Lustyweb's Exclusive Story Contest 2022 ➣ Chit Chat & Discussion Thread

[Rahul]

Ju ne to dil par le liya

Aap inna pareshan the bhai ek comment ko lekar to hata diya

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Hum bhi kosis kar rahe hain postmortem karne ki abhi shurwaate ki hai. Aage Naina ji ka aashirwaad raha toh hum expert ho jaenge

But ju ko bhi wodka Pina hoga

 

[Rahul]

Busy honge kahi

Sand story par aate the tab site ka naam xfun tha jabse lusty hua na dikhe hain hanlaki email gaya hoga

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Mai unhi mese hun yaar

 

[SANJU 90076]

DREAMBOY40 sahab aur ProfessorPo sahab ki kahaniyaan padhiye balak.. isse aapka kalyaan ho jaayega, chalak chatur bhi ban jaayenge

Dream boy... kanpuriya chokra...No doubt , outstanding writer hai wo. Mughe biswas hai bahut aage jayega wo.
Professor sahab ki story abhi tak padha nhi hai maine. Padhta hu enki story.

 

[SANJU 90076]

Abhi Destiny ji ki story par try ki aap dekh kar batana ki sahi kiya ya nahin

Kahi aap Manu bhau to nahi hai ?

 

[Rahul]

Kahi aap Manu bhau to nahi hai ?

wo nai hain ye

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Main sach kahun to kisi bhi story ke har update par review dena hi nhi chahta. Ek update se story ka maap dand tay nahi kiya ja sakta. Bhale hi wo kitna bhi badhiya likha gaya ho.
Elements of story -
कथा वस्तु , किरदारों का चरित्र , वातावरण ( भौतिक और आत्मिक ) , संवाद , भाषा शैली और उद्देश्य ।
Ye important factors hote hain.

100% agree, but aisa tab achha lagta hai jab story already complete ho aur tab aap puri kahani ki ek hi baar me sameeksha kar dijiye aur yakeenan wo sameeksha adbhut hogi lekin agar story running period me hai to aapko every update me na sahi lekin ek do update ke antraal me kuch na kuch to story ke bare me kahna hi chahiye. Isse writer ko khushi bhi milti hai aur uska aage likhne ka utsaah bhi bana rahta hai. Ek achha communication hona zaruri hai. Purana writer to jhel lega lekin jo naya hoga wo next update me hi story chhod kar chala jayega.

 

[Rahul]

100% agree, but aisa tab achha lagta hai jab story already complete ho aur tab aap puri kahani ki ek hi baar me sameeksha kar dijiye aur yakeenan wo sameeksha adbhut hogi lekin agar story running period me hai to aapko every update me na sahi lekin ek do update ke antraal me kuch na kuch to story ke bare me kahna hi chahiye. Isse writer ko khushi bhi milti hai aur uska aage likhne ka utsaah bhi bana rahta hai. Ek achha communication hona zaruri hai. Purana writer to jhel lega lekin jo naya hoga wo next update me hi story chhod kar chala jayega.

To Jo nice update likhega usko pyaar se samjhna hoga ki kuch baat update ke bare me bhi likhe comment udwage to ghanta reader milega

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Aap inna pareshan the bhai ek comment ko lekar to hata diya

Mistake in understanding you, I was not upset but just joking