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In London

Kahate Hai aisi koi sukh suvidha Nahin Hai Jo London me nahi Ho .
City Ke side area me ek bahut hi bara Ghar.
Ise Ghar kahana galat hoga kyunki yah to Mahal hai.
Chaliye ab ham iss Mahal ke andar chalte Hain.
Gate ke andar jaate Hai ek Taraf playground dusri Taraf phoolon Ka bagicha aur bich se ek rasta.
Raste per kareeb 500 metre jaane per mahal Ka gate.
Jaise hi Ghar Ke andar kadam rakhte Hain pata chalta Hai yah to Raja Maharaja ke Mahal se bhi shandar hai.
Kamre Ki ginti Nahin 2 floor ka yah Mahal aur Har floor per ek swimming pool.
Chaliye ab ham chalte Hain is Mahal ke sabse shandar kamre me.
Jahan per 14-15 sal ke do bacche so rahe hai.
Tabhi kamre ke andar koi aata Hai.

Maa- kab tak sote rahoge School bhi jana hai jao taiyar ho jao
(Aapane bilkul sahi pahchana yah bacche aur koi Nahi ansh aur Anshu hai)

Iske bad Ansh aur Anshu sabse pahle brush karte Hain Uske bad taiyar hote Hain fur niche breakfast ki table per pahunch jaate Hain.

Niche papa aur maa breakfast karne ke liye baithe hue the kabhi vaha par ye donon jaate Hain

Ansh&Anshu-good morning everyone

Papa&maa-good morning bacchon

Papa-aaj ka kya program hai school jana hai ya nahin

Maa-kyon Nahin jaega school jarur Jayega maine theek kahan hna Ansh.

Ansh- papa aaj hamare school mein program hai kya aap aur ma school mein aaenge

Papa-Maine tumhen kitni bar kaha hai hamare pass faltu ka time nahin hai aur aaj hamare ek business meeting mein hai

(Yah log breakfast karte hue baten kar rahe the)

Tabhi ek call aata hai jise papa receive karte hai aur pareshan Ho jaate Hai

Maa-kya baat hai itna pareshan kyon Ho Gaye

Papa-India se call aaya hai mujhe urgent India Jana Hoga is meeting ko tum hi attend karna.

Ansh-Papa main bhi aapke sath chalunga

Papa-main vahan akela ja raha hun koi mere sath Nahin Hai samjhe

Ansh-lekin papa Mera bahut man Hai vahan jaane ka

Papa- Ansh maine ek bar kah diya na

Ansh - ji papa

Breakfast ke baad papa India ke liye nikal jaate Hain

In Mumbai
Neha Delhi se Mumbai aa chuki hai.
Vah sabse jyada pyara dadaji Se Hi karte thi jis Karan vah bahut ro rahi hai.
Tabhi vahan per Abhishek aata Hai

Abhishek-didi ab rone se kya hoga, dadaji to ab Nahin rahe aap bhi apna tabiyat kharab kar rahi hai,
Iske bad Abhishek jabardasti Neha ko Uske kamre me le jata hai.

Pahle to Neha bahut roi Uske bad fresh hokar antim sanskar mein jaane ke liye nikali
Tabhi usse kuchh baten sunai dene lagi

Buaa-Ramesh Tumne bhai sahab ko bol diya hai ki Papa ki death ho chuki hai

Uncle- Ha didi aaj subah hi bola hai.

Bua-ab to Neha bhi unke sath Chali jayegi kab tak vah apni beti ko yahan per rakhenge

Uncle-ab kar bhi kya sakte hai bhale hi humne use Pal pushkar bada kiya ho lekin vah to bhai sahab ki hi santan hai.

Jab Neha yah baat Ko sunti Hai ki aaj Uske Papa aane vale hai.
To vah thori khush ho jaati hai lekin fir kuchh sochti hai

Neha(man)-mai aapse jarur puchungi ki aap aaj Tak mujhse milane kyon Nahin Aaye. Aakhir mujhe bhi pata Hona chahie ki aisi kya baat hai jis Karan Mai aap logon ke sath Nahin thi.

Chaliye ab bahar chalte Hai.
Abhi Tak papa Nahi Aaye the aur Dada ke antim sanskar Ka samay ho Gaya tha.
Ab sabko lagne laga ki papa Nahi aayenge.
Tab Gupta uncle be Bola ki ab hame antim Yatra shuru Karni chahie.

(Gupta uncle hamare dada ke friend aur vakil the)
Lekin tabhi vahan papa aa gaye.
 
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UPDATE-6
In London

Kahate Hai aisi koi sukh suvidha Nahin Hai Jo London me nahi Ho .
City Ke side area me ek bahut hi bara Ghar.
Ise Ghar kahana galat hoga kyunki yah to Mahal hai.
Chaliye ab ham iss Mahal ke andar chalte Hain.
Gate ke andar jaate Hai ek Taraf playground dusri Taraf phoolon Ka bagicha aur bich se ek rasta.
Raste per kareeb 500 metre jaane per mahal Ka gate.
Jaise hi Ghar Ke andar kadam rakhte Hain pata chalta Hai yah to Raja Maharaja ke Mahal se bhi shandar hai.
Kamre Ki ginti Nahin 2 floor ka yah Mahal aur Har floor per ek swimming pool.
Chaliye ab ham chalte Hain is Mahal ke sabse shandar kamre me.
Jahan per 14-15 sal ke do bacche so rahe hai.
Tabhi kamre ke andar koi aata Hai.

Maa- kab tak sote rahoge School bhi jana hai jao taiyar ho jao
(Aapane bilkul sahi pahchana yah bacche aur koi Nahi ansh aur Anshu hai)

Iske bad Ansh aur Anshu sabse pahle brush karte Hain Uske bad taiyar hote Hain fur niche breakfast ki table per pahunch jaate Hain.

