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Amar jab apne purane ghar pohocha to....use pata chala ke uska ghar to bik gaya hai.....

aur uska pura pariwar ab Arin ke mama ke ghar reh rahe hai......

wo bhi waha pohochne ke liye nikal gaya...use dar bhi tha ke kahi Arin use fir se utha na le......


Arin abhi apne office mein baitha hua tha..........ke tabhi usse kuch dikha...jise dekhte hi wo muskura diya.......

aur gayab hoke pohoch gya ek band pari factory ke samne....

usne chutki bajayi.....aur wo Reaper ke outfit mein aa gaya....

Arin chalte huye factory ke taraf jane laga.....factory ke main gate ke pas 4 bande khade the hatho mein guns leke......

Arin ko dekhte hi unhone uske taraf gun tan diya.......

abhi sham ka waqt ho raha tha to thodi thodi andhera thi....jisse un bando ko bas itna dikh raha tha ke koi unke taraf aa raha hai....

unme se ek banda chilla ke bola........aaa kaun hai tu.....yahan kahan chala aa raha h.........

usne itna hi bola tha ke samne aate huye shaks ko dekhke uski jaan halak mein hi atak gayi.......

wo bas itna hi bola......Reeeeaaapperrr.....aur dar se behosh ho gaya......

baki ke bando ko bhi jab uski baatein sunayi diya....wo log thar thar karke kampne lage......

kyunki unhe pata tha ke.....Reaper jab bhi ata hai.....maut ka nanga nach hota hai......

wo log dar ke mare abhi kuch karte isse pehle hi unka sar dhar se alag ho gaya........

Arin jaise ek robot ki tarah chal raha tha.......koi emotion nhi.....

wo chalte huye jab andar phocha to......charo taraf se uske upar goliya chalne lagi........

waise to goliyo se uska ghanta kuch ukhadne wala tha......lekin wo jaise hi goli chalne lagi ......usne aisa dikhaya ke use goli lagi hai.....aur wo niche gir gaya.......aur aisa dikhane laga ke wo mar gaya hai............

jab sabne dekha ke samne wala shaks niche gira pada hai....to unhone apna fire rok diya......fire rukte hi ek banda samne aya......

aur jor jorse hasne laga.......hahahahahahaaha.....
Reaper reaper reaper......tera khel khatam ......socha nhi tha tu bas kuch goli ka hi niklega.....hahahahaha......tune peter ke bhai Stephen ko mara tha......itni asani se to tujhe nhi chhorta main.......hahahahaa....aaj se tera kahani khatam......

yeh bolke Peter Arin ke pas gaya aur bola......dekhe to sahi is mask ke piche kaun chupa tha.......usne jaise hi Arin ke face pe se mask hataya......andar ke shaks ka chehra dekhke to uski hairani ki koi sima hi nhi rahi.......kyunki Arin ka chehra abhi wo 4 sal pehle wala chehra tha......jise Peter ne mara tha......Samar aur Kashish ke kehne pe.....

wo kabhi mask ko to kabhi samne pade shaks ko......Peter ne jaise hi mask ko dekhne ke liye apni najar hatayi...mmaur wapas samne dekha to uski aisi fati.....aisi fati ke silne ko kuch bacha hi nhi......


kyunki samne uska nightmare Reaper khada tha......wo bhi jinda......

Peter thartharate awaj mein bola.......tu ....tu...tum jinda kaise ho......kaise bach gaye.......

Arin jor jor se hasne laga.........

Arin ki hasi sunke to Peter ne sans lena hi bhul gaya.......aur waha pe khadi sare gundon ka bhi hal waisa hi tha......

Arin ne chutki bajayi.....to sare gundon ki body fat gayi......sabke khun aur mas ke tukron ke chite as pas ke chizo pe gidne lagi.......

Peter to yeh dekhte hi 1no..aut 2no.. apne pant mein hi kar chuka tha.......wo bohot hi zyada dar gaya tha.......

Arin jab uske taraf mudne laga......to Peter gid gidate huye bola.......mujhe chhod do.....mujhe chhod do.....main mafi mangta hun......mere sare paise. Le lo....mera sab kuch lelo......main police mein surender kar doonga......

peter ne yeh sab ek hi sans mein bol gaya tha.....bolke jab samne dekha to........Arin ke chehre pe abhi haiwaniyat thi.........

Arin apne piche se talwar ko nikala......aur talwar ke taraf dekhte huye bola.......Black Falmes of Gahanna.....aur uske sword mein black color ka hell fire jalne laga.............


