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Aapka Hardik Swagat Hai Bhai.bhai i am one of the biggest fan of your story
i love this story
Aapka Hardik Swagat Hai Bhai.bhai i am one of the biggest fan of your story
i love this story
Thanks bro
Aapka Hardik Swagat, Vandan Aur Abhinandan Hai Anuj Bhai.THIS IS THE END OF PART I
But It's Not The End of This Story...It's Just A Beginning of Maha Chudakkad Saand.
Running hai bhai...Waiting for saand part 2 anand bhai
Best dialogue of this part for me is:SAAND
UPDATE 7
Kallu aur Raj apas me baat kar hi rahe the ki dukan par lala ki chhoti bahu sarla aa gayi....gori chitti na jyada moti na patli bole to perfect figure...umra lagbhag 24 saal..abhi koi bachcha nahi hua tha
Sarla ko dekhte hi raj ke lund me ufan maarne laga aur uske lund se laar tapakne lagi...kallu ki bato ko ansuna kar vo vaha se uth kar dukan ki taraf badh gaya
Kallu (dhire se)—sala saand.....abhi meri bahan ki bur ko bhosda bana kar aaya hai aur phir se choot dekhte hi laar tapkane laga... saand kahi ka.....hamesha chodne ke liye sale ka lund taiyar hi khada rahta hai
Raj—kaisi ho bhouji....aaj kal to dikhti hi nahi.....lagta hai bhaiya chhodte hi nahi hain
Sarla—kya karu...ghar me bhi to kaam rahta hai na
Raj—par ye to galat baat hai bhouji.....jail me band rahti ho...kabhi hum devar logo ka bhi to khyal kar liya karo
Sarla—to tum bhi shadi kar lo aur le aao khyal rakhne wali
Raj—aaj kal bahut mousam chal raha hai bhouji.....kabhi hame bhi to sewa ka mouka do
Gaon ki lagbhag sabhi ladies raj ki fitrat aur uske lund ke bare me janti thi....ki raj ek number ka maha chudakkad...ladka hai lekin uske lund ka size sabke ke liye akarshan ka kendra bana rahta tha
Jab bhi gaon me ladkiya ya aurte apas me chodne chadne ki charcha karti to unki bato me raj ka jikra hota hi hota tha…sarla ne bhi raj aur uske lund ke bare me apne jethani aur agal bagal ki aurato ke muh se sun rakhi thi ….uske mann me bhi raj ka lund dekhne ki prabal jigyasa thi vaise bhi uske pati ka 4’ ka hi tha jisse uski chudasi bur chudasi hi rah jati thi
Sarla—mai tumse umar me bahut badi hu dewar ji
Raj—umar se kya hota hai bhabhi.....maine to apne se char guna badi aurat ko bhi jawan kar diya hai
Sarla—chal jhutha...itna bhi mat pheka kar ki koi lapet na sake
Raj—ek bar nadi ke darshan hi kara do bhouji badle me azgar dekh lo
Sarla—kechuwa kaho….azgar mat kaho
Raj—andar aa jau bhouji
Sarla—na..baba…na…tu na bahar se hi baat kar….agar meri saas sasur ya gaon ka koi bhi tujhe andar dekh liya to mai to muft me hi badnam ho jaungi
Raj—ek baar apni nadi (river) hi dikha do ya aam ka swad chakha do
Sarla—mere paas nadi kaha hai….?
