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story suru karne ki ijazat hai bhaiHELLO FRIENDS : : : :
Mai ek story start karne jaa raha hu ,
Agar sath mila to story 100% complete hoga agar ijazat ho to start karu.
( DHANYAWAD)
waise mai padhunga kal ke baad kyuki mai busy hun abhi waise 
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Update ~ 01
Hey surya sun'na yaar.
Surya : kya hai Aditya? maine kaha na nahi jaunga.
Aditya : lekin waha hame achhe paise milenge ek baar aur soch le yaar.
Surya : tu kabhi nahi sudhrega.
Aditya : sale yaha ghar ka rent bharne ke paise nahi hai aur tu kya bol raha hai.
Surya : tu apna muh band rakh jyada bakwas mat kar.
Aditya : haa main to apna muh band hi rakhu
Sale tu karna kya chahta hai.
Surya : chal tujhe office nahi jaana.
Aditya : haa jaa raha hu.
"Aditya ek chhote se ghar se nikalta hai jo bahar se to thik thak hi lag rahi hai"
"Ghar ke andar"
"Surya phone pe kisi se baat karke nahaane chala jaata hai"
"Chota sa intro"
Hero - surya, surya ek bahut hi handsome ladka hai six pack abs jo uski body ko aur bhi attractive banaata hai, simple kapde hi pahanta hai. Aur dikhawa to bilkul bhi nahi karta.
Age - 22 year
Aditya - ye bhi kafi handsome hai, aur slim bhi aditya paisa kamane pe jyada dhayan deta hai.
Abhi ek chhota sa job karta hai jisme 15 hajar per month kama leta hai.
Age - 23
"Baaki ke character time pe introduce honge"
"Kuch samay mein surya bathroom se nikalta hai, aur kapde pahan'ne lagta hai, kuch time mein surya ready ho jaata hai.
Aur ghar se nikal jaata hai.
: : : : : : : : : : : : : : :
"Yaha se thodi door"
2 ladki ek bade se mein baith ke baat kar rahi thi.
Ladki : priya ma'am ab hame chalna chahiye.
Priya : hema tujhe itni jaldi kyu hai.
Hema : par ma'am waha director presan ho rahe hai.
Priya : to mai kya karu uss director ko samaj nahi aata meri bhi personal life hai.
Hema : to mai director ko kya kahu.
Priya : keh do thodi derr mein aaungi.
Hema : okay ma'am.
"Aur kuch time tak dono wahi baithe rahti hai.
Priya (man me) : kya wo aaj nahi aayega.
" wahi road mein ek kafi mahangi car mein ek person baitha hua tha, jise priya dekh leti hai, abhi priya bahut khush thi.
Aur aise hi car priya ke ankho se ojhal ho jaati hai.
Hema : ma'am ab kafi time ho gayi hai, hame chalna chahiye.
Priya : ha chalo ab.
: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :
Aditya ka office uske ghar se 5-km door tha aur aditya hamesha taxi
Se hi aata tha.
Admi : aditya maine jo tumhe kaam diya tha kya wo pura hua hai.
Aditya : yes boss ho gaya hai.
Admi : good mujhe tumse yahi ummid thi.
Aditya : thaks sir.
: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :
Surya : kya kaam ho gaya?
Admi : nahi sir.
Surya : kiran kaha hai.
Admi : ji wo to abhi bahar gayi hai.
"main aa gayi sir ' dusri taraf se awaj aati hai jo ki kiran ki thi.
Kiran : ji kya baat hai.
Surya : maine tumhe kuch kaha tha kya tumhe yaad hai.
Kiran : yes sir main taiyar hu.
Surya : ok
(kiran's intro)
Surya ki secretary hai.
Name-kiran
Age-20
Figure-34-26-34
Hight-5ft 6in.
Colour-fair bilkul heroine lagti hai"
: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :
"Ha ha ha bahut jald main tumhe khatam kar dunga"
Ek kamre mein 2 log baithe hue the jisme se ek ye keh raha tha.
2ra admi : yaar amit tum kyu uske piche pade ho,
Wo bahut khatarnak hai.
Amit : tu nahi samjhega sumit usne mere bete ko mara hai, jo dard mujhe hai wo tu nahi samjhega.
Sumit : wo bhi mere bete jaisa hi tha, mai samajh sakta hu.
Amit : bahut jald mai uss kutte ko khatam kar dunga dekhna tum.
" sumit aur amit bachpan ke dost hai inke bade mein aage pata chalega
: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :
(Film shooting area)
Hema : ready ho ma'am.
Priya : yes
Hema : ok to chaliye fir.
"priya aur hema dono shooting wali jagah par aa jaate hai"
"waha se thode doori par.
Director : sorry sir mai aisa nahi kar sakta hu.
Hemant : yaar tumse ek scene nahi badle jaate tu director kaise ban gaya.
Director : wo baat nahi hai sir priya ne film contract sign karne se pahle hi keh di thi ye sab scene nahi karegi.
Hemant : mai aapko double payment dilwaunga soch lijiye.
Director : thik hai mai koshish karta hu usse baat karne ki.
"Director priya ki or chala jaata hai, aur idhar hemant bahut khush ho raha tha, hemant ko pata tha director kafi lalchi admi hai.
: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :
Surya aur kiran ek band pade factory ke paas khade the dono ke paas letest gun thi.
Surya : ready ho kiran
Kiran : yes sir i'm ready.
Surya : good to chale fir.
: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :
Aditya : yaar ye boss kuch jyada hi kaam dene lag gaye hai matha paka ke rakh deta hai.
