ke liye nashta, aur fir aapko nahta dene ghar ki hitler neha ko bhejenge jo.. Hamesha aapki watt laga ke chali jati hai,... Itna bol kar dono hashne lage.
Raju - neha bitiya bhi bahut achhi hai bitiya par unko gussa bahot jaldi aajata hai, issilye ham unsse darte hai, aisa karna ab se ham tumko mithayi nahi khilyenge par mera nashta aur khana tum hi lana nahi to roz meri shamat aati rahegi..
Raju kaka ki baat sun kar wo dono thahake laga kar hasne lagti hai tabhi andar se dadi kiaawaj aati hai,...
Dadi - ari o maharaniyo usse aaram se khane de, fir hame kuchh kaam se Jana bhi hai, kuchh kaam dhanda to hai nahi aur lag kaye panchayti jhadne.
Chalo jao apne room me aur karo kuchh padhayi badhayi.
Dadi ke jhadne ke baad wo dono daudte huye upar chhat par chali gayi.
Kuchh samay baad Raju aur sharda devi bhi apne gantavya ki or nikal chale, jo ki ek bahut purana khandhar tha jiske andar ek purani mandir thi jise log trimath mahakali mandir ke naam se jante the...
Ab iss mandir aur khndhar ka sambandh kishan aur uske pariwar se kis parkar ka hai ye to aage pata chalegi...
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. Aaj ke liye itna hi... Hamesha khush rahe

Bahut hi shandar likh rahe ho baaki kahani me jo hero hai uski parivar me anban hua pada hai. Jinke karan vo duniya me aaya unke najro ka kanta ban chuka hai. Koyi uske saath khada hai to vo hai dadi aur dadi jab rtak jinda the tab tak uska saath deta raha. Par jane wali baat ye hai ki aisa kya hua tha jab jiske karan kisan parivar duwara niskasit kiya gaya. Kahi na kahi iska raj trimath mahakali mandir se juda hua hai. Jaha ek baar jane se hi kisan ke saath bura bartab hone laga. Ab dadi phir se vahi ja rahi jahan jane ke liye aaj hi ki deen sunishchit kiya gaya tha. Ab dekhte hai aage kiya hota hai

 

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Ab tak...
Hamlog abhi aise hi mastiya kar hi rahe the ki haveli ke bahar do gadi aakar ruki, mujhe laga mere ghar wale aaye honge, par dadi ne to kaha tha ki wo sham ko aayegi. Aur abhi dopehar hi hua hai. .....
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Ab aage...

Haveli ka bada darwaza khulta hai aur haveli ke andar do mahilaye aapas me baat karte huye aate dikhti hai, ...
Unhi dono ke pichhe ghar ke mukhiya bijendra singh ji apne hatho me ek nanhe se bacche ko liye huye aate dikhe,
Abhi iss samay Bijendra singh ji ki aankho me zamane bhar ki khushi dekhi ja sakti thi,
Wo uss nanhe bachhe ko bade pyar se dular aur puchkar rahe the...
Tabhi ghar ke andar do log aate huye dikhe..
Inme se ek raghav ke umra ka ek naujavan tha aur dusra 65 sal ki bridh mahila..

Bijendra singh ji uss masum bacche ko God me liye huye sab ke sath haveli ke bich angan me aagye jaha par kishan aur rajnish baith kar bate kar rahe the...