Raj—kyo use bechari ko chhupaye phirti ho....ek baar de do bhabhi kasam se jannat ka maza dunga apko
Sarla—jab mere paas nadi hai hi nahi to kaha se dikha du tumko dewar ji
Raj—chalo andar aakar bata hi deta hu
Sarla—nahi…tu vahi se bata de
Sarla ki baat sune bina hi raj kud kar dukan ke bhitar ghus gaya aur shutter gira diya jaldi se....ye dekh kar sarla ghabra gayi...use achche se malum tha ki raj kitna bada besharam hai..jo kisi se bhi kuch kahne me na to sharmata hai aur na hi kisi ka darr hai usko
Sarla—shutter kyo band kar diya....kholo jaldi se
Raj—bas thodi der me khol dunga bhouji....pahle aapki dekh to lu
Sarla—kya dekhna hai.... ? bahar se hi dekh lena
Raj—bhabhi ek baar apni ye bur dikha do (sari ke upar se sarla ki bur me hath rakhte huye)
Sarla—chal nikal bahar....nahi to mai chilla dungi
Raj—chilla do....sab yahi kahenge ki lala ki bahu dukan band kar ke mujhse chudwa rahi thi...hihihi
Sarla—dekh meri badnami ho jayegi…bahar se baat kar jo karna hai
Raj—jaldi se bur dikha do apni nahi to mai abhi chillana chalu kar dunga
Sarla—kisi ko malum chala to meri bahut badnami ho jayegi
Raj—tum to janti ho bhabhi ki mai bahut sharif admi hu
Sarla—poora gaon janta hai ki tum kitne sharif ho
Raj—theek hai….mai phone kar ke kisi ko bol deta hu darwaja kholne ko
Sarla (ghabra kar)—nahi…nahi...kisi ko mat bulao…tum khud hi khol do
Raj—nahi bhabhi…mai kisi ke sath jabardasti nahi karta….agar tum nahi dena chahti to koi baat nahi hai
Raj apna mobile nikal kar jhuth muth me hi number dial karne laga ye dekh kar sarla turant uska hath pakad li ghabra kar….gaon me log badnami se bahut darte hain
Sarla—nahi…aisa mat karo.....tu kisi ko batayega to nahi na
Raj—mai aisa ladka bilkul nahi hu...bhabhi...kisi ki badnami nahi karta mai kabhi
Sarla—vada kar ki tu sirf dekhega bas aur vo bhi door se
Raj—nahi...mai aisa vada nahi karta
Sarla—dikha to rahi hu na tujhe
Raj—mai achche se dekhunga
Sarla—matlab....... ?
Raj—matlab ki jee bhar ke apki bur ko apne hatho se chhukar phaila kar aur ungli daal kar dekhunga
Sarla—theek hai...lekin sirf 2 minute bas
Raj—nahi 5 minutes
Sarla—theek hai....jaldi se dekh le
Sarla ke haa karte hi raj ne turant use niche lita diya aur sari ko ek jhatke me kamar se upar kar diya.....sari upar hote hi sarla ki moti moti kele jaisi chikni mansal janghe nangi ho gayi
Halanki tubelight ki dudhiya roshni me uski janghe saf saf dikh rahi thi phir bhi raj ne paas me rakhi badi torch ko jala kar uski nangijangi ko dekhte huye us par apni jeebh phirane laga
Sarla ke jism me tez current jaisa laga...aisa uske sath hone ka ye pahla anubhav tha….jaise jaise raj uski jangho ko chumta gaya sarla garam hoti gayi...vo khud ko bahut rokne ki koshish kar rahi thi phir bhi uski bur chudasi huye bina na rah saki....akhir raj is khel ka maharathi tha
Sarla (sisakte huye)—jaldi se dekh le...aaaahhh...raj koi aa jayega...dekh le jaldi...nahi...chaddi mat utar....na...raj...mat utar...ek kinare khiska ke dekh le..aaahhhh
Raj—kya dekh lu...bol ke batao pahle.... ?
Sarla—vahi jise dekhne ke liye tu mara ja raha hai
Raj—bol ke batao
Sarla—mujhe nahi malum...jaldi kar na
Raj—theek hai nahi bologi to phir nangi karke dekhunga
Sarla—nahi…nangi nahi….dekh le….meri bur dekh le….ab to bol diya na….jaldi se chaddi kinare khiska ke meri bur dekh le
Raj—bhai roj chodta hai na…?