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DHANYAWAD
Hey surya sun'na yaar.
Surya : kya hai Aditya? maine kaha na nahi jaunga.
Aditya : lekin waha hame achhe paise milenge ek baar aur soch le yaar.
Surya : tu kabhi nahi sudhrega.
Aditya : sale yaha ghar ka rent bharne ke paise nahi hai aur tu kya bol raha hai.
Surya : tu apna muh band rakh jyada bakwas mat kar.
Aditya : haa main to apna muh band hi rakhu
Sale tu karna kya chahta hai.
Surya : chal tujhe office nahi jaana.
Aditya : haa jaa raha hu.
"Aditya ek chhote se ghar se nikalta hai jo bahar se to thik thak hi lag rahi hai"
"Ghar ke andar"
"Surya phone pe kisi se baat karke nahaane chala jaata hai"
"Chota sa intro"
Hero - surya, surya ek bahut hi handsome ladka hai six pack abs jo uski body ko aur bhi attractive banaata hai, simple kapde hi pahanta hai. Aur dikhawa to bilkul bhi nahi karta.
Age - 22 year
Aditya - ye bhi kafi handsome hai, aur slim bhi aditya paisa kamane pe jyada dhayan deta hai.
Abhi ek chhota sa job karta hai jisme 15 hajar per month kama leta hai.
Age - 23
"Baaki ke character time pe introduce honge"
"Kuch samay mein surya bathroom se nikalta hai, aur kapde pahan'ne lagta hai, kuch time mein surya ready ho jaata hai.
Aur ghar se nikal jaata hai.
: : : : : : : : : : : : : : :
"Yaha se thodi door"
2 ladki ek bade se mein baith ke baat kar rahi thi.
Ladki : priya ma'am ab hame chalna chahiye.
Priya : hema tujhe itni jaldi kyu hai.
Hema : par ma'am waha director presan ho rahe hai.
Priya : to mai kya karu uss director ko samaj nahi aata meri bhi personal life hai.
Hema : to mai director ko kya kahu.
Priya : keh do thodi derr mein aaungi.
Hema : okay ma'am.
"Aur kuch time tak dono wahi baithe rahti hai.
Priya (man me) : kya wo aaj nahi aayega.
" wahi road mein ek kafi mahangi car mein ek person baitha hua tha, jise priya dekh leti hai, abhi priya bahut khush thi.
Aur aise hi car priya ke ankho se ojhal ho jaati hai.
Hema : ma'am ab kafi time ho gayi hai, hame chalna chahiye.
Priya : ha chalo ab.
: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :
Aditya ka office uske ghar se 5-km door tha aur aditya hamesha taxi
Se hi aata tha.
Admi : aditya maine jo tumhe kaam diya tha kya wo pura hua hai.
Aditya : yes boss ho gaya hai.
Admi : good mujhe tumse yahi ummid thi.
Aditya : thaks sir.
: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :
Surya : kya kaam ho gaya?
Admi : nahi sir.
Surya : kiran kaha hai.
Admi : ji wo to abhi bahar gayi hai.
"main aa gayi sir ' dusri taraf se awaj aati hai jo ki kiran ki thi.
Kiran : ji kya baat hai.
Surya : maine tumhe kuch kaha tha kya tumhe yaad hai.
Kiran : yes sir main taiyar hu.
Surya : ok
(kiran's intro)
Surya ki secretary hai.
Name-kiran
Age-20
Figure-34-26-34
Hight-5ft 6in.
Colour-fair bilkul heroine lagti hai"
: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :
"Ha ha ha bahut jald main tumhe khatam kar dunga"
Ek kamre mein 2 log baithe hue the jisme se ek ye keh raha tha.
2ra admi : yaar amit tum kyu uske piche pade ho,
Wo bahut khatarnak hai.
Amit : tu nahi samjhega sumit usne mere bete ko mara hai, jo dard mujhe hai wo tu nahi samjhega.
Sumit : wo bhi mere bete jaisa hi tha, mai samajh sakta hu.
Amit : bahut jald mai uss kutte ko khatam kar dunga dekhna tum.
" sumit aur amit bachpan ke dost hai inke bade mein aage pata chalega
: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :
(Film shooting area)
Hema : ready ho ma'am.
Priya : yes
Hema : ok to chaliye fir.
"priya aur hema dono shooting wali jagah par aa jaate hai"
"waha se thode doori par.
Director : sorry sir mai aisa nahi kar sakta hu.
Hemant : yaar tumse ek scene nahi badle jaate tu director kaise ban gaya.
Director : wo baat nahi hai sir priya ne film contract sign karne se pahle hi keh di thi ye sab scene nahi karegi.
Hemant : mai aapko double payment dilwaunga soch lijiye.
Director : thik hai mai koshish karta hu usse baat karne ki.
"Director priya ki or chala jaata hai, aur idhar hemant bahut khush ho raha tha, hemant ko pata tha director kafi lalchi admi hai.
: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :
Surya aur kiran ek band pade factory ke paas khade the dono ke paas letest gun thi.
Surya : ready ho kiran
Kiran : yes sir i'm ready.
Surya : good to chale fir.
: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :
Aditya : yaar ye boss kuch jyada hi kaam dene lag gaye hai matha paka ke rakh deta hai.
.
.
.
.
.
.
AAJ KE LIYE INTA HI DOSTO
Like & comments karna na bhule
Jo bi suggestion ho kripya comment karke jarur bataye.
DHANYAWAD
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