Romance Tumhaare Liye- Ek Prem Kahaani (Complete)

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Sahi hai bohut se cases mai ye dekhne ko mila jaha emotions ko completely skip kiya gaya starting ke updates ke comparison mai
Anant ne jhagda kiya usko dekh kisine galat matlab nikala...Ye aam aadmi ki soch ho sakti hai....lekinEk police officer hoke nischal ne aise kaise viswas kar liya wo bhi ek hi baar mein, jabki savita baar baar sachhayi se avagat karati rahi...
Ab savita koi 18 19 saal ki newly college going girl to hai nahi ki uske kadam bahak jaaye...as a hero nischal ko samajhni chahiye thi ye baat... Lekin wo wohi role nibhaya jo ek typical ek bhai ek ordinary story character nibhaata hai.... Zara si baat pe shaq karna ye to ek natak ki soch nahi ho sakta..specially romantic aur family based story line pe to katayi nahi...
 
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Kahani sirf hero heroine pe tik kar successful tab hoti hai jab hero heroine mein utni capacity ho ki khud dono akele hi kahani ko aage badhake le jaaye...
Lekin yahan sarita aur nischal ke mamle mein robotic lage dono hi kirdaar... aur fact bhi yahi hai...
Starting mai laga tha ki shayad savi supporting charactersl mai hogi jis hisab se uske sath convos they sarita ke and relation build huwa tha but bich mai hi wo bhi kahi khu ta huwa laga
and Abhishek ki wapsi ke Baad bhi Abhishek utna impact full character nahi dikha jis tarah se starting ke updates us par fi focus they.
I hope Mahi Maurya ji ne agey ka kuch soncha huwa hoga jo next updates mai hume dekhne ko mile
 
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Yah to ek bahut hi khoobsurat ehsas hai bhaai. Ham jisase pyaar karte hain uske aas paas rahne ka dil karta hai, jab aakhe band karo to usi ka chehra najro ke samne dikhta hai. sote jagte bas usi ka khyal dil mein rahta hai. Aur agar wo paas mein nahi rahta to jindagi veeran si ho jati hai. Pyaar ho jane par dimag ko pyaar ke alava aur kuchh sujhta hi nahi hai
Ye aapne bahot acha likha hai....apne dosto ko yahi chhap dungi :hehe2:
 
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Anant ne jhagda kiya usko dekh kisine galat matlab nikala...Ye aam aadmi ki soch ho sakti hai....lekinEk police officer hoke nischal ne aise kaise viswas kar liya wo bhi ek hi baar mein, jabki savita baar baar sachhayi se avagat karati rahi...
Ab savita koi 18 19 saal ki newly college going girl to hai nahi ki uske kadam bahak jaaye...as a hero nischal ko samajhni chahiye thi ye baat... Lekin wo wohi role nibhaya jo ek typical ek bhai ek ordinary story character nibhaata hai.... Zara si baat hai shaq karna ye to ek natak ki soch nahi ho sakta..specially romantic aur family based story line pe to katayi nahi...
Nischal ke khud ke point of view kabhi kabhi samajhneai nahi aye jaha ek aor usne sarita ki help ki thi usey jhote case mai bachakar uske Baad uska kuch impact nazar nahi aya as a police officer
And relationships ko lekar bhi ab tak uske views kuch clear na dikhe jaha ek aor wo apni behen ko bohut pyaar karta hai aur Phir anant ji ke mamle mai waisa kuch na dikha
 
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Starting mai laga tha ki shayad savi supporting charactersl mai hogi jis hisab se uske sath convos they sarita ke and relation build huwa tha but bich mai hi wo bhi kahi khu ta huwa laga
and Abhishek ki wapsi ke Baad bhi Abhishek utna impact full character nahi dikha jis tarah se starting ke updates us par fi focus they.
I hope Mahi Maurya ji ne agey ka kuch soncha huwa hoga jo next updates mai hume dekhne ko mile
Main bas yahi kehna chahungi ki readers ki baat maanke ekdum se wohi dikhane ki koshish na kare jo readers chahte hai balki mahi ji apne hisap se hi likhe, bas baaki ke characters pe bhi dhyan de... Khas taur pe un kirdaaro pe jo shruwaat se hi lead characters the...
 
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Main bas yahi kehna chahungi ki readers ki baat maanke ekdum se wohi dikhane ki koshish na kare jo readers chahte hai balki mahi ji apne hisap se hi likhe, bas baaki ke characters pe bhi dhyan de... Khas taur pe un kirdaaro pe jo shruwaat se hi lead characters the...
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Nischal ke khud ke point of view kabhi kabhi samajhneai nahi aye jaha ek aor usne sarita ki help ki thi usey jhote case mai bachakar uske Baad uska kuch impact nazar nahi aya as a police officer
And relationships ko lekar bhi ab tak uske views kuch clear na dikhe jaha ek aor wo apni behen ko bohut pyaar karta hai aur Phir anant ji ke mamle mai waisa kuch na dikha
Nischal ne ab tak jo bhi kiya hai, har baar ek hero ki duty aur emotions kam aur swarth zyada show hua hai...
Dusri baat adult forum story mein agar hero heroine bahot der se entry le to chaahe jitni koshish kar le, par us level tak wo impact nahi daal paate story pe jisse readers ko feeling aaye ki haan yahi hero heroine hai...
 
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Nischal ke khud ke point of view kabhi kabhi samajhneai nahi aye jaha ek aor usne sarita ki help ki thi usey jhote case mai bachakar uske Baad uska kuch impact nazar nahi aya as a police officer
And relationships ko lekar bhi ab tak uske views kuch clear na dikhe jaha ek aor wo apni behen ko bohut pyaar karta hai aur Phir anant ji ke mamle mai waisa kuch na dikha
Sabse badi baat ... Gussa hona aur ek ladki ke kamre mein adhi raat ko ghusne ,without permission usko baat baat baho mein bhar lena..in dono baaton mein bahot bada fark hai...aur ek baar nahi balki kayi baar kar chuka hai nischal... Ek romantic story ka hero aisa kaam katayi nahi karta jab tak ki heroine ke dil mein bhi uske liye lagav na aa jaaye..First downfall yahi se hua is kirdaar ka....
.nischal ke behavior wo South Indian films ke masale wale movies ke hero ki tarah hai, even raghav ka bhi.. shayad is mamle mein nischal se kahi zyada hi..
 
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nischal ne kya Sarita ko kharid ke rakha hai jo haar baat usse puchkar kare....
Yahan to nischal aur savita to Freedom chinne pe tule huye hai..
agar by chance kal ko shaadi ho gayi to Sarita ko khana khane tak ke liye bhi permission leni hogi nischal aur savita se ... :sigh:
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सबको पता है कि सरिता हर काम बिना सोचे समझे करती है। जो सामने आ भी गया।
सविता ने बस फिक्रमंद होकर ये बात कही थी। उसे भी पता है कि मुसीबत सरिता के ऊपर कभी भी कहीं भी आ सकती है।।
 

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