Thriller KAYAKALP

[Rockstar Rocky]

Shukriya, bas aap sabhi hasinaao ke pyar ne story shuru karwa di hai.
Khair intzaar rahega aapke reviews ka, sath bane rahiye

Hum fir job chod de

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Kahe itna tadpa rahe ho jayada tadpaoge to soch lo.....

Ab agar aur socha to ho gaya kalyaan is story ka

 

[TheBlackBlood]

To gaur talab mudda ye hai pahle naya sansar read karta hoon phir kayakalp ko read karunga kyuki bina pahle part ko read kiye is part ko read karne me maza na aayega.

Sahi kaha, well ek naya sansar me ju ki pratikriya ka intzaar rahega. Jab tak use finish karke review doge tab tak yaha par first update likhna shuru kar duga

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Waise kirdaar to kayi saare hai, purane bhi aur naye bhi... lekin meri all time favorite kirdaar to naina singh baghel hi hai
Naina bua ke saamne baaki sab chai kam pani hai

Naina ne aise kaun se jhande gaade the jo wo favourite ho gayi. Shukar manaao ki Ajay Singh se bach gayi thi warna wo tabiyat se uske sath karta.

Ab besabri se intezaar hai to bas first update ki

Bilkul, lekin reviews me copy paste mat karna.

 

[Naina]

Ab agar aur socha to ho gaya kalyaan is story ka

Pratima ji dekh liyo ju ko gayab kar kaise hansh rahe

 

[Naina]

Naina ne aise kaun se jhande gaade the jo wo favourite ho gayi. Shukar manaao ki Ajay Singh se bach gayi thi warna wo tabiyat se uske sath karta.

Bilkul, lekin reviews me copy paste mat karna.

revos cnp

 

[Naina]

Vikas ki chabhi
Jab pratima banegi nidhi ki bhabhi

 

[Vaishnavi]

Aakesh. Vaishnavi Rahul ProfessorPo Destiny ....
Ek sapna hai ki hindi ss pe chahal pahal ho, na kewal readers balki writers bhi ek dusre ko support kare, reviews de... jab silent readers dekhenge ki kahani mein kaafi revos aa rahe hai to wo bhi stories padhne ke liye aur aakarshit honge.. aur shayad der saber unmein se kuch revos bhi likhkar post bhi karenge...
bas isko sach karne ke liye aap logo ke sahyog chaahiye... Aasha hai aap log is mamle ko samjhenge aur sahyog jarur karenge....

...ab mai bhi hu kahani pe lekin usse pehle part 1 padhungi

 

[TheBlackBlood]

plz update de dijiye

Is kahani ke 2-3 update 2.6 saal pahle hi post huye the lekin wo devnagri me likhe gaye the. Yaha par roman me convert kar ke post karuga. Kaam chal raha hai. Time ki bahut shortage hai is liye update aane me time lag sakta hai.

 

[Naina]

Wafa Khan, Ek aisi mushlim ladki jisne mohabbat me saari hade paar kar di. Iske baare me pura vivran kahaani me aage chal kar pata chalega.

aaj tak ek baat samajh nahi aayi ki is wafa khan ne kiske sath wafa kiya jiske chalte iska naam wafa ho gaya

 

[Vaishnavi]

Shiva Singh Baghel ( Current age 23/Unmarried/Kaanunan umarkaid ki saza praapt )

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