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To mar jaaye wo kya fark padta haiSahasi aur Bahadur hai bevkoof nahiaisi bahaduri dikhayega to karma aur kahani agale update mein hi finish।


To mar jaaye wo kya fark padta haiSahasi aur Bahadur hai bevkoof nahiaisi bahaduri dikhayega to karma aur kahani agale update mein hi finish।
Kasam dene ke baad bhi karma jo soch raha tha usse to yahi lage ki uske liye uski maa ki kasam kuch bhi nahi... kaisi aulaad hai jiske liye maa ki kasam se zyada uske ma ka jishm zyada badhkar hai...माँ- तो तुझे मेरी कसम है तू अभी जो हुआ उसके बारे में कभी दोबारा बात नहीं करेगा और ना ही मुझसे कुछ पूछेगा .... और ना ही कुछ करने की कोशिश करेगा ....
Btw main ye sab kuch nahi jaanti.. Karma ko to batana hi hoga ki wo kya kar tha rajan ki biwi ke sath... warna is story mein DREAMBOY40 sahab ke kirdaar raj aur chandu aa jaayenge aur karma ki ma aur mamta air uski beti ko apni story pe leke chale jaayengeSahasi aur Bahadur hai bevkoof nahiaisi bahaduri dikhayega to karma aur kahani agale update mein hi finish।
Meri story ke hero ko markar meri story band karwa kar kya milega tumko... Kyun ek gareeb ka ghar bigadne par lagi ho..To mar jaaye wo kya fark padta haiaise kayarta ke sath jee ke bhi kya karega wo kamina
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Bahut bahut dhanyawad is atyant hi hero ko beizzat karne wali, usko neecha dikhane wali, gaaliyo wali, jhakjhor dene wali, doob marne wali pratikriya ke liye..mamta to dr chutiya sahab ki kirdaar kajal se bhi zyada gayi gurinchi nikli.. itni nich aur badjaat aurat jo bekhauf apne hi pati ko khuleaam dhokha de raha hai... haaraman to thi hi ab dagabaaz bhi nikli... aisi aurat ko to samaaj society se hi varjit kar deni chahiye.... chii ghin aa rahi ab to is mamta meinwo chad chuki hai bahar se bhi aur andar se bhi... Kash jald se jald rajan pata chal jaaye ki uski biwi kaise gulcharre udati hai uske pith pich us haramjade karma ke sath.... aur rajan dono ko bich chauraahe pe le jaake maar maar ke chamri udher de.... tab jaake sukun mile
Dusri taraf karma... ek to rajan ko chacha bolta hai aur dusri taraf uske pith piche usiki biwi sath itni ghinoni harakatein karta hai... are kam se kam rishte ka to maan rakh leta...
are dhitkaar hai karma ki is chade huye jivan par.... is karma ko to jaake gande naale mein kud ke dub marna chahiye...![]()
Kasam dene ke baad bhi karma jo soch raha tha usse to yahi lage ki uske liye uski maa ki kasam kuch bhi nahi... kaisi aulaad hai jiske liye maa ki kasam se zyada uske ma ka jishm zyada badhkar hai...
Is story character karma ki soch aur gatividhiyon se yehi pata chalta hai ki hawas ki aag mein jalte insaan koi bhi nich harkate karne se pehle ek baar bhi nahi sochta ki kya rishta samne wale ke sath... Hawas aankon aur dilo dimag pe is kadar saya rehta hai ki maan maryaada rishta , insab ka jaise koi mol nahi reh jata hai ....bas chahiye ek jishm taaki tan ki bhukh mita sake...
Well ....
Shaandaar update, shaandaar lekni aur shaandaar shabdon ka chayan...
bahot nirale aur uttejak tarike se update ko pesh kiya gaya hai..
Khair... let's see what happens next...
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills![]()
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Chalo sahi hai je ke kaleje ko karma aur mamta ko gali deke thandak to padi... Aur humare liye yahi bahut hai ki humari rachna bas padhne walo ke kaleje ko thandak pahuchati rahe... One way or anotherahaa .. ab jaake dil ki bhadas nikalne ki baad chain aur sukun mili ho jaise![]()
kaleje ko jaise thandak pad gayi ho...
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Din dahade gundai par utar aai aap to, aur jinhe bula rahi ho wo bhi Karma ki category ke hi hain kahin sabmein tagda yarana na ho jaye...Btw main ye sab kuch nahi jaanti.. Karma ko to batana hi hoga ki wo kya kar tha rajan ki biwi ke sath... warna is story mein DREAMBOY40 sahab ke kirdaar raj aur chandu aa jaayenge aur karma ki ma aur mamta air uski beti ko apni story pe leke chale jaayenge![]()
Haan bas apki duaon ka asar hai karma par isliye karma bach gaya..nice update...karma mamta aj baal baal bach gye, yadi darvaja khula hota to lene ke dene vali bat ho jti..