Niche papa aur maa breakfast karne ke liye baithe hue the kabhi vaha par ye donon jaate Hain

Ansh&Anshu-good morning everyone

Papa&maa-good morning bacchon

Papa-aaj ka kya program hai school jana hai ya nahin

Maa-kyon Nahin jaega school jarur Jayega maine theek kahan hna Ansh.

Ansh- papa aaj hamare school mein program hai kya aap aur ma school mein aaenge

Papa-Maine tumhen kitni bar kaha hai hamare pass faltu ka time nahin hai aur aaj hamare ek business meeting mein hai

(Yah log breakfast karte hue baten kar rahe the)

Tabhi ek call aata hai jise papa receive karte hai aur pareshan Ho jaate Hai

Maa-kya baat hai itna pareshan kyon Ho Gaye

Papa-India se call aaya hai mujhe urgent India Jana Hoga is meeting ko tum hi attend karna.

Ansh-Papa main bhi aapke sath chalunga

Papa-main vahan akela ja raha hun koi mere sath Nahin Hai samjhe

Ansh-lekin papa Mera bahut man Hai vahan jaane ka

Papa- Ansh maine ek bar kah diya na

Ansh - ji papa

Breakfast ke baad papa India ke liye nikal jaate Hain

In Mumbai
Neha Delhi se Mumbai aa chuki hai.
Vah sabse jyada pyara dadaji Se Hi karte thi jis Karan vah bahut ro rahi hai.
Tabhi vahan per Abhishek aata Hai

Abhishek-didi ab rone se kya hoga, dadaji to ab Nahin rahe aap bhi apna tabiyat kharab kar rahi hai,
Iske bad Abhishek jabardasti Neha ko Uske kamre me le jata hai.

Pahle to Neha bahut roi Uske bad fresh hokar antim sanskar mein jaane ke liye nikali
Tabhi usse kuchh baten sunai dene lagi

Buaa-Ramesh Tumne bhai sahab ko bol diya hai ki Papa ki death ho chuki hai

Uncle- Ha didi aaj subah hi bola hai.

Bua-ab to Neha bhi unke sath Chali jayegi kab tak vah apni beti ko yahan per rakhenge

Uncle-ab kar bhi kya sakte hai bhale hi humne use Pal pushkar bada kiya ho lekin vah to bhai sahab ki hi santan hai.

Jab Neha yah baat Ko sunti Hai ki aaj Uske Papa aane vale hai.
To vah thori khush ho jaati hai lekin fir kuchh sochti hai

Neha(man)-mai aapse jarur puchungi ki aap aaj Tak mujhse milane kyon Nahin Aaye. Aakhir mujhe bhi pata Hona chahie ki aisi kya baat hai jis Karan Mai aap logon ke sath Nahin thi.

Chaliye ab bahar chalte Hai.
Abhi Tak papa Nahi Aaye the aur Dada ke antim sanskar Ka samay ho Gaya tha.
Ab sabko lagne laga ki papa Nahi aayenge.
Tab Gupta uncle be Bola ki ab hame antim Yatra shuru Karni chahie.

(Gupta uncle hamare dada ke friend aur vakil the)
Lekin tabhi vahan papa aa gaye. uncle hamare dada ke friend aur vakil the)
Lekin tabhi vahan papa aa gaye.





 
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Ab tak aapne padha---

Dadaji ki mrityu ho chuki hai jismein shamil hone ke liye main nikala to tha lekin hospital pahuch gaya vahin papa bhi London se India as chuke hain.

Ab aage---

Papa Dada ke shav ke pass gaya fir shuru hui family drama.
Thodi der tak sab ek dusre se milte rahe aur uske bad antim sanskar ki prakriya shuru hui.
Sabhi Ke aankhon Se aansu nikal rahe the.
Antim sanskar me pure mohalle Ke log shamil hue the.
Kyunki dadaji bahut hi acche insan the unhone Puri jindagi mein bahut Sare logo ki madad ki thi.
Khair ab ham chalte Hain shamshan ghat vahin jahan per antim sanskar hota Hai.

Dada ji ke sharir ko lakadi per dala gaya tha uske upar se bhi lakadi.
Vahi panditji Sare Vidhi vidhan ko kar rahe the.
Kuchh samay bad jab dadaji ko Agni Dene Ka samay Aaya tab pitaji ne dadaji ko agni Di.
Uske baad sabhi bagal ke hi Nadi mein snan Kar Ghar wapas laut Aaye.
Ghar par matam ka mahaul tha vahin Neha jald se jald papa ke pass pahunchna chahti thi Lekin use samay hi nahin mil raha tha.
Thodi der ke bad sabhi log Apne-Apne Ghar Ko chale Gaye. Vahi chacha bua aur papa ko ek kamre me bulate hai

Chacha-bhai sahab ab to Neha aapke sath London Chali jayegi.
Hamara man Uske Bina bilkul bhi Nahin Lagta.

Yah baat sunkar achanak papa Ko achanak yaad aata hai ki unki ek beti bhi thi.
Jise unhone chacha ji ko diya tha.
Lekin tab unhen ek aur baat yaad aati hai.
Jiske baad vah kahate Hain.

Papa-Nahin Neha yahi rahegi.

Bua-dekh rahi hu bhai sahab aap bahut badal Gaye Hain.
Jab aapko Neha ki jarurat thi tab aapane use apne pass rakha.
Aur jab aapko uski jarurat Nahin hai tab aap use Puri Tarah Se bhul gaye.
Insaniyat naam Ki bhi koi chij hoti hai.
Aap to vah bhi bhul gaye.

Chacha-yah tum kya kah rahi ho Didi.
Tumhare kahane ka matlab kya hai.

