Lustyweb's Exclusive Story Contest 2022 ➣ Chit Chat & Discussion Thread

[Naina]

Lagii Lund Ki Lagan, Chudi Ke Sange

ye h title original wala

Bakwaas modified wala zyada badhiya hai

 

[XP 007]

Usko koi mil gaya hai

Vo paka SiddHart hoga ya Ares tharki

 

[Naina]

Abi to open nahi kar sakte contest ke baad karte h open

Ye bhi sahi hai

 

[XP 007]

Bakwaas modified wala zyada badhiya hai

but writer ko story ke first line to modify karna chiye tha

 

[Naina]

Vo paka SiddHart hoga ya Ares tharki

koi mil gaya hai ye jaan ke SiddHart roke gaya hai dukhi mann se piche ke pages check kar sakte ho

 

[XP 007]

koi mil gaya hai ye jaan ke SiddHart roke gaya hai dukhi mann se piche ke pages check kar sakte ho

Check kiya tabhi bola

 

[Naina]

but writer ko story ke first line to modify karna chiye tha

Kya farak padta.... title jab op ho

 

[XP 007]

Kya farak padta.... title jab op ho

Yes mere 200 like paka ho gaya ab dusri story check kata hu koi cnp nikal jaye bas ( ) Ares ki check karta hu vo paka cnp post kiya hoga

 

[Naina]

Yes mere 200 like paka ho gaya ab dusri story check kata hu koi cnp nikal jaye bas ( ) Ares ki check karta hu vo paka cnp post kiya hoga

Karo, karo

 

[XP 007]

Karo, karo

Abhi to meko sabhi story par review post karna h fir un sab se apne story par review lege