Usne Peter ke taraf dekhke ek devil smile diya......lekin in sab ghtanao ke bich usne ek word bhi nhi bolamaine kaha tha na main lautunga.......ladkiyo ko aur bacho ko marke acha nhi kiya........tujhe to abhi Hell fire mein jalna hai.....sari Eternity ke liye.......tune aaj tak na jane kitne hi nirdosh bekasoor aur masoom ki jaan li hai.......ab uska badla chukane ki bari aayi hai......


yeh kehte hi Arin ne apne Sword se ek war karta hai........aur peter ke pet mein ek jakhm deta hai........jis jagah pe black Flames jalne lagta hai.......Peter tadapne lagta hai....jor jorse chikhne lagta hai......black Flames uski body ki mas ko sada rahe the.......uski body dheere dheere gal rahi thi......aur wo bujha bhi nhi paa raha tha aag ko......

yehi to khasiyat hai Black Hell Fire ki.......jab tak jisne use jalaya hai....wo nhi bujhata .......wo bujhne wala nhi tha.......

Peter ko ab na sehne wala dard hone laga......chikhte chikhte uski vocal cord hi fat gayi......aur uske muh se ab awaj ana band ho gaya......

Arin bas khade hoke yeh sab dekh raha tha........Arin ne chutki bajayi.....aur fire aur bhi tezi se Peter ke body ko galane lagi.......peter Ki sehen sakti ab jawab de chuki thi......wo ab bas maut ka intezar kar raha tha.....lekin mil nhi rahi thi.........

Arin uske pas jake bola......Jab tak tujhe tere sare Paapo ki saja nhi mil jati.....aise hi tadap ta rehega......dheere. Dheere teri puri body sad jayegi......lekin tu zinda rahega......us dard ko sahega.....jab tera pet ka asre part sar jaayenge tab bhi tu zinda rahega.....

chalta hun.......apna khayal rakhna.........bye tata....yeh bolke devilish smile dete huye.....wo wahan se agd badh gaya.....


wo pohoch gaya ek room ke samne ......room kholte hi samne kuch ladkiya.....bandhi padi thi.....usne chutki bajayi......aur wo sab behosh ho gayi ......aur waha se gayab hoke apne apne ghar pohoch gayi......aur sab kuch bhul bhi gayi.....
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Arin bhi gayab hoke waha se nikal gaya.......aur phocha apne office mein......

phir waha se fresh hoke....wo apna gadi liya......aur david se bola ke jab tak main waha pe hun tum log dur hi rehna......bas dur se nazar rakhna......aur haan Amayra ko batana ke mujhe aane mein der hogi........

Arin apna ek expensive gadi nikala......aur drive karte huye ek aur chalne laga.......

jab tak Arin jata hai tab tak Arin ke chhoti chachi ke taraf chalte hai........

chhoti chachi abhi ek room mein akeli thi......aur bohot gusse mein bhi thi.....wo apne hi aap se bol rhi thi........sala wo kamina laut aaya hai......bachpan mein sale ko marne ki bhi kosish ki....manhoos bhi bana diya.....lekin phir bhi bacha gya......bhag gaya tha......ab phirse mere bete batiyo ko zindagi mein shani banke lauta hai.......sala kutta....aur aate hi pura property khake baitha hai.....jis property ke liye itna sab kuch kiya ab wahi sala hath se nikal gaya.....

aise hi wo khud se baatein karti rahi.....aur wahi us kamre ke bahar koi tha ya thi jo chhoti chachi ki baat sunn rahi thi......wo shaks ke ankhon se ansoon nikal rahe the......wo bina kuch bole waha se nikal gaya....

idhar Arin pohocha ek Alishan ghar ke samne.......wo car ko main gate ke samne roka.....to guard ne aake pucha ......ji kisse milna hai.....Arin ne kuch nhi bola aur do 2 hajar ka note use pakda diya.......aur wo guard bhi daant dikhate huye gate ko khol diya.......

Arin car ko park karke......jake ghar ka bell bajaya.....

thodi der wait karne ke baad.....kisine darwaja khola......

darwaja khulte hi andar wale ne pucha.....ji kisse milna hai....

Arin thoda muskura ke bola.......Apne bhai ko bhul gayi......Sheetal didi.......


to be continued.........
 
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ab chaliye jaante hain ke Arin ka bada chacha kahan bhag gaya .........

Arin ka bade chacha abhi ek gaon mein the......wo gaon kuch zyada bada nhi tha......aur us me log bhi kuch ajeeb tarah ke the....waha ke log bahar se aye huye....kisiko bhi waha ane nhi dete.....

sivaye inke Guru ke adesh ke.......

us gaon mein ek Tantrik rehta tha......jo kafi sidh the....unhe bohit si kali jaadu tona ata tha......sare gaon wale unhe bohot mante hai.....unke baat ke khilaf koi bhi nhi jata....

bada chacha. Abhi ek ghar ke room mein baithe huye the.......unke sath unka patni bete aur beti bhi thi......

tabhi bahar se ek banda aya aur bola......Aap logo ko guruji ne bulaya hai........

wo log us bande ke piche chal diye.....thodi dur chalne ke bad wo log pohoche ek ghar ke samne.....jab wo log andar gaye......to unhe kale choga pehne huye.....ek banda dikha.........jiski bohot lambi lambi baal aur dadhi thi......baalon mein jataye aa gayi thi.....uski ankhein surkh lal thi......

wo shaks Arin ke chacha ko dekhke bola.......aao aao ....betho yahan pe......main tum hara hi intezar kar raha tha......