Bua-yah baat tum bhai sahab se hi poochh lo unhone kya kiya tha
Lekin vah To bataenge Nahin mai hi bata deti hu
Bua-bhabhi ko ek mari hui bacchi paida hui thi
Tab bhai sahab ne nurse ki madad se hospital me hi janm li hui ek bacchi se use badal Diya.
Jab yah baat Chacha sunte Hain To unhen bahut bara jhatka lagta hai.

Yah log aapas mein baat kar rahe the lekin inhe pata nahin tha ki koi hai jo unki baton ko sun Raha Hai.

Kuchh samay ke baad parivar ke sabhi sadasya hall mein baithe hue the.
Aur unke samne Gupta uncle baithe hue the.
Gupta uncle dada ji ki wasiyat padhne walee the.

Aisa nahin tha ki chacha ji ke pass apni property Nahin hai.
Papa ne dadaji ke madad se apna business shuru kiya tha aur ab London ke number 1 businessman haj.
Vahi chacha ji aur bua ne ek sath milkar dada ji ki sahayata se apna business shuru kiya tha aur abhi India ke a top 10 businessmen me se ek hai.

Lekin Dada ji ka bhi apna ek business tha. Unhone pure Bharat mein Kai jagah jameen kharidi thi mall hotel Aur bhi bahut Sare business start kiye hue the aur unke dwara hone Wali income ek account mein jaati Hai.
Jiske bare mein abhi tak Ghar per kisi ko pata nahin tha.
Unhen bus itna pata tha ki dadaji Ka bhi ek business hai aur vah uske dwara hone Wali income ko Haridwar ke aashram me dete hai.

Khair ab chalte Hain Gupta uncle ki taraf.
Gupta uncle Dada ji ke vasiyat ko kholkar padhna shuru karte Hain


Mai Amrit Bansal aaj apni marji se yah vasiyat banvane ja raha hun

Meri Puri sampatti ka 25% aur apna yah Ghar mere Chote bete Ramesh Bansal Ke naam karta hoon

Aur apni beti Puja ke naam bhi apni property ka 25% karta Hu.

Baki ke bache 50% mai Apne pote Raj Bansal Ke naam karta hu.


Gupta uncle-jaisa ki wasiyat me bataya gaya hai us hisab se 25% property ki kimat 5000 karor rupya hai.

Jaise hi Gupta uncle mein yah baat Kahi Chacha aur bua ke hosh hi ud gaye.

Gupta uncle mein 1 passbook bua ko aur 1 passbook Chacha ko diya aur sath hi Ghar Ke property ke paper Chacha ko diya.

Gupta uncle-ine donon passbook me p
5000 karor gaya hai Jo Aapke finger print se hi khulenge.
Aur aapke jankari ke liye bata do Ki Raj ab aashram mein Nahin rahata hai.
Uske hisse ki money Uske pass pahle hi bahut chuki hai
Vah kahan per hai Kisi Ko Nahin pata

Papa koi in sabhi baton Se koi fark nahin par raha tha unka To Ghar hi 1000 karor Rs Ka hai. Dusre din papa bhi wapas London chale gaye

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Ab tak aapne padha---
Dada ka antim sanskar ho gaya hai.
Aur wasiyat bhi sabke samne aa gai hai.
Sath hi Neha ka ek sach Chacha ko pata Chala Hai

Ab aage---
Is waqt Neha Apne dadaji ke kamre me hai aur uske samne Dada ji baithe hue hain.

Neha-Dada ji aap bar-bar Haridwar kyon jaate Hain.

D.J-beti Haridwar duniya Ke sabse pavitra Jagho me Se ek Hai.
Ved-puran me likha hai Haridwar mein khud bhagwan Vishnu Aaye the.
Vahan ki hawaon mein bhi itna sukun hai ki log apni sari pareshani bhul jate hai.

D.J-jab bhi Mera Man asanth ho jata hai main Haridwar Chala jata hu.
Kabhi Kabhi to main yah sochta Hun main Haridwar hi ja kar rahu.

D.J-beti jab bhi tumhara man vichalit ho jaega.
Tumhe Sahi galat andaja Nahin rahega tum Haridwar Chali Jana.
Tumhen aage ka rasta khud-B-khud mil jaega.

Abhi yah sab Ho Hi Raha tha ki tabhi vahan per bahut jyada roshni hoti hai.
Jis Karan Neha ki nind khul jaati Hai.
(ab To aap samajh hi gaye honge ki Neha sapnon me Apne purane yadon me khoi hui thi)

Abhi Neha jagi hi thi ki usse Raat mein hui bua Papa aur chacha ki baten yad aane lagi.
Jisse uski aankhon mein aansu aa Gaya.
Vah raat ko Apne papa se milane gaye thi.
Lekin vahan per hui baton ko sunkar vah wapas Apne kamre mein laut aai aur rote rote So gai.
Tabhi use Dada ki baten yaad aane lagi Jo unhone kuchh din pahle hi use bataya tha.

Tabhi Neha Ko yad aata Hai ki uski hostel ki ek Friend ka Ghar Haridwar me hi hai.
Jiske baad neha use call Karti Hai

Neha-hello Anjali mai neha bol rahi hu.

Anjali-ha neha bolo kya Kam Hai.

N-Wo mein kuchh din ke liye Haridwar aa rahi thi to kya main tumhare ghar per ruk sakti hu.

A-ha-ha kyon Nahin vaise bhi abhi mere mummy-papa kuchh dinon ke liye bahar gaye hue hai.

N-theek hai to main tumse aaj sham me milati hu.

