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UPDATE-15
In A&A Home
Papa se baat karne ke baad
Mom fir se news dekhne lagi
Tabhi unhen doorbell bajane ki awaaz aai
Tab mom ne jakar door khola
Samne Mai aur A&A khade the
Mai to mom Ko dekhkar shocked hi ho gaya
Vahi jab mom ki najar mere upar pari
Tab unhen pata chal gaya ki mai hi Raj hu
Jiske baad mom ne family drama shuru kar diya
Vahi jab A&A Ko pata chala Ki mai uska bhai hun
Jisne 3-3 bar logo Ko bachaya hai
Vah dono to Khushi Ke mare jhoomne lage
Lekin un dono ke man me ek sawal tha
Ki ab tak dad aur mom ne unhen mere bare me kyon nahin bataya
Jabki mai in sabhi baato se bekhabar
Mom ke mind ko padh raha tha
Aur har badhate pal ke sath
Mera gussa bharta ja raha tha
Maine kisi bhi tarah apne gusse Ko control Kiya
Aur ek jagah call laga diya
Thodi hi der mein dusre taraf se
Kisi ne call uthaya

Neha-Bolo jaan kya baat hai
(Main To aap logon Ko batana hi bhul gaye ki raj aur neha Kuchh dino baad shaadi karne ki planning me the)

Raj-jald se jald London jaane ke liye private plane ready karo
Mai teen logon ke sath airport pahuch raha hu
Tum bhi mere saath chal rahi ho

Neha-theek hai Jaan jaisa tum kaho

Thodi hi der ke baad Mai, mom aur A&A airport per the
Jahan per Neha Ne hamen join kiya
Fir ham log london ke liye nikal gaye

Dusri Taraf
Viraj office

Viraj-Boliye Bansal Sahab
Aaj aapane yahan aane ka kasht kyon Kiya

Dad-maine tumhare sarth ke bare mein bahut socha
Fir faisla kiya ki Mai A&A ko tumhen soup du

Viraj-kya baat hai
Aaj aapke andar Ka pita kahan hai
Jisne use din un donon ko
Yahan Se dur bhej diya

Dad-Nahi hun main donon ka pita
Vah mere bacche nahin hai
Iske baad dad ne Viraj ko apna atit bataya (Jo Raj ne mom ke mind mein Dekha tha)
Jiske baad Viraj Apne gundo ko lekar
Dad ke sath kahin nikal gaya

In Plane
A&A-bhaiya aap ine kaise jante hai

Raj-yah tum donon ki bhabhi hai

Jiske baad A&A Neha se baate karne lag gai
Vahi Jab mom Ko pata Chala
Raj India ka top businessman hai
To unhone socha Raj jarur unhen Viraj wale problem se bacha lega
Jabki Raj ab bhi us baat Ko soch raha tha
Jo usne mom ke mind mein dekhi thi
Aur Jo baat dad ne Viraj ko bataya tha

FLASHBACK
Writer language

Paisa milane ke Kuchh samay baad
Papa ko pata chalta hai ki
Pradeep unhen dhokha de raha hai
Vah unhen markar unki property hathiyana chahta hai
Tab Papa ne apni ek vasiyat banvae
Aur apni sari property apne charo bacchon Ke naam Kar di
Aur ek shart laga liya ki
Jab tak A&A 20 sal ke nahin Ho jaate
Tab tak Kisi Ko property ka koi hissa nahin milega
Vahin dusri Taraf
Pradeep lagbhag Apne paise khatam kar chuka tha
Tab Papa ne use account se apne pure paise
Apne account me transfer kiye
Fir uske baad Kisi secret account me
Us samay vah paisa 2500 Karor tha
(aur ab vah paisa Kitna hoga
Yah aap log Soch hi sakte Hai)
Jab pardeep Ko pata chala
Ki Papa ne apna paisa Kisi secret account mein dal diya hai
To usne papa se poochha
Ki unhone aisa kyon Kiya
Tab Papa ne kaha ki unka paisa vah kahin bhi dalen
Kuchh dinon baad Pradeep ko vasiyat ke bare mein bhi pata chal gaya
Iss baat se use bahut gussa aaya
Jis karan usne mom-dad ko kidnap kar liya
Aur us secret account ke bare me poochhne laga
Jab mom-dad use kuchh nahin bataya
Tab vah mom-dad ka mask lagakar
Vah aur uski biwi Riya mom-dad Ka jagah le liya
Jiske baad Pradeep mom-dad ko A&A ke bare mein bata bata Kar dhamki dene laga
Lekin mom-dad use Kuchh Nahin batae
Kyunki unhen pata tha
Ki ek bar jab secret account ke bare mein pardeep ko pata chal gaya
To vah Kisi Ko jinda Nahin chhodega
Aise hi 18 Saal beet Gaye
Iss bich Pradeep aur Riya ne A&A ko kabhi apne family ke bare mein nahin bataya
Aur na hi Kabhi India mein sampark Kiya. India aane ke baad
Riya Raj Ko Apne jaal mein phasane ke liye Haridwar Gayi
Lekin use vaha Raj nahin mila
Flashback Endaad
Riya Raj Ko Apne jaal mein phasane ke liye Haridwar Gayi
Lekin use vaha Raj nahin mila
Flashback End
 
