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Sab se pahale Maitri ji... ham sabhee aapake aabhaaree hain ki aapane ek achchhee rachana prastut kee hai... yah mujhe parichit see lagee, jaise mainne ise kaheen padha ho... lekin choonki aapane pahale hee ullekh kiya hai ki aap ise keval post kar rahee hain aur koee aur isaka mool lekhak hai... to bina samay barbaad kie... chalie pahale bhaag kee sameeksha post kar dete hain...

kahaanee kee shuruaat “Shrrshti” shabd par adbhut daarshanik charcha se hotee hai…

Lekhak ne pahalee kuchh panktiyon se hee kalam par pakad dikhaee hai; ek gambheer shabd par sookshm tareeke se charcha karte hue…

Ohhh... Naayika ka naam bhee Shrrshti he... shaayad yeh kahaanee kee mukhy paatr he... khair kahaanee aage badhane ke saath hee hamaara anumaan bhee pusht ho jaega...

Aik Maa aur Beti ke beech aur phir do mahila mitron ke beech rochak baatacheet ka halka svar kahaanee ke maahaul ya prshthabhoomi ko shaayad... " teenage romance or teenage comedy " ke roop mein sthaapit karata hai...

hehehehehe... vaakee adbhut... lekhak ne khareedaaree ke prati yuva ladakiyon kee prakrti ko saavadhaaneepoorvak varnit kiya hai aur ant mein ham pahale bhaag ke kuchh naatakeey ant ko dekhate hain jo ke paathakon ko sochane aur utsaah ke mode par set kar deta he... ke… aage kya hone vaala hai??

doston... kya ham utsaahit nahin hain... haan ham utsaahit hain... dekhate hain ki agale bhaag mein kya hota hai...

Shukriya
Dhanyawaad
Sab se pehle ye kahani aise hi post nahi hui matlab copy paste nahi hai
Isme mere vichar aur us hisab se story me badlav hai. Prasang mere anurup hai ya banaye gaye hai kuchh prasang add kiye hai to kuchh prasang yaa ghatna ko edit kiya hai ya fir naya rup diya hai
Kher ye kahaani khatam ho chuki hai
Meri agli kahaani me bhi aisa hi hai
No copy and paste
Ji aap ki bat sahi hai ye kahani aap ne pdhi hogi lekin antar kafi hai khas kar sanvaad add kiye hai ya edited hai
Asha hai meri baki aanewali kahaniya bhi aap ko manoranjan degi

 

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