(ISI Tarah donon saheliyon Ke bich kuchh baat hui Uske baad Neha Ne call cut Kar Diya)

Uske baad Neha fresh hokar bahar jaati Hai.
Jahan sabhi log baithe hue the.
Neha sabhi ko Apne Haridwar jane ke bare mein batati hai.
Aur sabhi Raji Ho jaate Hain.

Dopahar Tak Neha Haridwar jaane ke liye nikal jaati Hai aur sham ko apne friend ke ghar pahunch jaati Hai

Vahin dusri Taraf
Mujhe 2 dinon ke baad hosh aata Hai.
Jab mujhe Hosh aata Hai to mai apne aap ko aashram ke Hi ek kutiya mein pata hai.
Jab mai theek se dekhta hai to vahan per mahasant baithe hue the.
Jab mahasant Ko pata chalta Hai Ki mujhe hosh Aaya Hai.
Vah ke pass jaate Hain aur Uske hath ki nari ko check karte hue

M.S-ab Kaisa lag raha hai tumhen

Mai-main yahan per kaise Aaye main To Mumbai ja raha tha.

M.S-Maine tumhen kitni baar mana Kiya Lekin tum Nahin mane.
Tumhara accident Ho Gaya tha aur tum 2 dinon ke baad hosh mein Aaye ho.

Abhi yah donon baat kar hi rahe the ki vahan per Gupta ji aate Hain aur Raj Ko dadaji ki vasiyat ke bare mein bata dete Hain.
Aur Raj ke hisse ki property use de dete Hain.

Mai-lekin mai iska kya karunga.
Mujhe to business ke bare mein kuchh knowledge Nahin Hai.

Gupta ji-aapke Dada ki antim ichha thi ki aap unke business ko aage badhaye.
Isiliye unha mein apni aadhi property Aapke naam Ki Hai.

iske baad Gupta ji chale jaate Hain.

M.S- Raj tumhen ek aise vyakti Ko dhundhna Hoga.
Jiske pass business ki knowledge Ho aur use per tum bharosa kar sako.

Mai-jaisa aap kahan guru ji.

Sham Tak mai Puri Tarah Se theek ho jata hai.
FIR vah Apne car mein baith kar Haridwar ghumne ke liye nikal jata hai


Vahi dusri Taraf
Neha apne Anjali ke ghar pahunch jaati hai.
Fir uske sath Haridwar ghumne jaati Hain.
Aur Raat Ko wapas aa jaati hun.
Dusre din Anjali Ko Kisi kam se a bahar jana para.
Tab Neha akele Hai ghumne ke liye nikal jaati hain.
Din bhar vah alag-alag Mandir mai darshan Karti hai aur jab sham ko Anjali Ke Ghar laut rahi hoti hai.
Tabhi ek Car use takkar mar deta hai.


Vahi Raj Car chalate hue use property ke bare mein Soch Raha tha
Raj Ko business ka ABCD bhi nahin aata tha.
Tabhi achanak Uske car Ke samne ek ladki aa gai aur Raj ne break laga diya.
Jab tak rukti tab tak usi ladki ka accident ho chuka tha lekin jyada serious nahi.
Raj car se utar Kar us ladki ko uthaya aur aashram Ke hi hospital me le gaya.
Thodi der ke baad us ladki ko hosh aa Gaya.

Raj- hay I am Raj and you.

Larki-I am Neha
(Thodi der tak raj ne Neha Ko Dekha Aur Jaan Gaya Ki vah is per vishwas kar sakta hai.
Raj Kisi bhi vyakti ke aankhon mein dekhkar Use swabhav ko pahchan sakta tha)

Thodi der tak Raj aur Neha mein baten hoti hai.
Neha ko ek achcha insan lag raha tha.
Jis jaran Neha Raj Ko Apne bare mein sab kuchh bata deti Hai.
Raj ne bhi Neha ko apne business problem ke bare me bataya aur usse pucha.

Raj- kya tum mere business ko chalane me meri madad karogi.

Neha-main tumhari kya madad kar sakte hu.

Raj-jab Tak mai apni study complete nahin kar leta.
Main business mein nahin aana Chahta to kya tab tak tim mere business ko Dekhogi.

Neha-yah to bahut badi jimmedari hai Har mujhe koi expression bhi Nahin Hai.

Raj- vah to tumhen kam karte karte mil hi jaega aur jahan tak baat rahi jimmedari ki to main tum per itna bharosa to karta Hu ki tumhara rahate mujhe koi pareshani Nahin hogi.

Neha-agar tum mujhpar itna bharosa karte Ho to main bhi taiyar hu

Raj-yah hui na baat aur aaj ke baad tum mujhko Raj Hi bologi

Neha-theek hai Raj.

Raj Neha ko apne business ka M.D banaa deta hai.
Ab Neha business ke Kai mamlo ko khud hi dekhtu gai,
Aur serious matter per Raj ki jarurat padti.

Abhi ke liye itna hita hai.
Ab Neha business ke Kai mamlo ko khud hi dekhtu gai,
Aur serious matter per Raj ki jarurat padti.

Abhi ke liye itna hi
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Ab tak aapne padha---
Dada ka antim sanskar ho gaya hai.
Aur wasiyat bhi sabke samne aa gai hai.
Sath hi Neha ka ek sach Chacha ko pata Chala Hai

Ab aage---
Is waqt Neha Apne dadaji ke kamre me hai aur uske samne Dada ji baithe hue hain.

Neha-Dada ji aap bar-bar Haridwar kyon jaate Hain.

D.J-beti Haridwar duniya Ke sabse pavitra Jagho me Se ek Hai.
Ved-puran me likha hai Haridwar mein khud bhagwan Vishnu Aaye the.
Vahan ki hawaon mein bhi itna sukun hai ki log apni sari pareshani bhul jate hai.

D.J-jab bhi Mera Man asanth ho jata hai main Haridwar Chala jata hu.
Kabhi Kabhi to main yah sochta Hun main Haridwar hi ja kar rahu.