Sarla—nahi...10-15 din me ek do baar
Raj—khoob maza aata hoga na bur chudwane me
Sarla (garam hokar)—nahi….
Raj—kyo…?
Sarla (madhosh)—uska bahut chhota aur patla hai...dalte hi jhad jata hai
Sarla ab poori garam hokar madhosh ho chuki thi.....raj ki gandi gandi baate bhi ab usko amrit lag rahi thi...chudasi hokar vo khul kar raj ki baato ka jawab dene lagi thi...is beech raj ne mouka dekh kar sarla ki panty khich kar uske pairo se nikal di aur apni jeb me rakh li
Sarla itni chudasi ho chuki thi ki usko apni chaddi utar jane ka pata tak nahi chala....chaddi utar kar raj ne jaise hi uski gori gori jangho ko phailaya to dono jangho ke beech chhoti chhoti kali ghunghrali jhanto se bharpoor sarla ki bur khul kar raj ke samne aa gayi
Raj ne jaise hi uski bur me hath phera to sarla chihuk uthi maare anand ke...hath pherte huye raj ne ek ungli dhire se sarla ki bur ke chhed me andar sarka di....uski bur laar tapkane se poori geeli ho gayi thi
Sarla—aaaahhhh...mat karo..raj...aahhhh...mai mar jaungi....uuuiimaaaa....aahhhhh
Raj—bhabhi chuchi daba lu apki thoda sa
Sarla—aaaahhhh....daba le.....koi aa jayega...raj....jaldi se masal le meri chuchi bhi
Raj jaan bujhkar sarla ko full chudasi kar diya tha jisse ki phir dubara use chodne ka mouka milne par koi dikkat na rahe....usne turant uski chuchiyo ko dono hatho me bharkar jor jor se masalne laga aur sath me apna muh sarla ki ras nahati bur ke muhane par bhida diya
Raj ki is harkat se sarla tadap uthi....uske admi ne uske sath kabhi aisa nahi kiya tha....sarla asim sukh ki anubhuti karne lagi...aisa maza use pahle kabhi nahi mila tha jaisa aaj raj ke hatho mil raha tha usko
Best dialogue in this update:SAAND
UPDATE—12
Champa—Jaise sab ki bur hoti hai vaisi hi meri mummy ki bhi bur hai....sab ki to ek jaisi hi hoti hai.....kahi tu mery mummy ki bhi to lene ke chakkar me to nahi hai.... ? aaahhhhh....ab bas kar dukhne lagi hai....aaaaa...mummyyy.....kis saand niche let gayee.... aaj hi poori nipor dega mujhe lagta hai.....aaaaaaaa.......ab chhod de raj..
Raj—bas ho gaya.....bas do minute.....tune bataya nahi ki apni mummy ki bur dikhayegi ki nahi aur kaisi hai... ?
Champa—aaahhhhh......unki mere se jyada...phooli huyi hai......mummy ki bur ki dono phanke bhi phati huyi hain....kayi bar vo mere sath subah subah lota leke fresh hone khet me jati hain tab bahut bar mainee unki bur dekhi hai
Raj—mujhe kab apni mummy ki bur ke darshan karayegi..... ?
Champa—kal subah main unke sath khet me jaungi to tujhe miss call kar dungi...aake dekh lena vahi unki bur....