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UPDATE-16
In London airport
Raj ki plane abhi-abhi London airport per land hui hai
Aur sabhi log plane se utarkar Car ki taraf badh Gaye
Vahi plane land hote Hain
Raj Ko apne andar bahut becheni mahsus ho rahe the


Raj-Neha tum in logon ke sath ghar chali jao
Main abhi ek chhota sa kam karke vahi aata hun

Jiske bad sabhi log ghar ke liye nikal gaye
Aur Raj bhi airport se bahar aakar
Ful speed me ek taraf bhagane lagta hai
Uski speed itni thi ki
Koi bhi use dekh nahin sakta hai

Vahin dusri Taraf
Jis samay Raj ki plane land hui thi
Usi samay Viraj bhi dad(Pradeep) aur aapane kuchh gundon ke sath
A&A ke ghar ki taraf nikala tha
Tabhi use bhi Apne andar
Kuchh becheni mahsus hone lagti hai

Viraj-tum log inke sath jao
Mai thodi der me vahin per aata hu
Iske baad Viraj bhi ful speed me ek taraf bhagne lagta hai
same speed of Raj,

Kuchh hi samay baad
London ka 1 side area
Jahan per kheti ki jaati thi
Vahi bahut bada blast hua
Vah to achcha tha ki
Vahan per koi insan nahin tha
Lekin Jahan per blast hua
Vah Jaga puri tarah destroy ho gai
Blast hone ke baad
Vaha per sirf dhul hi dhul thi
Kuchh 15-20 minut baad
Jab dhul vahan se hati
Vab vahan per aur koi nahi Raj kara tha
Thodi hi der ke baad
Raj vahan se kahin chala gaya

Vahin dusri Taraf
Jab Neha mom(Riya) and A&A Ghar pahunche
Tab ghar per dad(Pradeep) Viraj ke gundon ke sath the
Jaise hi Neha ne dad(p) Ko dekha
Use fir se vahi sab baten yaad aane lagi
Jo dad(p) chacha aur bua ke bich hui thi

Thodi hi der baad vahan per Viraj aa gaya
Aur apne gundon ko lekar wapas chala gaya
Dad(P) usse puchte hai
Ki vah kyon ja raha hai
Lekin Viraj unhen koi jawab diye hi wapas chala jata Hai

Abhi ke liye itna hi
Aaj Thora gaon aaya hua hu
Dashara hai na
Aur gaon me sab kuchh aaj hi hota hai
Jis Karan update small tha

Otherwise
Next update me Raj-Viraj Ka secret khulega
 
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UPDATE-17
Yahan se first part ki pori story
writer ke language mein chalegi

In Raj side
Relation between Raj and Viraj

Kuchh samay pahle
Jab ek Taraf Raj
Aur dusri taraf se Viraj
Ek dusre ki taraf
Full speed me
Bhagana shuru Kiya
Aur thodi hi der ke baad
Vah donon London ke ek
Side area mein jakar
Takra jaate Hain
Un ki speed itni thi
Ji jab tak vah dono khud ko rokte
Tab tak donon ki takkar Ho gai thi
Jis karan vaha bahut bada blast hua
Agar iss scene ko
Slow motion mein dekha jaaye
To pata chalta Hai ki
Takrane ke Kuchh Pal baad Hi
Viraj ek energy ball bankar
Raj me sama jata hai