Bijendra singh- are kishan tum bhi yahi baithe ho, achhi baat hai.. Iss se milo (ek mahila ke taraf ishara karte huye) ye hai meri badi beti aur tumhari bua rachna ...
Aur rachna tumne isse pehchana kya,
Rachna- nahi to.
Bijendra singh- are ye kishan hai, bhool gayi kya isse,.... Tumhare bua ka pota,... Sunil ka beta hai ye
Rachna ne jab kishan ke bare me suna to uske chehre ke expression change ho gye, wo ek tez nazar kishan pe dali aur hi bol kar apne sath aayi mahila ke sath upar chhat par chali gyi.
Uski behaviour se wahaan mozud har koi ko bura laga, yahan tak rachna ke pati ko bhi jo uske sath pichhe bridh mahila ke sath aaya tha....
Bijendra singh ne apne beti ke iss lahze ke liye kishan se jaise hi maafi mangne ko huye waise hi kishan ne unhe rok diya... Aur bola ki jane dijiye dada ji, buaa jarur kuchh jyada thak gayi hongi issiliye jaldi me room chali gyi... Par asal bat to ye thi ki mujhe bhi nahi pata tha ki rachna bua mujhe dekh kar bilkul waisa hi react kyu ki, jaise ki mere so called ghar wale kiya karte the....
Khair bijendra dada ne mujhe baki sabhi se milaya...
Bijendra singh- inse milo kishan,... Ye hai rajeev, rachna ke pati aur unke sath unki mata ji rachna ki sashu ma. Aur jo abhi rachna ke sath gayi wi rajeev ki bahan thi...
Kishan jo abhi jo kuchh bhi huaa usse thoda offend tha fir bhi wo sab se mushkurate huye mila aur aaram karne ko bol kar apne kamre me jane laga... Uske sath rajnish bhi jane laga usse bhi ab waha par kuchh achha nhi lag rha tho , kou bhi apne bestfriend ki beizatti bardast thode na karega....
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Tabhi wahann pinki aati hai aur aur apne dada ke god me ek cute bachhe ko dekh kr bolti hai...
'Dada ye babu kon hai... Kitna cute hai na bilkul mere tarah.. Hihi.. '
Uski baat ko sunkar jaha kishan aur rajnish apne room ke taraf ja rha tha wo bhi abhi keliye ruk gye aur mushkurane lage..
Bijendra- are meri pinki chinki,... Ye ansh hai apke rachna bua ka beta,.. Aur in se milo ye aapke fufa ji hai aur ye dadi lage aapke namste karo inko...
Pinki- namste fufa ji namaste dadi...
Bijendra- beta apni mummy ko kaho ki ghar me mehman aaye hai Kuchh sarbat aur nashta nikal de.
Pinki - par dadu mummy to subah subah hi papa ke sath market gayi huyi hai,
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Pinki ki baat sunte hi kishan ko laga ki shayad uski baato ka kuchh asar hua hai chachi par aur wo chacha ji ki ilaz karane ko shahar le gaye hai, ... Kishan aur rajnish fir aagye apne room inhone tabhi khana kha liya tha jab wo nimisha ke sath bate kar rahe the.... Abhi dopehar ke 3 bajne ko ho gye the aur thakawat ki bajah se unhe nind bhi aane lgi to wo sona hi behtar samajhe....
Rajnish - bhai... Ye tumhari rachna bua ka kisi se milne ka tarika waqayi bahot badhiya hai, wo aise jisse bhi milte honge wo dobara inse na milne ki hi bhagwan se prarthna karta hoga....
Khadush hai poori.
Rajnish ki bat ko sunkar mai hasne laga aur usse bola..
Mai- abe yar jane de na jo jaisa hai usse waisa hi rahne de, hogi koh baat jisse unhone aisa salook kiya, par kuchh bura bhi ti nhi kaha na to kyu ham apne man me unke prati burayi rakhe,.. Chal ab si ja 1 . 1.30 ghanta kyonki asli preshani abhi nhi sham ko aayegi jab meri so called family wale yahan aayenge....
Chal so ja
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ek veeran , ghana aur vishal jungle jo ki shambhu pratap ji ke gao ke tille se prarmbh hota tha aur kayi kosh tak faila hua tha. shayad hi koi ho jo iss ghane jungle me jana chahta ho ..
karan bahut the waha kisi ke na jane ki par un karno me kuchh akalpniye karan bhi hamesha samne dekhne ko milta tha, ham sabhi jante hai ki ghane jungle hanmesha aadamkhor jungli janwar ko lekar badnam rhta hai par iss jungle ke badnam hone ka sabse bada karan tha jungle ke beech me mozud wo purani khandhar , logo ka manna tha ki jungle ke andar jo bhi uss khandhar ke seema kshetra ke nazdeek jaane ki koshish karta tha, uss khandhar ki suraksha me mozud adrishya shaktiya unka nash kar dete hai.
logo ka yah bhi manna tha ki shadiyo se wahan ek tapshwi us khandhar ke andar tapashya kar rhe hai ussi ki shakti waha kisi ko bhi jane se rokti hai...
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Wahinnnn......
lagbhag 20 varsh pahle ek azib ghatna ghati thi , ek 55 sal ka aadmi apne god me ek nawzat shishu ko le kar ek kachhe road par bhaga ja rha tha , uska poora shareer khoon se lathpath ho rkha tha..
uske pichhe kuchh log hath me hockey aur rod le kar daud rahe the ...unki shankhya bahot jyda thi ...
wo khoon se sana hua inshan daudte huye ussi jungle ke ek chhor pe aa pahuncha , shayad ye aadmi iss ilake ka nahi tha aur agar ho ga bhi to shayad iss jungle se anjan hoga... wo apne aur uss nawzat bachhe ki jan bachane ke liye uss jungle me chala gya... wahi jab wo log jo inka pichha kar rahe the , unhone deakha ki wo aadmi iss manhush jungle me chala gya to unki poori tarah se fatne lagi. unme se jo head tha usne bola.