Raj—aaaaaa….mai aaya…le sambhal apni bur me….aaaaaaaaaaaa
Champa—aaaahhhhh.....ha bhar de meri bur.......aur bhar......poori tanki full kar de...aaj hi.......poora saand hai tu.....kitna pani chhodta hai.....ye to band hi nahi ho raha........poori balti bhar jayegi tere lund ke pani se...aaahhhhhhh...mai bhi gayi phir se... aaaaaaaaa....mummmyyyyy....aajjjj teri bitiya chud gayiiiii......ek saand ne apne khoob lumbe mote lund se teri bitiya ki bur ko chod daallla re mummyy
Main champa ke upar hi dher ho gaya......thodi der baad uske upar se uthte hi kajri ne turant mera lund apne muh me bhar liya aur chusne lagi
Raj—arey chhinariya...ruk pahle mujhe moot to lene de....phir pi lena lund mera jitna pina hai
Kajri—to yahi mere muh ke andar hi moot de……mujhe tera moot pina hai……moot na mere muh me…sach me mujhe tera moot pina hai
Raj—theek hai to le pi le
Kajri mere lund ko ghapaghap chusne lagi.....champa ki bur aur mera jo pani uspar laga hua tha sab chat kar saf kar diya.... uske aise chuste rahne ne main apni peshab ko nahi rok paya aur kajri ke muh ke andar hi lund ko aur gahrayee me pel kar mootne laga....usne mere lund se nikalti moot ki dhar ko poora pi gayi
Uske aise chuste rahne se lund raj phir se josh me aa gaye.....aur bur chodan ki maang karne laga.....maine kajri ko niche patak ke uski janghe phailayi aur ghachak se uski bur me lund maharaj ko pel diya
Ek baar me hi jhatke se ghusedne se vo akad gayi....ankho se pani chhalak aaya.....lekin usne mujhe roka nahi....maine bhi dono chuchiyo ko jor jor se masalte huye use danadan chodne laga
Kajri—aise hi raj...aaaaaaahhhh.....chodta rah mujhe.......aaahhhhhh...aur dheeli kar de meri bur......khub chod..aaaaa
Raj—kajri...champa ki shadi kallu se karwa de......phir dono ko roj aise hi chodunga rat bhar
Kajri—aaaaaahhhhhhh.....aur jor se...aaaaaaa.....agar tu raat bhar chodega champa ko...to kallu kya karega..... ?
Raj—vo bahar baith kar mutth marega...gandu…aur yaha main uski bahan aur biwi dono ko uski maa ke samne nangi kar ke chodunga....soch kitna maza
Kajri—aaaaaaaaaaa……..mere bhai ko aisa mat bol…..aaaahhhh…tu use bhi bigad dega
Raj—tu meri rakhail hai....meri taraf bol randi.....le lund kha bhosdi
Kajri—aaaahhhhh.....maaaaa......bhosdi ko to tune chod chod ke poora bum bhosda bana diya hai...mera hone wala hai...aaahhhhhh
Raj—main bhi aane hi wala hu.......
Maine lambe lambe dhakke marne chalu kar diye....kuch hi der me hum dono ek sath jhad gaye....main kajri ke upar hi let gaya uski chuchi chuste huye....us raat maine dono ko do do baar choda...phir so gaya
Agle din kallu chutiya jaldi hi khet se lout aaya...to mujhe kajri ne jaldi utha diya...main kapde pahan kar kuch der kallu se baate ki phir ghar ke liye nikal gaya.....raste me ravi mil gaya
Ravi—kaha se aa raha hai ye saand itni subah subah.... ?
Raj—arey kahi na...yaar vo kallu ke ghar soya tha aaj...vahi se aa raha hu
Ravi—uski bahan ka to tune poora tabla bana diya hai pel pel ke
Raj—tu kyo udas hota hai....ek din tu bhi mujhe apne ghar me sula le....teri bahan ka bhi tabla baja dunga
Ravi—dekh....subah subah mood kharab mat kar
Raj—tu kaha se aa raha hai chutiye
Ravi—arey yaar kal meri gf ka birthday hai......samajh me nahi aa raha hai ki use kya gift du.... ?
Raj—apna lund de de
Ravi—bsdk....kabhi to kuch bada socha kar
Raj—bada sochu......huuu......phir ek kaam kar use mera lund de de
Ravi—sale...tujhse to baat hi karna bekar hai....tujhe lund aur bur ke alawa kuch aata bhi hai….?