Aap log soch rahe honge
Ki aisa kyon hua
To iss baat Ka jawab janne ke liye
Jamen jana Hoga
10 sal pahle
Jab Raj 10 sal Ka tha

10 saal pahle
Jis waqt raj ke andar
Formula puri tarah se
Balance nahin hua tha
Aur ek din Dada ji ne
Use puri sachai bata di
Jiske baad Raj behosh ho gaya
Jab raj behosh tha
Us waqt Raj ke andar
Bahut se change aa rahe the
Tabhi Raj andar ke
Formule ke Kuchh particle
Raj ke Kuch energy ko
Sath lekar ek energy ball banaya
Jo Raj ke sharir se nikalkar
Direct Himalaya per chala gaya
Aur janm hua Viraj ka
Raj ka negative view

Present
Raj ab apne andar
Bahut badlav aur power
Mahsus kar raha tha.
Use Viraj aur apne bare mein
Sab pata chal gaya.
Jiske baad usne
Viraj ka ek clone banaya
Aur use ghar bhej diya
Thodi der baad khud ghar chala gaya

In A&A home
Abhi Viraj ko gaye Kuchh hi der hua tha
ki vahan Raj aa jata hai

Raj-mere mom-dad kahan hai

Pradeep-main hi to tumhara dad hun

Riya-yah kaisi baat kar rahe ho beta
Ham hi tumhare mom-dad hai.

Raj Apne donon hath ko aage karta hai
Aur thoda sa utha deta hai
Jis Karan Pradeep and Riya
Hawa mein uth jante hai

Raj-main fir poochh raha hun
Mere mom-dad kahan hai

Pradeep-Ham hawa mein kaise hain
Aur tumhen kitni baar bolu
Ham hi tumhare mom-dad hai

Raj Ko Jab pata chalta Hai
Ki vah kuchh nahi bolega
To Raj uske mind ko padhne lagta hai.

Jab Raj ko pata chal jata hai
Ki mom-dad kahan hai
Tab vah un donon Ko
Hawa mein hi latkaye
Tahkhane ki taraf badh jata hai
Jo ghar mein Hi tha
Vahi Raj ke is behaviour se
Neha aur A&A shocked ho gaye
Unhen kuchh samajh me nahi aa raha tha
Fir bhi vah Raj Ke piche piche
Tahkhane ki taraf chale jate hai

Aaj ke liye itna hi
Next final update me padhenge
Family ka Milan
And Neha ko uske sawal ke jawab milana
 
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Story ke first part ka last update Yani ki update 18 aaj aayega sath hi story ke second part Ka first update Yani ki update 19 bhi today evening Tak aa jayega

Update Ka size update 20 seyavpahle Jaise hi Jayega because update 19 Mai likh chuka hu
Aur update 18 me jayada Kuch bacha Nahi hai

Otherwise
Sath bane rahiye
 
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UPDATE-18
Ab tak aapane padha---
Raj Viraj Aaj ek ho chuke hain
Aur sabhi ke sath tahkhane ki taraf jaate Hain

Ab aage---

Jaise hi Raj ne Pradeep aur Riya par
Apne power ka upyog kiya
Un donon ke aankhon ke samne
Alag alag tarah Ke drishy
Dikhai de rahe the
Jo un donon ne apni jindagi me
Kabhi nahin dekha tha
Ek to iss tarah hawa me upar uthana
Aur upar se ya drishya
Vah donon pagal hone lage tha

In Tahkhana
Dad-kya baat hai aaj tum bahut khush lag rahi ho

Mom- voooo aaj mujhe aisa lag raha hai
Ki mera beta mujhse milane aa raha hai
Aapko kaisa mahsus Ho Raha Hai

Dad-mujhe bhi bilkul tumhare jaisa mahsus ho raha hai
Kash yah sab sach ho paye
Hamen to ab asha bhi nahi hai ki
Ham yahan se nikal payenge

Tabhi darwaje ka get khulata hai
Aur bahut sare log andar aate hai

Jab yah sab andar aate hai
To Pratik aur Riya ko hawa me
Dekhkar mom-dad shocked ho jaate hai
Vah Kabhi un donon ko
To kabhi samne dekh rahe the