D.J-beti jab bhi tumhara man vichalit ho jaega.
Tumhe Sahi galat andaja Nahin rahega tum Haridwar Chali Jana.
Tumhen aage ka rasta khud-B-khud mil jaega.

Abhi yah sab Ho Hi Raha tha ki tabhi vahan per bahut jyada roshni hoti hai.
Jis Karan Neha ki nind khul jaati Hai.
(ab To aap samajh hi gaye honge ki Neha sapnon me Apne purane yadon me khoi hui thi)

Abhi Neha jagi hi thi ki usse Raat mein hui bua Papa aur chacha ki baten yad aane lagi.
Jisse uski aankhon mein aansu aa Gaya.
Vah raat ko Apne papa se milane gaye thi.
Lekin vahan per hui baton ko sunkar vah wapas Apne kamre mein laut aai aur rote rote So gai.
Tabhi use Dada ki baten yaad aane lagi Jo unhone kuchh din pahle hi use bataya tha.

Tabhi Neha Ko yad aata Hai ki uski hostel ki ek Friend ka Ghar Haridwar me hi hai.
Jiske baad neha use call Karti Hai

Neha-hello Anjali mai neha bol rahi hu.

Anjali-ha neha bolo kya Kam Hai.

N-Wo mein kuchh din ke liye Haridwar aa rahi thi to kya main tumhare ghar per ruk sakti hu.

A-ha-ha kyon Nahin vaise bhi abhi mere mummy-papa kuchh dinon ke liye bahar gaye hue hai.

N-theek hai to main tumse aaj sham me milati hu.

(ISI Tarah donon saheliyon Ke bich kuchh baat hui Uske baad Neha Ne call cut Kar Diya)

Uske baad Neha fresh hokar bahar jaati Hai.
Jahan sabhi log baithe hue the.
Neha sabhi ko Apne Haridwar jane ke bare mein batati hai.
Aur sabhi Raji Ho jaate Hain.

Dopahar Tak Neha Haridwar jaane ke liye nikal jaati Hai aur sham ko apne friend ke ghar pahunch jaati Hai

Vahin dusri Taraf
Mujhe 2 dinon ke baad hosh aata Hai.
Jab mujhe Hosh aata Hai to mai apne aap ko aashram ke Hi ek kutiya mein pata hai.
Jab mai theek se dekhta hai to vahan per mahasant baithe hue the.
Jab mahasant Ko pata chalta Hai Ki mujhe hosh Aaya Hai.
Vah ke pass jaate Hain aur Uske hath ki nari ko check karte hue

M.S-ab Kaisa lag raha hai tumhen

Mai-main yahan per kaise Aaye main To Mumbai ja raha tha.

M.S-Maine tumhen kitni baar mana Kiya Lekin tum Nahin mane.
Tumhara accident Ho Gaya tha aur tum 2 dinon ke baad hosh mein Aaye ho.

Abhi yah donon baat kar hi rahe the ki vahan per Gupta ji aate Hain aur Raj Ko dadaji ki vasiyat ke bare mein bata dete Hain.
Aur Raj ke hisse ki property use de dete Hain.

Mai-lekin mai iska kya karunga.
Mujhe to business ke bare mein kuchh knowledge Nahin Hai.

Gupta ji-aapke Dada ki antim ichha thi ki aap unke business ko aage badhaye.
Isiliye unha mein apni aadhi property Aapke naam Ki Hai.

iske baad Gupta ji chale jaate Hain.

M.S- Raj tumhen ek aise vyakti Ko dhundhna Hoga.
Jiske pass business ki knowledge Ho aur use per tum bharosa kar sako.

Mai-jaisa aap kahan guru ji.

Sham Tak mai Puri Tarah Se theek ho jata hai.
FIR vah Apne car mein baith kar Haridwar ghumne ke liye nikal jata hai


Vahi dusri Taraf
Neha apne Anjali ke ghar pahunch jaati hai.
Fir uske sath Haridwar ghumne jaati Hain.
Aur Raat Ko wapas aa jaati hun.
Dusre din Anjali Ko Kisi kam se a bahar jana para.
Tab Neha akele Hai ghumne ke liye nikal jaati hain.
Din bhar vah alag-alag Mandir mai darshan Karti hai aur jab sham ko Anjali Ke Ghar laut rahi hoti hai.
Tabhi ek Car use takkar mar deta hai.


Vahi Raj Car chalate hue use property ke bare mein Soch Raha tha
Raj Ko business ka ABCD bhi nahin aata tha.
Tabhi achanak Uske car Ke samne ek ladki aa gai aur Raj ne break laga diya.
Jab tak rukti tab tak usi ladki ka accident ho chuka tha lekin jyada serious nahi.
Raj car se utar Kar us ladki ko uthaya aur aashram Ke hi hospital me le gaya.
Thodi der ke baad us ladki ko hosh aa Gaya.

Raj- hay I am Raj and you.

Larki-I am Neha
(Thodi der tak raj ne Neha Ko Dekha Aur Jaan Gaya Ki vah is per vishwas kar sakta hai.
Raj Kisi bhi vyakti ke aankhon mein dekhkar Use swabhav ko pahchan sakta tha)

Thodi der tak Raj aur Neha mein baten hoti hai.
Neha ko ek achcha insan lag raha tha.
Jis jaran Neha Raj Ko Apne bare mein sab kuchh bata deti Hai.
Raj ne bhi Neha ko apne business problem ke bare me bataya aur usse pucha.

Raj- kya tum mere business ko chalane me meri madad karogi.

Neha-main tumhari kya madad kar sakte hu.

Raj-jab Tak mai apni study complete nahin kar leta.
Main business mein nahin aana Chahta to kya tab tak tim mere business ko Dekhogi.