Raj—aur ki jarurat hi kya hai bhai….sabhi bur se hi is duniya me aate hain aur phir bur me jane ke liye hi tadapte hain…bur se hi aate hain aur bur me hi jate hain
Ravi—kisi ne teri bate sun li to tere sath mujhe bhi jute padenge....chal main chalta hu
Raj—abe...apni gf ko mere lund ke bare me jarur bata dena
Ravi—tujhe to uske paas bhi nahi aane dunga.....kaha patak ke pel dega koyi bharosa nahi tera....chal bye
Ravi ke jate hi main bhi aage badh gaya....tabhi mujhe seema chachi aur kinjal didi khet ki taraf lota liye jati dikhi....to main bhi dabe paon unke piche piche chal diya chup chap
Thodi dur jane ke baad vo dono ek arhar ke khet me ghus gayi to main bhi jaldi se bina awaz kiye usi arhar ke khet me ghus gaya...arhar kafi badi badi thi....arhar me ye khubi hoti hai ki agar uske andar koyi baitha ho to bahar se aane wala unhe jaldi nahi dekh pata...
Lekin bahar se aane wale ko andar baitha admi dekh sakta hai, chehra nahi to pair to dikh hi jate hain....yahi soch kar main chup chap pahle baith gaya aur poora jhuk kar khet ke andar jhankne laga
Thodi hi doori par mujhe do logo ke baithe hone ka andaza ho gaya....to main dhire dhire baithe huye hi aage badhne laga....aise me awaz bhi nahi hoti
Ab main unke kafi karib pahuch chuka tha....unka chehra to mujhe ab bhi nazar nahi aa raha tha lekin mujhe chehre se kya lena dena tha....main to unki bur dekhne aaya tha
Main poora niche jhuk kar unki taraf dekhne laga......vaha se mujhe teen bur dikhayi di....main to soch me pad gaya...do bur ke sath ek bur free
Raj (mann me)—ye teesri bur kiski hai……? Maine to do logo ko hi andar aate dekha tha….ek bur jiski dono phanke chipki hain vo kinjal didi ki bur hogi…..dusri bur seema chachi ki hogi….ab ye third bur wali koun hai….?
Bro... aapkee kahaanee padhana shuroo kiya...SAAND
UPDATE * 1
"arey vo meenu......dekh us Raj ko bhi utha de ....suraj sar par aa gaya hai.....aur ye abhi tak bistar se nahi utha" ...
ye awaz hai raj ki maa Malti ki jo apni badi beti meena ko apne hero Raj ko uthane ke liye bol rahi hai...
44 ki umar hone ke bavjud bhi dekhne se uski umar ka andaza nahi lagta....36" ki badi badi chuchiya aur 38" ki vishal gaand....jo bhi ek baar dekh le bina muth mare na rah paye....upar se gora rang.....
Dusro ki hum kyo baat kare....uska beta Raj khud hi apni maa ki badi gaand ke naam par apne lund ka pani girata rahta hai....aur mann me use nangi kar ke chodne ke sapne dekhta hai....vo to itna hi nahi apne ghar ki chacheri bahno aur sagi bahno ko bhi chodne ki firak me laga rahta hai....bas mouka nahi milta use...
Malti ki char aulad hain....jinme 3 betiya aur ek ladka hai..... aaiye ek nazar malti ke pariwar par daal lete hain....
Indu--age..65..dadi
Malti--age..44..maa
Meena--age..25..badi bahan
Sheetal--age..23.. majhli bahan
Radha--age..18..chhoti bahan
Raj--age..20..hero
Ramesh--age..45..bade chacha
Roopa--age..43..badi chachi
Kinjal--age..24..badi beti
Ritu--age..22..chhoti beti
Pratap--age..43..chhote chacha
Seema--age..41..chhoti chachi
Vidhya--age..22..badi beti
Sandhya--age..21..majhli beti
Sonam--age..18..chhoti beti
Ye to tha apne hero ke pariwar ka lekha jokha......Raj ke papa aaj se 5 saal pahle achanak hi kahi gayab ho gaye the, tab se unka ab tak kuch pata nahi chala tha ki vo jinda bhi hain ya nahi..? ....inke amdani ka ek matra sadhan kheti badi hi hai.....vo bhi jyada to nahi hai...bas gujara chal raha hai jiske chalte abhi tak sabhi ladkiya kuwari baithi hai....