head - sala ye chhachundar to iss manhush jungle me chala gya be , ab ka kare, agar uss bachhe ko zinda boss ke pass nahi le gye
to wo hamsab ko goli mar denge..
G1- bhaiya jee uu sasura ab ee jungaliya me gya hai ta thode na ab wapas ayega, jaise hi wo khandhar ke pas pahuchega waisehi waha ki shakti dono ko jala kar bhasm kar degi.
G2- are lekin billua agar ham uu bachhwa ke boss ke pass lekar naahi gye to uu sasura ham sbhi ka game baja dega. ..

tabhi head bolta hai- chup raho re tu dono haramkhor, hame kaise bhi kar ke uss bachhe ko lana hoga, wo budhha abhi jyda dur nhi gya hoga , chalo jaldi hame use khandhar ke nazdeek jane ke pahle hi khatam karna hoga...
fir we sab bhi darte huye uss jungle ke andar chale gaye,... jahan ye sab abhi jungle pe apna kadam hi rakhe the wahi wo aadmi jiska sharir uske hi khoon se pura lal ho chuka tha wo badhawash sa daudta jarha tha, usse ye bhi pta nhi tha ki wo kaha ja rha hai, par uske sharir se jo khoon nikal rahi thi uski khushboo ko jungle me mozud jungli janvar bhi uske or aane lage, par wo aadmi iss sab se anjaan ladkhadte huye bas aage bhagta ja rha tha ki ek zordar dahad poore jungle ke watavarn ko ek dam se badal diya, ye ek sher ki dahad thi.. Iski aawaz un gundo ke pass bhi gayi, jise sunkar unme se kuchh ki patloon hi gili ho gyi.
Aur kuchhh to jaise aaye waise hi bhag khade huye...
Wahinn wo aadmi bhi jaise hi dahad suna usko bhi abhas ho hi gya ki wo bhagte bhagte galat jagah aagya hai, halanki usse jungle ki kahaniyo ke bare me kuchh pata nhi tha usse bas jungli janwaro ka dar lagne laga. Wo waise hi bhage ja rha tha ki ek bar fir se ek dahad sunne ko mila aur ye bilkul uske pichhe se aayi thi, isse sunne ke baad wo aadmi turant ruk gya, aur dhire dhire pichhe mud ke dekhne laga. Aur wo jaise hi pichhe mudkar dekha uske pair tak kanpne lage, usne dekha ki uske pichhe jitne bhi aadmi the unme se kuchh ka sharir pichhe gira hua hai wo bhi kshat biksht avashta me, ye drishya dekhkar uss aadmi ki chakkar aane laga , par wo khud ko samhala aur uss bachhe ki apne sine me lagaye huye fir se bhagne laga, aur bhagte bhagte wo pichhe mud kar dekha to wo sher ab uska pichha nhi kar rha tha balki wo dusri ore jane laga tha, ye dekh kar wo aadmi thoda chaunka ki ye kaise hi sakta hai, par fir wo sab bhagwan ki maya hai ye soch kar wapas ussi ore jane laga,... Kuchh hi der me usse kuchh ghantiyo ki aawaj aane lagi tab jakar uske sans me sans aayi, usse ab laga ki koi to rashta mila yahann.. Wo awaje pakka kisi mandir me bajne wali ghantiyo ki aawaje thi. Wo wapas unhi aawajo ki ore jane laga, ab tak wo poori tarah se jakhmi ho gya tha, uski aankh bhi band hone ko ho gyi thi,... Kisi tarah usse aage chalte huye ek khandhar dikhi jiske andar se hi ghantiyo ke bajne ki aawje aa rhi thi ....
wo uss khandhar ke andar chala gya aur waise andar me hi jate huye usse ek vishal mandir dikha jisme ma kali virajman thi,... Aur unki murti ke aage koi tezpurush baith kar stuti kar rhe the... Unka tez itna tha ki wo aadmi jo abhi tak khud ke sanso ko samhale tha uski sanse achanak se rukne lagi aur wo wahi mandir ke sidhiyo par aakar pith ke bal gir gya... Uske sine par abhi bhi wo nawzat bachha apni sanse le rha tha....
Idhar uss aadmi ka pran uske sharir se chala gya tha par mandir ke andar baithe unn tezpurush ke chehre pe muskaan aagyi thi... Aur unhone apni sadhna ki samapt kar ke bas itna hi kaha ...