Chacha......baithte huye hi bole.....guruji.....aap ko to sab pata chal chuka hoga......wo ladka jinda hai.....aur wapas bhi aa gaya hai....

Guru.....haan hum jnate hai.....isliye hi to Suresh se kheke tumhe mere paas bulwaya hai......wo ladka ab koi aam ladka nhi hai......uske pas kuch shaktiya hai......use ab bus shaktiyo se hi haraya jaa sakta hai..

yeh sunke chacha thode chouke jaroor par zahir nhi hone diye......wo phir bole.......ab humein kya karna hoga.......??

guru.....ab tumhe kuch nhi karna hoga........jo bhi karna hoga ....wo hum karenge......bas iske badle mein jo chahiye.....wo hum baad mein le lenge.....yeh bolke wo Arin ki Chachi....aur uski beti ke taraf dekhke ek Kamini hasi diya.....


Chacha....thik hai Guruji .....jaisa aap kahe.....waise Suresh hai kaha....usne bas humein yaha aane ko bola.....lekin wo to yaha aya hi nhi.....


Guru....Suresh tumhare dushman ko khatam karne ke liye taiyari kar raha hai........aaj raat ko hi tumhare dushman ko khatam karoonga......
tum abhi jaake aram karo......


phir Chacha aur uski Famiky waha se nikal ke purane wale ghar aa gyae......


aise hi raat ho gayi...


Raat ke thik bich prahar mein wo Tantrik Guru ek hawan kund ke samne baitha hua tha.....aur kuch mantron ka jap bhi kar raha tha.......

tabhi us hawan se dhua nikalne laga.....aur us dhuyein mein se ek jeeb nikla.....jo dikhne mein goblin jaisa tha......aur uske pankh bhi the....

yeh sab paas mein baitha hua Chacha bhi dekh raha tha.....wo pehle dar gaye.......lekin jab unhone us jeeb ko Tantrik ke samne jhukte dekha to uska dar kuch kam hua.....


wo jeeb jhukke bola.....kya hukum hai mere aka.....

Tantrik.....Arin ka photo dikhate huye bola.......jao aur ise leke aayo....koi galti nhi honi chahiye.......

phir wo jeeb waha se gayab hoke nikal gaya.......uske baad kya hua yeh sab aap pichle update mein padh chuke hain


wo jeeb jab khali haath wapas lauta to........Tantrik boukhla gaya......use samajh nhi aa raha tha.....ke aise kaise ho sakta hai......jis. Jeeb ko usne bheja tha.....wo uska gulam tha.....aur wo koi bhi kaam mein chukta nhi tha......yeh aaj pehli baar huua tha.........

aur wo jeeb to dar ke mare thar thar kamp raha tha.....use lag raha tha ke ab to uska ant to najdeek hai......ek taaf to uska Malik wo tantrik jo bohot hi gusse mein tha......Dusra khud Lord Chaos.....

Tantrik......gusse mein.....to tu mere waar se bach gaya.....koi baat nhi agli baar nhi bachega......


Ab chalte hai.....Arin ke mama ke ghar......

Gate kholne wala aur koi nhi Sheetal thi.....Arin ke mama ke ladki.......

usne jaise hi Arin ke muh se bhai shabd suna....to wo jhat se gale lag gayi.....aur rone lagi....

kahan chale gye the bhai......main kitna akeli ho gayi thi.....kya tumhe ek bar bhi meri yaad nhi aayi.....tumhare sath sabhi ne galat kiya....lekin saja mujhe kyun de rahe the.......

Arin bas uska pith sehlate raha.....fir wo bola......ab to aa gaya hun na......chaliye ab yeh rona band kijiye.......

Sheetal chup ho gayi......aur Arin ka hath pakad ke.....use andar le jane lagi....
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Jab mami ne ek ladke ko uski beti ke sath dekha to puch hi liye....

beti kaun hai yeh.......

Arin......mujhe nhi pehchana Mami.......

jab mami ne gaur se dekhi.....aur jab unki najar Arin ke ankhon pe gayi.....to wo jhat se aake Arin ko gale laga liye.......aur rote rote boli......


kahan chala gaya tha beta....tujhe pata hai humne kitna dhunda....lekin tera koi pata nhi chala....

Arin .....chup ho jaiye Mami ......ab to main wapas aa gaya hun na........ab kahin bhi nhi jaaonga.......

inki awaj sunke baki ke log bhi aa chuke the......wo log Arin ko dekhke hairan pare shan the.....ke wo ab kya karne aya hai........

tabhi gate ka calling bell baja......aur Sheetal ne jake phir se darwaja khola.......

jab usne darwaja khola to samne Amar khada tha......

usne Amar ko aandar ane diya.......

Amaf jaise hi andar aya apne samne Arin ko dekhke.....uski to fat ke 36 ho gayi......


to be continued..........
 

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