Abhi batwara na hone ke karan sabhi ek hi chhat ke neeche rahte hain.....Raj pariwar ka eklouta ladka hone ke karan sabka ladla tha......jisse vo laad pyar me bigad gaya....
upar se uske dost bhi chodu mile...jinhone use choot ki aisi lat lagayi ki phir Raj ne piche mud kar nahi dekha sabse pahle apne pyare dosto ki hi maa bahno par hath saf karne laga.....
To chalte hain kahani ki or jaha malti meenu ko raj ko uthane ke liye kahti hai.....
Meenu--maa tum kuch kahti kyo nahi us saand ko.....kal meri saheli vimla ko hi raste me pakad liya tha...vo to achchha hua ki mai time par vaha pahuch gayi nahi to uska bhi muh kaala kar deta...ye saand
Malti--kya karu beti....eklouta jo hai....sudhar jayega...abhi bachcha hai
Meenu--bachcha nahi ..poora saand hai.....koi kisi din uska bachcha lekar darwaje par aa jayegi tab mujhe mat bolna ki bataya nahi tha...teri ladle ki kartute
Malti--abhi jake utha usko....phir khet bhi jana hai mujhe
Meenu--jati hu....
meenu jaise hi Raj ko uthane gayi.....jab do teen bar awaz lagane se vo nahi utha to usne uski chadar pakad ke khich di...yahi usse bahut badi galti ho gayi...
Kyon ki chadar ke andar raj apni chaddi utar ke soya tha...aur uska 11" lamba aur 5" mota lund ek dam tan tanakar khada tha
Meenu ki to halak me saans hi atak gayi...vo apne muh ke andar thook nigle ja rahi thi...vo yaha kya karne aayi thi sab bhul kar bas raj ke bhayankar gore lund ko ankhe phad kar dekhe ja rahi thi....
Meenu 25 saal ki unchudi gadrayi loundiya thi.....itne mast lund ko dekh kar uski choot ne rona shuru kar diya.....
meenu (mann me)--baap re...kitna bada lund hai raj ka....ab samjhi sab ladkiya kyo iske aage piche ghumti hain...unki to phad ke rakh deta hoga ye...unki kya agar meri choot me bhi ghus gaya galti se to poori bitte bhar ki phaila dega ek hi baar me chod chod kar...poora bhosda ban jayegi meri choot....ek bar chhu ke dekhti hu...jab tak ye saand so raha hai...
meenu darte darte kaampte hatho se raj ke lund ko pakad leti hai.....jab use raj ke need me hone ka pura andaja ho gaya to phir lund ki chamdi ko upar niche karne lagi...
meenu poori tarah se garam hokar chudasi ho chuki thi....uski jindagi ka ye pahla lund tha jise usne dekha tha aaj....vo bhi apne sage chhote bhai ka....
meenu apna rishta nata sab bhul kar choot ki garmi ke vashi bhoot ho chuki thi....lund ki chamdi upar niche karte huye jab uske hath dard karne lage to usne darte huye lund ka topa apne muh me le liya aur chusne lagi....
meenu ko lund chusna itna achchha laga ki vo usme hi kho gayi...aur ankhe band kar ke chusti gayi....uska dhyan tab jake bhang hua jab kisi ne uski dono chuchiyo ko kas ke masal diya...
Shukriya bhai..aapko kahani me kuch to pasand aaya..Best dialogue of this part for me is:
Raj—umar se kya hota hai bhabhi.....maine to apne se char guna badi aurat ko bhi jawan kar diya hai