Mom jaise hi hum sab Ko dekhti hai
Vah hamari taraf daur kar aane lagti hai
Shayad Maa ke dil Ko pata chal gaya tha
Ki yah sab unke bacche hai
Achanak mom niche girne lagti Hai

Vahi Jab Raj andar aata Hai
Ti dekhta hai ki mom daur kar
Uske taraf aa rahi hai
Aur achanak girne lagti hai
Tabhi Raj apne aankh se
Kuchh ishara karta hai
Aur mom hawa mein hi ruk jaati hai
Jab Raj dhyan se dekhta hai
To use pata chalta hai
Ki mom-dad janjiro se bandhe hue hai
Raj turant apne aankh se
Kuchh ishara karta hai
Aur janjeere khul jaati hai
Raj Ko apne mom-dad Ka
Haal dekh kar bahut gussa aata hai
Aur vah Pradeep aur riya ko
Hawa se niche gira deta hai
Jis se ve donon wapas hosh me aate hain
Aur un donon ki Kuchh memory
Jo vah bhul chuke the
Wapas aa jaati Hai

P&R-Ham donon yaha per kaise hain
Ham to uska picha kar rahe the


In donon ki baten kisi Ko samajh nahin aati hai
Lekin raj ko bahut gussa a raha tha
Aur vah ek aag Ka ball
Un donon ki taraf chhodata hai
Vahin jab is baat ka pata
P&R ko chalta hai
Vah uss ball Ko wapas mor dete hai
Jisse raj thoda socked ho jata hai
Raj un donon per apne
Alag alag tarah Ke power ka
Prayog karta hai
Jise vah donon milkar
Aasani se khatm kar dete hai
Achanak Raj ke dimag mein Kuchh aata hai
Aur vah apne sabhi power ka
Ek enegy ball banakar
Un donon ke taraf chhodta hai
Jisse P&R bahut ghayal hote hain
ah donon aapas me kuch ishara karte hai

Aur vahan se achanak gayab ho jaate Hai

Raj Apne sabhi power ka prayog karta hai
Lekin vah un donon ko dhundh nahi pata

(Raj Ko yah pata nahin tha
Ki uske isi galti Ke karan
Kuchh salon baad bahut bada toofan
Aane wala Hai)

Mom-dad ke milane Ke Karan
Raj iss ghatna ko bhul jata hai
Aur fir family emotion shuru hota hai
Neha ko yah pata tha ki
Mom ke hisab se vah usi Ki beti hai
Neha dad ko side me le jaati hai
Aur unse apne parents ke bare me puchti hai
Jab dad Ko pata chalta Hai Ki
Neha vahi hai jise unhone apni beti banaya tha
To vah kahate Hain

Dad-mujhe nahin pata
Tum kiski beti ho
Jab meri beti janm ke samay hi
Mar gai thi to mai
Andar se bahut tut gaya tha
Uss samay koi mere pass aaya
Aur tumhen mujhe dekar Kaha ki
Sahi samay aane per vah
Dobara aaega aur fir
Vah vahan Se chala gaya
Vah bahut jaldi me lag raha tha

Vahi Raj ne bhi yah baat sun liya
Usne apne pita se kaha ki
Vah Neha Se pyar karta Hai
Dad Ko bhi koi aapatti nahin hui
Kuchh samay baad mom ko
Sach bata diya gaya aur
Raj aur Neha ki shaadi ho gai.

2-3 Salon baad Ansh aur Anshu ki bhi shaadi ho gai
Ek sanskari ladka aur ladki dekhkar
Ansh aur Anshu Ke bich bahut lagao tha
Isliye Anshu Ne Ansh ke sath rahane Ka faisla Kiya
Aur ant me aansu bhi
Apne papa ke ghar me hi
Rant lekar rahane lagi
Kyunki uska pati bahut sanskari vicharon wala tha
Isliye vah Ghar jamai nahin banna Chahta tha
Jis karan usne rent dene Ka faisla Kiya
Sabhi log khushi-khushi rahane lage......

END OF FIRST PARTi nahin banna Chahta tha
Jis karan usne rent dene Ka faisla Kiya

Sabhi log khushi-khushi rahane lage......

END OF FIRST PART
 
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