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Are ye batao hamko ki uski biwi ne akhir usko chhoda kyu
Lustyweb's Exclusive Story Contest 2022 ➣ Chit Chat & Discussion Thread
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Exactly, zaruri nahi ki 200-300 words me review do lekin review aisa zarur hona chahiye jo story ya update se related ho aur jise padh kar writer ko bhi samajh aaye ki use story me aage kaha par aur kis tarah se improvement karne ki zarurat hai.
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Rusty ki contest story padhi kya bhai abhi Jo post kiya hai
Nehi abhi nehi pada
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ab mein yeh kesse bata sakta hun... yeh to uss ke Pati se poochiye...Are ye batao hamko ki uski biwi ne akhir usko chhoda kyu
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Mai to confuse ho gawa yaar aap dekhkar meko samjhna to mai rebo dunga
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Are ladki lesbo na thi bhai point ye hai aur usko so ghar inna pasand aaya ki husband chhod aayiab mein yeh kesse bata sakta hun... yeh to uss ke Pati se poochiye...
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Theek hai abhi read karta hoon
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Theek hai
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bro... wo ghar to uss ka pati khareedne ke liye tayaar tha... phir "aisa kyun hua...." ???
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I don't know where you commented but it is definitely seen that in most of the places you have written Nice Update or Wonderful Update and this is wrong in every way
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