Neha-yah to bahut badi jimmedari hai Har mujhe koi expression bhi Nahin Hai.

Raj- vah to tumhen kam karte karte mil hi jaega aur jahan tak baat rahi jimmedari ki to main tum per itna bharosa to karta Hu ki tumhara rahate mujhe koi pareshani Nahin hogi.

Neha-agar tum mujhpar itna bharosa karte Ho to main bhi taiyar hu

Raj-yah hui na baat aur aaj ke baad tum mujhko Raj Hi bologi

Neha-theek hai Raj.

Raj Neha ko apne business ka M.D banaa deta hai.
Ab Neha business ke Kai mamlo ko khud hi dekhtu gai,
Aur serious matter per Raj ki jarurat padti.

Abhi ke liye itna hita hai.
Ab Neha business ke Kai mamlo ko khud hi dekhtu gai,
Aur serious matter per Raj ki jarurat padti.

Abhi ke liye itna hi
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01 sal baad

Iis 1 sal main bahut kuchh badal gaya tha.
Raj ab 18 sal Ka ho gaya tha aur guru ji ki permission se Haridwar se Mumbai mein shift ho gaya tha.
Vahi Neha ne Raja ke business ko fir Se vahi mukam per lakar khada Kar diya Jahan per vah pahle tha.
Number 1 position.
Neha ne Raj ke permission se Uske sabhi business ka naam change kar kar A.R Rakh diya
Like A.R mall, A.R hotel, A.T institute.
Raj ke dadaji Ka business bahut bada tha unhone lagbhag sabhi line me apna paisa invest kiya tha.
Like Hospital, School etc.
Sath hi sath unke business ka main branch Mumbai me tha.
Jis Karan Raj Ko Haridwar se Mumbai aana pada.
Raj ke Mumbai aane ke baad Neha bhi Raj ke sath usi ke banglo mein settle Ho gayi.
Abhi kuchh dinon pahle hi A.R institute ko America and England se kuchh business proposal Aaye the.
Jis Karan Neha other country Me bhi Apne company ka branch kholne ke bare mein Soch rahi thi.
Aur iske liye Raj se baat karne wali thi.

In P.R Bonsel company
Meeting hall
Abhi yahan per company ke owner Chacha aur bua, company ke MD Muskan sath hi company ke a kuchh member baithe hue the.

Chacha-humne aaj yah meeting kyo rakhi hai aap sabhi ko pata hai na.

Member's-yes sir ham log khud is baat se pareshan hai.

Chacha-hamare company ki value aur demand market mein din par din girti ja rahi hai.
Muskan kya tum yah bata sakti ho ki iske piche kya reason hai.

Muskan-Yes dad

Bua-Muskan Maine tumhen kitni bar kaha hai.
Office mein dad aur aunty ka prayog mat Kiya Karo.
Office mein tum ham donon Ko sir aur mam kha Kar Hi bulao

Muskan-yes mam

Bua-tum kuchh bata rahi thi

Iske bad Muskan be meeting hall ke light off karva kar projector on kar diya.
Fir is vishay per lecture dena shuru ki.

(Writer-Kitna English bolati hai.
Mujhe To kuchh samajh hi nahin a Raha hai.
Bus itna samajh ja raha hai ki A.R institute Ne unke sath koi Dil cancel kar di hai.
Jiske Karan use nuksan hua Aur din per din A.R institute ke tarkki hone ke Karan P.R Bonsel company ko aur nuksan ka samna karna pada .
Chaliye ab Muskan ka lecture khatm ho gaya hai story ki taraf chalte Hain)

Uncle-maine bhi suna hai ki A.R institute India ki number 1 company ban gai hai.
Otherwise unhone kis region per hamare company Se deal cancel ki.

Member 1- sir Bina Kisi reason ke Hi deal cancel kar diye.
Aur kuchh ulte-sidhe reason likh diye.

Bua-ek kam karo A.R institute ke owner ke sath hamare meeting fix karvao.
Kisi bhi kimat par.

Member 2-ok mam

Uncle-abhi ke liye yah meeting khatm hoti hai.
A.R institute ke sath hamari batchit hone ke baad ho sake to dubara meeting bulai jaaye

Members-yes sir

P.R Bonsel company Se A.R institute ko jyada kuchh profit Nahin ho raha tha.
Jis Karan Neha ne kuch simple reason dekar unke sath deal cancel kar liya tha.

Chaliye ek najar Viraj per bhi Dal Lete Hain

Aap log shayad Viraj ko bhul gaye honge Chaliye Uske bare me thoda bata dete Hu.
yah vah hi hai jo 10 sal ki umra se Himalaya per 8 sal practis Kiya,
Aur kisi se badla lene ke liye nikal Para.
Viraj kuchh mahinon se London mein hi hai.
Viraj jab London aaya tha tab usne apna face change kar liya.
Sath hi usne apna 1 clone Ko bhi banaya jiska naam usne Virat rakha.
Virat bhi Viraj ke original face me nahin tha.
Lekin Uske pass Viraj ki kuchh powers thi

Chaliye ab Raj ki taraf chalte Hai.
Raj Haridwar se Mumbai aane ke baad vahan ke sabse bade college R. State college mein admission le liya.
Neha Raj Ko bar-bar business join karne ke liye kahati lekin Raj Har Bar mana kar deta tha.
Jab Neha Ko pata Chala ki P.R Bonsel company unke Sath meeting karna chahti hai to usne Raj se baat karne ka faisla Kiya.