" Aakhir aahi gaya wo jiska mujhe shadiyo se intezar rha.........teen matho ki shakti ka eklauta warish jo ki is trimath mandir me kaid hai "
Wo tezpurush apne sadhna ke sthan se uthe aur bahar aakar uss bachhe ko God me uthate hai unke aisa karte hi wo bachha bhi jaag jata hai aur inn tezpurush ko dekh kar kilkariya laga kar hashne lagta hai., .
Tabhi tezpurush bolte hai...
Kitna somya aur sundar bachha hai, (upar dekhte huye) he bhagwan aapka lakh lakh dhanyavaad karta hu ki aap meri tapasya ka itna sundar fal mujhe diye, ab meri avdhi bhi kuchh saalo me samapt ho jayegi aur ab mai apni ******** ko fir se dekh paunga par mujhe.. Iss sab ke pahle iss bache ko uski poori dayitwa usko smjha dunga bhagwan, ...
Mai issiki shiksha ke liye apne guru se prarthna karunga aur iski zivan me itni pareshaniya dunga ki ye apne ziwan se hi aadhe shiksha seekh lega...
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Tumhe ye shaktiya aise hi nahi milegi putra tumhe uske liye bahot kathin pariksha deni hogi aur bahut sare kashto ko jhelna hoga.,
Tumhe tumhari teeno matho ki shktiya tabhi prapt hogi jab tum teeno matho ke ansho dwara janm kanyao se vivah karoge wo bhi unki swekchha se. . ..
. Itna bol kar wo tezpurush ek gahri sans lete hai aur fir us aadmi ke sharir ko dekh kar bolte hai..
Aaj tum aaram karo aur mai in mahapurush ka shradh karm kar deta hun jinhone apne dayitwa ko purn nishtha ke sath nibhaya, itna bol kar wo tezpurush us balak ke chehre pe hath ferte hai aur aisa karte hi wo bachha wahi so jata hai fir wo tezpurush uss bachhe ko wahi ma kali ke niche ek phulo ki badi gathri pe sula dete hai aur uss aadmi ki shradh krm karne ko chal dete hai,...
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....... Wo tezpurush us aadmi kr sharir ka sradh karn karke jaise hi wapas mandir aate hai to unke chehre pe ek gahri mushkan chha jati hai,... Darashal abhi mandir me wo bachha wahi fool ki tokari par let kar khel raha tha aur
uske sath kelne wala aur koi nhi wohi sher tha jo uss samay jangal me un gundo ko marne aaya tha, .
Abhi drishya kuchh aisa tha ki wo sher uss fool ke gathri ke samne bilkul shant baitha tha jiske upar wo bacha filhal let kar apne pao ko idhar udhar chala rha tha aur uss bachhe ke pair ke talwe se apne sar de ragad kar shayad us sher ko bhi kuchh shukhad anubhuti ho rhi thi, aur wo bachha bhi uski harkat par kilkariya lagakar hasne lagjata tha.....
Indono ki ye mashtiya dekhkar wo tezpurush waha aate hai aur bolte hai,...
" Ab aap bahut khel chuke isse jaysimha ab aap bhi aaram kare aur mujhe isko nehlalene de,
Itna sunte hi jaisimha(sher) ek bar uss bache ko pyar se chahta hai aur wapas khandhar me kahi chala jata hai,
Uski harkat ko wo tezpurush bhi dekh rahe the aur haste hue wo uss bache ko utha kar chal diye khandhar ke pichhe jahan.. Ek bans ki kutiya aur ek jheel thi, waha jakar unhone pahle uss bache ko nahaya aur fir ek saf kapde me usse lapet kar kutiya ke andar chale gye...
Unhone soch liya tha ki abhi ke liye iss bache ki shiksha aur aaj ke samay ke musibato ko samjhna aur usse ladna bahut zaruri hai...
issiliye unhe koi uchit guardian chahiye tha jo ki iss ilake me shirf ek hi tha ...
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Cl. Shambhu pratap singh... Jiske imandari aur anushaahan ke kisse in tezpurush ne bhi sune the..
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Aaj ke liye itna hi...
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