Incest LAADLAA APNE PARIWAR KA

[Badshah Khan]

Guys pole is created I request everyone to cast their vote.

 

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Bhut achhi h story

Thank you for your comment

 

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Mast mast story hai

Thank you Rahul bhai

 

[Badshah Khan]

kahani ka flow badhiya hai.
vishal ki family bahut badi hai aur uske nana ki family bhi. ghar ke bado ko har bat manna, kheti bari mein madad karne wala vishal vasna ke bare me ajnan tha. iske bare sikhaya uski dadi ne. usi raat ek hi jhatke me vishal jese mature ho gaya tha. Ek baar us vasna ke raste pe jo chala fir piche mudke dekhna nhi pada. uske gaon aur uske nana ke ghar pe bhi, kul milake kayi auraton ke sath sambndh ban chuka hai uska. mami ke sath kiya beaulad hone ke kaaran.
kahani mein gaon ke parives ko dikhaya gaya hai, vishal ke family me sabhi ek dusre ko bahut pyar karte hai aur value bhi samjhte haii.

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[Badshah Khan]

Mind blowing update
subha subha kaka ke darshan kara diya, kaki aur bhauji ke darshan adhure reh gaye. Meenaksi bhi dur dur rahi. Kavita ke hotho ki jagah badi ma ke galo pe kiss kiya. udhar khet me bhi sumitra kaki ke sath meeting kal ko set kar diya . Pure update me vishal khali hath reh gya. nana ke ghar par hi acha tha kayi sari maal pat gye the .

Thanks you Aakesh. Bhai
Ha filhal to wo khali hath hi but pata nahi kab tak kyunki ek meeting fix hai hi aur pata nahi kiska number kab lag jaye.

 

[Badshah Khan]

Haalat insaan ko badal dete hai .aur is kahani me santi devi apne pote ke nature ko badal diya . jahir si baat hai wrana apne hero ki soch badalta kaise.
Plot ke baat kare to bahoot hi badhiya plot banaya hai. Kavita ka charecter khass lagi,uske khud hi itne gam hai fir bhi us gam ko kiske samne jahir hone nahi deti. uski bol aur aada to bahoot aache se likha hai apne aur feel bhi ho raha hai wo cuteness padhne par. lekin ek taraf apne kavita ki charecter ko itna acha likha par jo dard apko feel karwana tha meenakshi aur uski beti wale scene mein wo ap us hadd tak dikha nahi paaye . thoda kam sentence mei bhaari words ka use karne pe ho jaata .
jhuth nahi balunga kahani isiliye best part ka intejar hai. mujhe intejar hai jab vishal aur kavita ke bich milan hoga.
aur first milan ko 2 -3 long update me likha jaye main apka sukargujar rahunga.
Intejar age ki behtarin pesh kash padhne ke liye..

Thanks for your review bhai
Koshish karunga ki apki ummid par khara utro
Bas sath bane rahiye.

 

[Badshah Khan]

bhai sumitra kaki ko aur waiting mat karao aur jald se ek garama garam update de do

Zarur bhai

 

[Badshah Khan]

bahut khubsurat kahani prastut ki hai apne, mujhe samajh nahi aa rahi k kin alfasojo ko chun kar apki aur aapki is adbhut kanahi ki tarif karu . apke likhne ka tarika bhot behtriin hai. bhavnao ki aisi abhibyakti sath hi aisa alam ki dil ke taro ko ched de. yun to aise genre pe kayi kahaniya bani hai ,, lekin is kahani mein gaon ka khubsurat vatavaran, pariwar ka mahatv bade saralta se aur jis kaabiliyat se likha hai wo bhot kamal ka hai . Kahi bhi bewajah ki topic ya khincha hua scene nahi tha . incest aur family pe base kahani me jo material hone chahiye utna hi dala gaya hai ...

Thanks for such a review
Sath bane rahiye

 

[Badshah Khan]

ye mantrmugdh kar dena wala vyavhaar aur apnapan apko shahar me sayad hi dekhne ko mile.
gaon khet khalihsn ki bat hi nirali hoti hai aur nirale waha rehne wale log jo bahot saral jindgi jite hai .
bas yahi khas saralat ke akarsan ne mujhe khinch lyi stori ko padne ke liye.

Khushi huwi padh kar ki apko plot pasand aya but maine bhi kabhi gaon ki life experienced nahi ki but jitne filmo dekha ya kahani yo mai pada uske basis par hi likhne ka try kar raha ho.
I hope ki apko agey bhi kahani padhkar maza aye.

 

[Badshah Khan]

visaal ne santi devi ki age ki sed kuch jyaada hi kol diya, piche ka jane kab kolega

Dekhte hai aisa hoga bhi ya nahi

 

[Badshah Khan]

To laadlaa Vishal iss vishal naam ke prani jo sabhi ka ladla bana hua. Sabhi pyaar karte hai. Vishal bhi sabhi se paayar karta hai. Aur spacial wala love dadi ko raat me karta hai.

Vishal ne nana ke ghar ka rook kiya. Raste me do awla nari mili jinhe apne saath lekar chal diya. Lagta hai kota kaam ho gaya tha isliye badha liya. Jo naraja nana ke ghar dikha ek adbhut najarana kiya mami kiya mama mahusi bahne sabhi ke aankho ka tara hai vishal ya phir hwash mitane ka shahara. Khair vishal ki khichai to chalta hi rahega.

Kalpana ek asmpurn nari jisi vishal ne bahla phushla kar apne jaal me phasa liya aur biz ka ropan bhi kar diya.

Rani ka kisha samjha na aaya. Bachpan se sabhi rani ko vishal ki bibi kahta hai aur ye vishal sharmata bhi hai aur chidh jata. Ab ish vishal ko kaun samjha ghuchho ko bachpan se permanent bibi mila bibi ke saath time na bitakar dusre ke saath gulchhade udha raha hai.

Aaj ke liye itna hi aage ke update me thoda aur khichayi kar dunga.

Adbhut atulniya lekhan kaushal

Thank you bhai for your comment Destiny
Admi kabhi ek se khush huwa usey jetne mile wo khushi khushi swikar karta hai vishal bhi kuch is tarah ka hi hai ab wo Jaan bhuj kar ya Phir anjane mai hi agey wale ko apne shishe mai utar hi leta hai.