In dinner time

Neha- Raj cal office mein ek important meeting hai tumhen us meeting me shamil hona hai

Raj-Maine tumhen kitni bar Kaha ki yeah chote mote kam tum khud Hi Dekh lo.
Otherwise kis company ke sath meeting hai

Neha-P.R Bonsel company

Jab Raj Ko pata Chala Ki meeting Uske uncle ke company ke sath tab

Raj-ok kal kitne baje jaana hoga

Neha-10:am mein ham log niklenge 10:30am se meeting start hai

Raj-ok

Chaliye ab thoda A&A ki jhalak bhi dekh Lete Hain
London
In dinner time
Papa Maa Ansh and Anshu dinner karne ke liye baithe hue aur unke bich kuchh bahas ho rahi thi.

Ansh-papa ab main baccha Nahin Raha main 16 sal ka ho gaya

Papa-to kya main tum donon ko akele vahan bhej du.

Ansh-papa humne kitni bar kaha ki ham akele Nahin jaenge.
Ham aap logon ke sath jaenge

Papa-abhi mujhe yahan bahut kam hai.
Vaise bhi India mein apna koi business Nahin Hai vahan jaane ka koi fayda hi Nahin

Papa-Ab tum Hi Apne bacchon Ko samjhao

Maa-tum donon Ko kitni bar Kaha gaya hai ki India jaane ka bhoot Apne dimag se nikal do

Anshu-lekin maa

Papa-main ka diya matlab kah diy.
Aaj ke bad iis ghar mein India ka naam koi Nahin lega.

A&A- ok papa

Iske bad sabhi Apne Apne room mein chale jaate Hain

Ansh-dekhna chhoti ek din mein India jakar rahunga

Anshu-bhaiya mujhe bhi Apne Sath le jaaoge na

Ansh-tumhare Bina main kahin ja sakta hun kya.

In India
A.R institute

Abhi Muskan company ke andar gayi thi ki bus ki takkar Neha Se Ho jaati hai

Neha-Muskan long time no see

Muskan-what a present surprise Neha.
Maine ummid bhi Nahin Ki thi Ki tum yahan hogi.

Tabhi Neha Ke piche se Raj bolata hai

Raj-yah kaun Hai Neha

Neha- ye P.R Bonsel company ki MD hai

Raj-ok

Meeting me sabhi Ko yah baat sunkar surprise laga ki
Neha A.R institute company ki MD hai.
Raj ne P.R Bonsel company company ke sath deal final kar li aur Baki ka sara process Neha ko dekhne ke liye kha kar Chala Gaya.

Otherwise main To yah batana hi bhul gaya ki iss 1 sal mein Neha ko yah realise hua Ki vah Raj Se pyar Karne lagi Hai
(main story ko romantic Nahin banana chahta hu
mujhe romantic story likhane bhi nahin aati hai
jis Karan story me na ke barabar romantic scene honge)

Abhi ke liye itna hi
 
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In Night

Neha Apne kamre mein baithi.
Aaj ke meeting ke bare mein Soch rahi thi.

Flashback
In Meeting

P.R Bonsel company ke sabhi member meeting hall me baithe hue the.
Tabhi vahan per Raj Neha aur A.R institute company ka manager aata Hai aur apni apni seat per baith jaate Hain

Raj-good morning all of you.
Mera naam Raj hai aur mai A.R institute company ka owner hun
Aaj ke meeting me mere company ke taraf se company ke MD miss Neha charcha karegi

P.R Bonsel company ke sabhi member ko yah sunkar socked laga ki
Neha A.R institute company ki MD hai.

Uncle-aapse milkar Khushi hui Mr Raj
Mere company ki taraf se company ki MD Miss Muskan charcha karegi.

Muskan-good morning all of you.
Aaj ke meeting ka main Karan A.R institute and P.R Bonsel company ke bich ke business Deal cancel hone par
And kuchh new business ke bich ki charcha per hai

Muskan-mai A.R institute ke MD se puchna Chahti Hai ki
Kis reason per unhone hamare bich ke business deal Ko cancel Kiya.

Neha- Kuch samay se P.R Bonsel company ke dwara hamari company ko koi profit Nahin ho raha tha.
Sath Hi P.R Bonsel company nuksan mein chal rahi thi jis Karan humne deal cancel Kiya.

Muskan-miss Neha aapko pata Hona chahiye ki sabhi company ka samay 19-20 hote rehte Hi.
Iska matlab yah Nahin Hai ki aap deal cancel Kar de.
Otherwise mai kuchh aur program/deal ke bare mein charcha karne ke liye yahan Aai Hu
Iske baad Muskan meeting hall ka light off karva deti hai
Aur projector on kar kuchh project ke bare mein batane lagti Hai
Jaise hi projector hota Hai Raj kahta Hi.

Raj-Neha mujhe yah project bahut pasand aaya.
Tum is project per P.R Bonsel company ke sath deal Karo aur kal Tak mujhe report do.

Aaj pahli baar Raj ne office me khud decision liya tha.
Jis Karan Neha kuch nahin pati hai aur P.R Bonsel company ke sath us project per deal Kar deti hai.
Flashback end

Neha-aaj Raj ko achanak kya ho gaya tha.
Jo usne itna bada business deal Bina kisi se discuss kiye Hi confirm kar diya.

Chaliye ab kahani ki taraf aage badhate hain

2 saal baad
In 2 saal mein bahut kuchh ho gaya tha.
Neha ne Raj Ko propose kar diya tha aur kuchh samay baad raj ne bhi accept kar liya
Kyunki Raj bhi Neha Se pyar Karne laga tha.
Vahi dusri Taraf
Viraj London ke top businessman me number 2 position per pahunch gaya tha
Aur kuchh hi dinon baad ek deal hona tha Jo uski company ko milte Hi vah number 1 position per pahunch jata.
Vahin papa ke business ka sabse bada enemy viraj tha
Kyunki vah kuchh samay baad unki company ko number 1 position se hata kar khud number 1 position per pahunch sakta tha.

Aaj Anshu aur Ansh ka 18th birthday tha.
Jis karan Papa ne bahut badi party rakhi thi
Aur London ke sabhi bade aadmiyon ko invite kiya tha.
Unhone is party mein Viraj ko bhi invite kiya tha
Kyunki unhen usse kuchh baat karni thi.

In party
London ke sabhi bade bade hasti is party me shamil ho rahe the
Aur papa khud unka swagat kar rahe the
Tabhi vahan per Viraj ki entry hoti hai.
Jisko lekar papa ek Taraf jaate Hain aur usse kuchh baat karne lagte Hain.

Papa- Welcome Viraj for this party

Viraj-Thanks Mr Bansal and
Aapane mujhe yahan Bina Kisi reason ke bulaya Nahin hoga.
To aap mujhe bataiye ki mujhe yahan bulane ka kya Karan hai.

Papa-Chaliye mai sidhe point per hi aata hu.
Mujhe information Mili Hai Ki tum "Ansoliya company" ke sath kuchh deal karne wale ho.
Aur mujhe vah deal Kisi bhi kimat per chahiye.

Viraj- sorry Mr Bansal lekin vah deal to main hi lekar rahunga.
Aakhir Uske bad main London ka top 1 businessman ban jaunga.

Papa- Tum ek bar mere baat per jarur sochana
Tum is deal Ke badle mujhse kuchh bhi mang sakte ho
kuchh bhi

Viraj-theek hai Mr Bansal
Agar time mila to mai jarur aapke baton per dhyan dunga.

Abhi yah donon baat kar hi rahe the ki pure Party hall light band ho jata hai
Aur achanak sidhiyo per light focus hota Hai
Jahan se Anshu and Ansh ekadam Hero aur heroine ke mafik niche aa rahe the.
Party ke sabhi naujawanon ko ine donon se jalan ho rahi thi
Ladkon ko Ansh se ladkiyon ko Anshu se
Tabhi achanak Viraj ki najar in dono per jaati Hai
Aur uski Dil Ki dhadkan badh jati Hai.

Thode hi der ke baad A&A ke Ke samne pahunch jaate Hain fir pure party hall me light a jaati Hai.
Thodi hi der ke baad A&A cake ko khate Hain
Fir sabhi mehman un dono ko gift dete hai jisme Viraj bhi shamil tha
Ant mein papa kahte hai

Papa-aaj main bahut khush hun batao Tum donon Ko kya chahie.

A&A-papa hamara tu hamesha se yah ichcha ki ham donon India jaaye

Yah baat sunkar papa ko bahut gussa aata Hai
Lekin vah party ka mahaul bigadna Nahin chahte the
Iske bad papa kahate Hain

Papa-main tum donon ke India jane ke bare mein sochunga.

Dheere-dheere party khatam hone lagti Hai
Aur sabhi mehman Apne-Apne Ghar Ko jaane lagte Hai
Lekin Viraj party ke ek side abhi tak ruka hua tha
Jis Ke upar papa Ka dhyan jata hai aur vah Viraj ke pass jaate Hain aur kahate Hain

Papa-kya baat hai abhi tak tum yahan per ruke hue Ho

Viraj-Mr Bansal maine aapki baton par bahut socha
Uske baad maine decision liya Ki main main "Ansoliya company" ke sath deal Nahin karunga
Lekin Uske badle mujhe vah chahiye

Papa-kya chahie

Iske baad Viraj Anshu ki taraf ungali kar deta hai
Jab papa ko uski baat samajh aati hai
Tab unhen bahut gussa aata hai
Fir vah kahate Hain

Papa- Mai iske bare mein Soch kar aapko kal bata dunga
Jiske baad Viraj Apne Ghar Chala jata Hai
Aur papa Maa ko lekar kamre mein jaate Hai

Papa-tumhen aaj hi Ansh aur Anshu ke sath India jana hoga.

Maa-lekin ham to use India bhejne wale Nahin the.
To Fir ab India kyon bhej rahe hain

Papa-Viraj ki najar Anshu per aa gaya hai.
Aur Viraj ka sambandh underworld don Virat ke sath hai
Jis Karan ham to kya
London koi bhi insan uska kuchh Nahin bigaad Sakta.

Papa-tum abhi hi un donon Ko lekar Mumbai Chali jao
un donon Ko kuchh pata nahin Jana chahiye.
Vahan per uska admission karwa dena

Maa-theek hai jaisa aap kahen.

Raaton-Raat Hi maa aur A&A London se Mumbai pahuch jaate Hain.
Vahi A&A iss baat se bahut khush hai ki vah India ja rahe hai
Lekin achanak yah baat use samajh nahin aa rahi thi.

Mumbai airport per pahunch kar maa ek taxi ko book karti hai
Aur apne ghar ki taraf jaati Hai
Papa ne shahar Ke side area mei ek Ghar banvaya tha
Bhavishya me jarurat padne ke liye
Aur aaj vah kaam a raha hai
Abhi yah log kuchh dur hi gaye the ki achanak taxi kharab ho jaati Hai
Jis Karan mom ko bahut gussa aata Hai

Mom-jakar Kisi gadi ko rokiye mujhe jaldi Ghar Jana Hai

Taxiwala-ji memsahab

Iske bad taxiwala ek Car ko rukvata Hai
Fir teenon usme baith jaate Hain.
Yah gadi Neha ka tha aur vah abhi Office ja rahi thi.

Thodi der me Ghar aa jata hai
phir mom aur A&A car se utarkar kar Ghar chale jaate hain
Aur Neha office
Lekin raste raste mein Neha and A&A ke bich Jaan pahchan Ho jaati Hai.

Abhi ke liye itna hi
 

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